Nicely done
Author's Response:
Thank you Minxie!
Reviewer: minxie Signed
[Report This]Date: February 02 2017 09:30 pm
Nicole broke up wth Domnic yes. Stone needs to mind his damn busiiness and allow Layla and Dominic to love one another. Dominic had notnhing to do with downward spiral into drug addiction. His love could give her strenght.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 02 2017 03:35 am
Layla opened up to Dominic. I really wish that he would break up with Nicole.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 02 2017 03:27 am
Stone is sexy af! He definitely needs a chocolate lady in his life. *hint hint*
The ending was not surprising. Knew Dom couldn't stay way lol.. I hope Nicole doesn't find out about them or even if she does, her relationship with Layla wouldn't change .
Author's Response:
AmmaWem,
Don't worry, Stone will have his own story. I;m glad that you seem to be enjoying the story.
Maya
Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed [Report This]Date: February 02 2017 01:17 am
My heart hurts for stone 😭😭😭😭😭 I really want to find the women he loves 😭😭😭 I LOVE YOU STONE BABY!!
well that was a little embarrassing 😳😂
omgggg I'm so happy for Layla! Her art work must be amazing and I'm so glad stone and Dom were there. Fml that last scene though.... He couldn't stay away from her!! Hahahaha I loved it so much! But shit man... I hope this doesn't ruin her chances with her art work. Nicole is a really lovely character and I don't wish any harm on her. Dom just wasn't for her. It'll always be Layla and I'm glad she found out now (that he loves another) because it would be 28382828 times worse if they were married and had kids.
CANNNNNOOOOTTT WAIT FOR MOREEEE. OBSESSED
IF THATS EVEN HOW YOU SPELL IT LMAO
YOU DA BEST.
STONE NEEDS SOME CHOCOLATE.
Author's Response:
Gordana,
You're awesome! I hope you keep being obssesd with this story. There is still so much more to come.
-Maya
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: February 02 2017 12:28 am
So happy to see Laylah has a successful showing with her art. I sure hope she's careful with Dom. Also, that incident with Jerry was a bit creepy. I hope there's nothing to that. Just be careful girl! 😳👀
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2017 05:00 am
Oh my god....is it bad that i've been waiting for this since the beginning of the story? anyways, this was really good. I was not expecting that ending. I can not wait for the next update :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha no its' not bad at all. I hope I didn't disappoint.
-Maya.
Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2017 03:43 am
Ok, I know you can't stop it here. But DAMN I'm so loving them. And I scared because I know they are going to have to fight so hard to keep this. I know Stone has his own story like who the feel in love with and can't have. I just don't trust those buyers. Please keep up the great work!!!
Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 01 2017 12:16 am
Hey, I too do understand that Dom and LaLa, arent exactly who they use to be, and I see that they both get that too. It is almost like any new relationship, having to get to know that person all over again. However, they are very much willing because they believe(trust was too strong a word, not sure) in each other.
So sorry for Nicole, so proud that you choose not to make her 'evil', hurt yes, totally get it; and by the way, do you really know how far you would go if someone you love, kept making promises, and tagging you along in their world and then suddenly drop you, especially when you have been asking them over and over if they are sure of the 'us' factor. Everyone has done things not proud of, even the hero, whether as 20, 30, 40, 50 years old.
Reviewer: Kris Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 31 2017 06:58 pm
Oh please, I am here to enjoy the fullness of Layla and Dominic, and not get drawn into, poor little rich kid, Stone, please. If there was any hint of ' magic' between them, she would have held onto it in a special place, but obviously not; Stone isnt the one.
As for Dominci I can't wait to see how 'dangerous' he is in and out of bed, especially when it comes to anyone separating them again. Let others try, let them go through thier battles, but let it be noted DL4L, 😙
Reviewer: Kris Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 31 2017 06:46 pm
OMGGGGG HE ACTUALLY TOLD HER THAT HE LOVES SOMEONE ELSE OMGGGGG
DAMNNNNN THAT WAS GOOD. AMAZINGLY GOOD.
