Brillant!!!

Elias is growing on me... He's a keeper�Abby's life is about to go from dull to exciting😀 Nice!

Author's Response:

Lol...he knows what he's doing.  Abby doesn't quite know what has hit her!  Thanks for reading!

I love this story. It reminds me of an episode of Criminal Minds that I was always intrigued by (minus the murder of the parents). I will continue to look forward to updates. 

I love it!! I am checking every hour for an update!!! I hope you continue this story becuase your writing is amazing. This is a nice break from all the fluff in most romances. I am rooting for Elias and Abby!!! You have the appropriate warnings and people that are too sensitive about a fictional story should just stay away!! Keep writing and showing your creativity. Everything is not for everbody!!!

i thought the story was cute but it turned dark.. more then anything it’s hard to stomach reading this story. It’s gross and creepy.. nothing attractive about being kidnapped and assaulted. This shouldn’t be marked as a love story.. white men are already crazy fucks. Nothing about this is entertaining and I love your writing style and the way you write it’s amazing but like if ole girl don’t end up killing him and escaping then I don’t see the point. It’s just romanticized Stockholm syndrome.. kidnapping and assault shouldn’t be seen as attractive romantic opportunities because the captor is handsome 😑

This chapter is amazing. Your writing leap from this screen, the chemitry between Abby and Elias is stunning. Elias is one step closer to having Abby heart. Brillant writing!!

Ok ... I had to read this over ! Damn that was good writing  he flip the script now she thinks maybe this situation is not so bad after all  . Heck it sounded good to me too ! Bravo 

Eli is crazy!! She should have kept on going after eating.

Outstanding writing, and I enjoy how you described Abby feeling. Can please have another chapter because I have been stalking this story and re-reading since you post.

This is well written and I had to sleep on my response and I even fought off a mosquito in my dream...heard the buzzing and everything.

I tried to come around to his excessive spanking of her and insisting on her calling him Daddy.  I finally came to the conclusion that I just did not like this Chapter.  He really shoud have taken the cop's advice and explained to Abby on why he said he was keeping her.  He coud have wooed her to his side.  

Then to put her to bed like she was a child after punishing her...came off as creepy perv, and I am sure you were not trying to give us this impression.   

If Abby had any sense, she would roll out of that bed, put pillows under the cover, and get out of that house with her purse.  This is some Stepford Wives country style stuff and I wouldn't trust that woman from the Library, either...if not born there why stick around?   Unless she wants to be one of the lucky ones.

Thus whole town is creepy. 

He did something to Abby 's car.

I wanted to give this story a try, despite the warning 'dubcon', which I always hope is not what I fear it is... And then I am proved wrong. Ugh. I can't see any way this story can turn out other than romanticizing abuse/violence against women/rape. I just can't. I hope I am wrong. Really. But I can't chance it... Bye.