I think Noah is acting out for attention, even though he's 22 years old he wants to feel as though he matters. I really do think that Nick only sees Siri as a very close friend or as a little sister. Now Jennifer wanting to have sex in Noah's mother house is very disrespectful, they are engage not married yet. I like the fact that Jennifer wasn't mean toward Siri. Noah and Jennifer scene from the bathroom was Hot! but not in your parents house Noah. I also believe that Noah is jealous of Nick and his relationship with their parents, so he acts out for attention and Nick doesn't give his parents any trouble. Girl I have triplets they are 16 they will be 17 in May and they have (3) different personalities and I love it. Noah was wrong for kissing Siri on the dance floor, he knew that she thought he was Nick and Siri needs to stop all that drinking because she's a light weight. This story is about to get juicier!! Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 04:02 pm
This is getting so good. I m like say what...
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 02:38 pm
I don't like Noah, stake your claim to to Siri'so heart Nik!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 09:25 am
Dan he taken lol
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 06:21 am
Aren't women considered the opposite sex...so it's redundant to say "she was unlike any other woman he'd know from the opposite sex"...just sayin'...
Author's Response: I get what your saying but at the time it flowed with the sentence so i left it. as i said before i don't have a beta, and it was written awhile ago, that's a sentence that i hadn't change. thanks for bringing it to my attention Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 05:39 am
Girl... this chapter made me cry, because I know what Siri was feeling. My oldest child was just like Siri, she cried a lot too thinking of her past and the way people treated her. I connected with this child on a deep level, I felt in my heart that I wanted to be this childs mother and my husband and children felt the same way. She needed us, just like Siri needs Paula, Donny, Nick and Noah. Our child is happy now, and Siri will be happy also because Paula is not letting her go. What Noah was witnessing was Siri light and true beauty shining from within. Noah can look but he better not touch until he rectify this situation (Jennifer ) real quick. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: awww I'm sorry it made you cry :( Siri does have issues that she's gotta deal with. she's suddenly getting something she hasn't had. that being a family. And all of them are witnessing the sight of her true beauty. because It's like she is coming into herself step by step, and they are taking notice. Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 04:43 am
I don't trust Noah, I can see him making a play for Siri because he sees how his brother feels about her. Noah is making my spidey sense tingle!!
Author's Response: Your Spidey senses!?? Haha i swear that had me ballin.. Thankk you sooo much. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. who knows how this will goooo......... hehe got the next chapter otw. ;) Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2016 12:53 am
I read this when you had it posted on FictionPress, I'm glad that you decided to repost it here. I'm loving the changes already.
Author's Response: I'm sooo glad that you approve of the changes, because I know the first version i posted like in 2014 was roughh with a Capital R. So i definitely hope that you continue to enjoy the new bits, and know that I appreciate you, and your review. :D Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 10:07 pm
Ruh Roh. Wonder what Noah was thinking. I am simply loving this story. Trying to be patient as I need my fix on the regular. :)
Well done, Chica.
Author's Response: Thanks Sweetie!! I appreciate it! Ya'll give me life, when it comes to my writing. An I won't keep you guys waiting since, I myself know how it is to have withdraws when it comes to a good story!! So I got you :D Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 08:13 pm
Mr. Noah is trying to play hard but I bet he's a pussy cat. I like how Siri put him in his place. I feel some underline tension between Nick and Noah. I love their mother, she's a woman after my own heart. I love playing board games my children tried to teach me to play those video games, I don't have the patience for it. Girl.. Pinterest is my guilty pleasure I get a lot of my home decor from them. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Lmao yeah, I bet he felt like a pussy cat, after Siri lit into his ass ;) I love Paula as well she is such a sweetheart <3 i love video games, but i also have a huge collection of board games i enjoy playing with my family, nothing is better than that. And i'm not going to lie, i think im obsessed with pinterest, lol it's like in my top 5 fav, sites. Theres alot of decor ideas around my place from it too!! Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 06:44 pm
Well, I wasn't expecting that. Very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm very happy you enjoyed it :) I got more coming!!
Date: March 11 2016 11:59 am
Post away..... please.
Author's Response: I'm gonna! Hehe I'm happy you enjoyed it Reviewer: iliketoread Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 08:52 am
Oh my. I'd like to be a part of a Nick and Noah sammich. I don't care how much of an ogre that Noah seems to be. :)
Author's Response: Haha he is a ogre!! But a hot one.. Gonna add a banner pretty soon. Just gotta figure out how. I'm happy you enjoyed it tho. Thank you Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 05:25 am
Please continue!! I Nickolas is a dream but Noah is the nightmare.
Author's Response: Lmao yes I love them both tho, each has there special ways., thank you for reading and reviewing.. Got the next chapter On my way. Already typed up , just gotta upload. Again thanks for enjoying Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 04:36 am
Wow I can't wait til the next update!!!
Author's Response: Your wait won't be long, next chapter otw!!! I'm really happy you enjoyed the story so far, I appreciate the review its got me cheezin. So thank you Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 04:08 am
What was the name of this on Fiction Press/
Author's Response: It's also called same love on there as well. Just under my other username Buckyj I've also revised those chapters Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 03:06 am
Love it. Please continue
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it sooo much. Go the next chapter ready just gotta upload :) Reviewer: bling1426 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 01:59 am
More, please! One sees her as a sister and the other is nasty and a bad azz---guess which one she is going to be really attracted to?
Author's Response: Whoo knowwss who she will choose ;) thank you for your review, and I hope that you enjoyed the read... Next chapters are gonna be uploaded today Reviewer: Penelope Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 01:32 am
I really enjoyed the first chapter of this story. Girl... every room inside my house is painted in warm fall colors like Orange( pumpkin ) Sage, Brown, sunset yellow, Red and my quiet room is Magenta. I love the way Nick treats Siri, and girl I'm a hugger too. Please continue with this story I'm already invested in it.
Author's Response: Lol, yeah I really love warm colors my place is done in chocolate brown and purple, blues and beiges. I'm also real big on affection, and I enjoyed making my characters the same way haha. Thank you for the awesome review, i appreciate you. I got the next 4 chapters complete just gotta upload today. Stay tuned :) Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 11 2016 12:15 am
OMG!!! I remember this story I read it a long time ago. It was the best, that's all I'll say. I'm glad you are going to finish it. Noah made me so sick, but I couldn't believe how clueless Nick was to Siri.
Author's Response: Thank youuu... I did start this story in like 2014, and it got overshadowed by my other story the winter of temptation posted on literiotica. (Yes, for some reason I love to write stories that take place during the winter for some reason.) lmao but I did go back into this story and I changed a few bits, I hope you continue to enjoy...and stay tuned. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 10 2016 11:57 pm