I FEEL FOR NICOLE I DO. I WOULD BE FUCKEN HURT TO BE IN HER POSITION. SO HER ANGER TOWARDS HIM IS RIGHT.
...BUT YOU CANT BLAME DOM FOR HIS FEELINGS, IM REALLY HAPPY HE DIDNT LIE.
FUCKENNNNN HELLLL STONEEEEE I LOVEEEE YOUUUUU AND I WANT TO KNOW THE WOMANNNNNN YOU IS IN LOVEEEEE WITH. IM DEAD. YOURE TOO AMAZING.
JESUS TAKE THE WHEEL.
I CAN DIE HAPPY. OMGGGGGGG I FUCKEN LOVED THIS. OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY. THANK YOU THANK YOU
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2017 02:11 pm
I don't know what it is but there is something about Dominic that I don't really like. I can't put my finger on it yet but he's rubbing me the wrong way! 🤔🤔 this is a great story.
Author's Response:
Crimson,
In most romance novels the main man is easy to fall for, because we want to love him even with his faults. Such as in Christian Grey in 50 Shades of Grey. But Dominic seemed to have a perfect life before running into Layla again. And because it's is just not so easy to hate Nicole the reader almost wants to hate Dominic. But we have to see things from his view. Layla has always been apart of him that he just tired very hard to hide. He lost apart of him when she ran away. Stone of course seems perfect for Layla, but as he knows two addicts never do well together.
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2017 04:56 am
Wow, I don't know what to say about this chapter. Each section was good. It showed their honest emotions and how grey a lot of areas are when it comes to relationships. I'm curious about these two men getting out the car and I think both Stone and Dom are going to be needed for her to survive everything heading her way.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. There are a lot of grey areas here. I could have made things so simple for Dominic to leave. Nicole but that's not what I wanted. Often times the person you thought you loved isn't just a raging bitch. Lol Nicole is a good woman who fell for a man who's heart had already been taken.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: January 26 2017 02:56 am
I feel bad for Nicole, but she's not oblivious, she knew something was wrong and needed to get out of that situation and be able to find someone who loves her as much as Dominic and Layla love each other. I just do not want her to find out that Dominic is leaving her for Layla because the way she talked about that coworker of Dominic's means that the woman who he left Nicole for is going to feel her scorn as well. I love how Stone is defending Layla and threatening Dominic because she needs someone in her corner that does not see her from a past perspective, who has seen her at her worst and knows the triggers of an addict, but is able to hold Layla accountable to her sobriety.
Author's Response:
Dcphoenix1,
You are spot on with Nicole and how the story is following so far. I hope you can continue to enjoy it as there's so much more to come.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2017 08:53 pm
Truly enjoying this story. I'm checking everyday for an update like a fiend.
Author's Response:
Thanks LadyeT. I'm happy to know you can't get enough of this story. Chapter 6 is up and ready for you to get your fix. 😏😊
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: January 24 2017 03:49 pm
I'm slipping because I didn't even see this was updated. I am so happy Layla shared her story and honestly it isn't as bad as I feared. I think Layla still is selling herself short and may need additional counseling outside of group because she never had any self esteem based on her upbringing in the prologue. I also feel like she has to fight FOR Dominic. He seems to always being the one to fight while she flees and it's only so long someone is willing to fight by themselves for a relationship. Eventually she is going to have to show him she is willing to fight for their happiness. I honestly don't know if I would leave Nicole because at least I know she wants me compared to Layla. I don't mean the past, I mean now. What will Layla do if he comes back after processing it and says he wants her over Nicole? Hmmm.
Author's Response:
Lajack1,
As things go on, we will see a lot more fight from Layla. But some big problems are ahead. Hold on for the ride.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 24 2017 03:27 am
Can't wait to see how things goes down at dinner. Love it so far!!!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2017 09:27 pm
Things are about to get twisted even ore than they are now.
She knows the guy is getting out of prison soon and will be looking for her but she knows how to hide...isn't she about to become well known for her artwork? Pictures will be taken at the event and she will be found by everybody.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2017 05:13 am
I so love this story. (crying now), I so glad she told her everythiing and didn't leave anything out.. She is stronger then she thinks. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Tracy21,
Thank you so much for enjoying this story. I'm glad that you were able to pick up emotion because I really wanted to make sure I convey her past. There is so much more to come!
