Reviews For Dark Paradise
Title: Chapter 6

i loved it

Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2017 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 6

Um... So what ever happened to his mother, or did I read over that? Well this was short and nice.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Brilliant.  And if some day your muse taps you on the  shoulder and whispers "About Vera and Nicky...", listen.

You have made my day.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Awww, don't leave us hanging.  I sooo want to know what happens next. Even if it is 2 more chapters.   Pleasea86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039;

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 6

This was a great ending to a great story. I'm relieved that Adriano had nothing to do with Vera losing their baby, he just didn't seem the type. So Nick's mother was trying to dictate his life for birth to adulthood, didn't she know her child would not stand for that. Italian men are very protective of their women and children, being Italian she should have known Nick was coming for her and all her cohorts. I would like to read a part 2 of this saga. Thanks for a wonderful story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 08:09 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad you are back.  I have missed your stories.  This short was fantastic.  I would like an epilogue or a continuation because there are still some unanswered questions.  What happened to Nicky"s mother and from the story it is implied that they have a bad relationship.  Though Cyrus accepted Nicky, what does he really think of him and Adriano? And what happened to Anthony Rotolo and Samuel Bosci for killing William and taking their life savings; will Vera get revenge on them as well?  I can't wait for your next story.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Supreb!!! Would love to read part 2 of this story. Also when will you published Penny with a hole. Thank you Bain

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 04:57 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Hi there,

I just finished.  Even if you don't continue Vera & Nicholas, how about an epi.  There was no S - E - X.  (lol)

Thanks again for the reading pleasure. 

I think your "shakiness" is smoothing out.  Again, welcome back.

I really, really look forward to reading more of your words.

Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 02:08 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Girl,

I've been lurking here lately with not a lot to say. 

You are one of a few Master of Words that can make me leave the lurking status.

BRAVO!  BRAVO!  Once again, you have me drawn in.  Thanks for returning!!

Luv it.

Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Giiiirrrrrlllllll..........you layed me out with this one.  The emotion.  The drama. The..... EVERYTHING! I love your stories.  Adore!

 

Thank you!

 

~EJ~

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story! I liked how we got some background information on the characters and how you kept pulling us in with each chapter. I vote yes for a part 2! 

Reviewer: Nana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 12:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

How you going to leave me hanging like that. They terrorized her and her life to keep her and Nicky apart. They killed William to make her suffer but didn't that just bring Nicky and Vera together? What happened with Nicky's mother? You left me with so many questions.... But I enjoyed this story.



Author's Response:

LoL. response like this has me toying with the idea of a part two . . .

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Excellent story.   Thank you.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 08:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I loved this story!!!!!!!  Vera and Nick, I'm glad they made it back to each other especially after all the uphevials they had to go through.  I really thought Cyrus was Nicky.  Can't wait to read another one of your reads.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Man the attraction between these two is HOTT!!, but there's always someone blocking though. Thanks for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 06:49 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I wonder who was the woman and man that assaulted her and made her lose their baby? I hope it wasn't Adriano, because he doesn't seem the type. Girl... your Italian is on point!!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 06:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I love how protective of his mother Cyrus is, every son should be that way. I think Nick will be good for Vera and Cyrus, because it seems as though he is not going anywhere any time soon. Wow! she just blurted out that she was pregnant ( was?), is Cyrus nick's son.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 06:32 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Why do I get the feeling that Nicholas father is behind every thing that is happen to Vee. Good thing someone was there when that punk tried to rape her. Nicholas is not about to let Vee go this time.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This is good!! I wonder if Eddie killed William since he has a strong hate for black people. I feel for poor Cyrus he's thinking he has to take care of his mother, because his father is no longer able to.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 5

MORE!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 5

I had passed this story by several times and finally read it today.  It is good and fast-paced--excellent writing, and I like that the characters are fleshed out.  Looking forward to more, even if it is the last Chapter.

I wonder if he realizes his father had her beaten so that she could lose their baby--he was the only one that would give that kind of order?

Why is his friend Adriano so familiar to her?  

Did Vera and Nick hook up after she lost the baby and if yes, could Cy be Nick's?

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Would love to dig deeper with these characters. I also really like the storyline. Great job!

Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 5

What are you doing to me?!?!?!?!? Ahhhh! This story just keeps cutting better.  And the freaking cliffhangers!!!!  My heart.  I can't take it!!!!

Can I have Nicky?  Pretty, pretty please???

 

~EJ~

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 5

ooh lots going on, im hooked!

Reviewer: femmedlx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 5

Pure Magic!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 03:12 am



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