I'm really enjoying this story, when can we expect an update?
Reviewer: Faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2016 09:39 pm
I have a friend who wass in a very similar situation, and she also gave up her baby. I cried all over again for Mina, but my hope that out of this will become a much stronger, more secure in herself person.
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2016 11:20 pm
This was an intense chapter and Blake is one entailed douchebag. he thinks he owns Reid like Reid is not allowed to have anyone else in his life but him. I hate to say this but Mina was niave but she didn't deserve what Blake did to her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2016 12:07 pm
This is crazy, all I could say was OOOOOOHHHHHMMMMYYYYGGGGGAAAAWWWWDDDD!!! Blake is so cocky to be smiling at her when she walks by him. I wish she would tell but she doesn't want to rock the boat between Reid and Blake but the boat has already been rocked. I didn't expect a pregnancy but I am up in the air if she should keep the baby or adoption??? I can't wait until she sees Reid after 10 years and what she is going to say!!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2016 09:24 pm
I hoped she pressed charges against Blake for rape. I also hoped she bit his pecker off!! or crushed his balls!!. Blake acted like he had some romantic feelings for Reid, acting like a little m*tch!. I also hoped she didn't get pregnant by this Monster!!. Great new story MP, I'm along for this ride.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2016 02:50 pm
This asshat. Really, it is a party that you will be too drunk to realize he is even there. You assault this young girl, really. OMG, can I Lorena Bobbit his ass. This is just going to cause her to shy away even more. Ugh, I'mma need some serious karma to happen here.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2016 09:21 pm
Blake has an unhealthy attachment to Reid. What in the blue blazing hell is wrong with this subhuman fool? How many other women has he done this to?
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2016 07:57 pm
Omg what a douchebag, and if he does that...im getting upset. Just because your bro can't go to the party your going to steal her innocence away from her? What a joke and a scumbag! Im still reading it though.
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2016 05:11 am
Blake is complete douchebag!
Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2016 03:38 am
Oh hell nah!!! He's just terrible. I can't wait to see what you have cooking.
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2016 02:55 am
Hope that your hiatus will be fruitful. I can't wait for the next update. It better be full of DRAMA and DRAIN everyone's soul. :D
I want to see tears, sweat and blood. Yeah I'm weird :/ 😳
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 10:18 pm
Love your stories can't wait to read next chapter
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 09:32 pm
So different and outside the box. I love it. Update soon please!!!
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 07:05 pm
So Blake's a sex offender in the making? Reid save Mina and beat Blake like Ali beat Liston!
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 04:20 pm
Can't wait for the update!! I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat.
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 01:01 pm
Oh my gosh noooooo! Someone stop that monster ! I can't take the cliff! Please update soon... Side note, you have such original characters and story plots. Love it. Always something different to read.
Reviewer: jael3205 Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 05:43 am
I really hope to see this story more I really love it!
Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 03:44 am
That rat Bastard. Oh I can't wait until he gets his.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 01:21 am
"And then Blake got shot in the head."
That better be Chapter Two.
Date: July 24 2016 12:38 am
oh God dont leave us hanging. I CANT WAIT
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2016 11:54 pm
Damn I hope she kicks him in the balls and runs as far as possible. I'm already hooked. Great story, I can already tell.
Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2016 10:25 pm
No lady, you can(t do that
You start all those great stories with such a backgroud, a plot, historical, psychological facts
You makes us crave , cringe, yelle, yearn for your chapters and then nothing !!!
Please, fight the writer's block and update if you can
You're such a great writter, alsao setting the scenario and plot so easily
I'm hooked
Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2016 08:42 pm