-Maya
Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 22 2017 01:07 pm
MY HEART. WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH 😭😭😭😭😭 LAYLA YOU IS STRONG YOU IS KIND YOU IS IMPORTANT! AND DOM LOVES YOU WAHHHHH! That was a lot to take in and she has come a long way from where she was. Whenever he kissed or just touched her, it was so beautiful and natural, as if he's been doing it forever. She has so much doubt in herself that I hope she's 100% wrong and he doesn't let her down. ahhhh there's so much going on.
STONE AND DOM WILL BOTH BE IN THE SAME ROOM WITH EACH OTHER. I LOVE IT. OMGGGGGGGGG. THIS WILL POSSIBLY BE THE MOST ANTICIPATED CHAPTER RIGHT NOW LMAOOOO Stone deserves someone amazing for himself I mean does Layla have a long lost cousin or something? Hahahahah he should have some chocolateeeee 😂😂😂😂 jokes jokes! (But really)
i know stone and Layla will never be rid of each other because they've actually helped each other a lot through their friendship. By Layla not going down that road with him, she's helping him and showing him how much his friendship means to her. I love stone so much and I can't wait to see how they act around each other.
LOVEEEEEEEED IT SO MUCH YOU ARE AWESOME!!!! SOOOOOO HAPPY TO SEE THIS AND FREAKEN REREAD IT STRAIGHT AWAY HAHAHAHAHA LOVE LOVE LOVE THANK YOU
Author's Response:
Gordana,
As always your views are wonderful to read. I can't tell you how much I appericiate how well you connect with the chractrs and what they're going through. There is still so much to ocme and we've only finished chapter 5. :)
-Maya
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2017 08:57 am
I really like this story, it sad and Layla and Dominic deserve a happy ending.
You are developing the back story with good detail.
Layla been through hell and some how she has survived. Looking forward to to the next chapter. Stone and Dominic meeting should be interesting
Author's Response:
Hopeland,
I totally agree. Its going to be an up hill battle for these two.
-Maya
Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2017 07:44 am
Another wonderful story! Please keep up the good work.
But is it possible to do an update of "200 Days". It's also a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! But Sandra, I'm not the writer of "200 Days"
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 20 2017 11:08 pm
he has got to tell her
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2017 04:21 pm
I HAVE BEEN CHECKING VALENTCHAMBER EVERY DAY (MORE LIKE EVERY COUPLE OF HOURS) JUST TO SEE IF YOU UPDATED. WTFFFF YOU ARE AMAZING. CANT DEAL. MASSIVE FAN MAN MASSIVE.
DOMMMMMM! You almost told Nicole! I wish he did but I know you have plans for that lol. Worst part is knowing that Nicole is the one holding Layla's artistic future in her hands, which makes shit 489229292929 times worse. Nicole isn't a unlikable character and I don't mind that. I just don't want Dom to cheat on her... And Layla has too much on her plate to be his other woman. His heart is hers man it's insane how much emotions you can feel just reading from their perspectives. He is insanely in love and still crazy about her. Unwavering love for her. He knows if Layla said to just marry her he would In a heartbeat.
.... Nicole wants a baby....
.... Oh my goodness...
.... I'm dying to know what happens when they meet again bloody hell.
Im addicted man,
FREAKEN LOVED IT!!!! KEEP UP THE AWESOME FUCKEN WORK!!! WHHOOOO HOOO
Author's Response:
Gordana,
Thank you for such a wonderful review! I'm hopingto have chapter 5 out by the time the weekend if over. :)
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2017 01:38 pm
Ooohhh snap! Wrap it up Dom, wrap it up. He needs to come clean and leave Layla name out of it. Just tell Nicole that someone from the past came back into your life recently and she was your first love. Nicole would never associate him with Layla--never!
Wanting to have a baby when she knows he is having doubts about them, reminds me of something Dr Phil once said 'I hate to see a baby come into this world and already has a job of holding a relationship together'.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2017 06:31 am