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Title: New Ventures

Enjoying the story but I'm annoyed by all the crying especially in public. I guess that's my own personality flaw but all this self deprecation is would drive anyone up a wall so I get why she's highly emotional. I wonder if he wasn't attracted to her would Damien treat Naomi's outburst just like priscillas ? 

 Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2021 12:32 am
Title: It's Bad from a Distance

Great update 

 Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2020 02:42 pm
Title: It's Bad from a Distance

This is a very good story. The tension between Damien and Naomi is intense and going to shatter. I can't wait.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2020 11:29 am
Title: Lying for the Sake of Others

Great update 

 Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2020 08:12 pm
Title: A Reckoning with Old Friends

Great update 

 Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2020 01:48 pm
Title: Zero for 2

This is so good 😀

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2020 07:37 am
Title: No Roots Left Intact

Goodbye sex is bad, especially when the other person doesn't know it's really goodbye.

Damien should not have had sex with her...he knew the woman felt more for him.  

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 12:22 am
Title: New Ventures

Soooo, is it me???? Or is Damien Martin black?  I only ask because I have never heard of a white man wearing a wave cap! 

So I ask another crazy question???? Is Naomi white??? Is this a BMWW story or a BWWM story? I am not sure...that is why I am asking.



Author's Response:

sorry, yes it does seem confusing in the beginning, but both Damien and Naomi are black! i should've made that clearer in the beginning, but a better description of the characters is in chapter 3... i admit that it's a pretty late description, but i didn't catch that i didn't describe them until pretty late lol. i hope you continue reading, though! 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 18 2019 03:19 am
Title: No Roots Left Intact

Thank you for the update. This story seems intriguing. I think, those famous last words or thoughts ('she's not going to be a problem?') is really going to come back and  bite him in the backside. I maybe reading into and analysing the story a bit too much, but I get the feeling Priscilla is going to give him a surprise he's never going to forget. Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned, nor hell a fury like a woman scorned. She took that breakup pretty well...a little too well.
Have a great weekend.



Author's Response:

i've been toying with the idea, but you'll have to wait and see how it all plays out!! thanks for reading, you have a great weekend as well! <333

 Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2019 06:16 pm
Title: New Ventures

Sending you encouragement via the interwebs! I love this!



Author's Response:

thank you, i appreciate it so much!! <33

 Reviewer: Paris Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2019 06:42 pm
Title: New Ventures

Please update! <3



Author's Response:

heard you, my sis!!! <3333

 Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2019 11:55 am


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