Reviews For Paradise
Title: Chapter 15:Hold Tight, For The Ride

Ooo action, I was not expecting that shootout. Fylth are public figures, so I didn't think they had enemies other than maybe some aggressive fan-girls they could easily handle. This lethal, antagonist element be it singular or a group after them is very intriguing. Great update. Now as a believer in knowledge being power, I am hoping Brittany tells the guys exactly what she witnessed in the club and that Aiden realizes how much of a protection telling Angel everything will be for her. I mean, how was pushing her away from himself because he is a hybrid and into the arms of his brother Jamie, who's a vampire, any safer? He is behaving like a silly pup and frustrating their bond in the process.

Reviewer: Cereal Lurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2021 04:29 pm

Title: Chapter 15:Hold Tight, For The Ride

Nice update

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2021 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 14:Enjoy The Show

Nice

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2020 05:06 pm

Title: Chapter 14:Enjoy The Show

okay, but know i need to know how this develops

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2020 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 12:Trust Issues

I don't understand why she gave Jamie hope, he's gonna be hurt. Your heart loves who it loves.The bedroom scene was double hot! ๐Ÿ”ฅ Nice

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2020 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 12:Trust Issues

Love, all this. Finally he caves. He is going to be so possessive.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2020 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 11:Home Is Vegas

Nice update

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2020 01:17 pm

Title: Chapter 10:Well, Well

I've missed this story. I almost forgot what it was about.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2020 09:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Freaky Friday

I was really enjoying this story! I hope you have plans to update soon๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ

Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2020 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 9:Strangers

Excellent!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2020 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 8:Woman's worth

Excellent!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2020 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 9:Strangers

Claudia is either one of the groupies from the party or the ex.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2020 03:18 pm

Title: Chapter 8:Woman's worth

Nice!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2020 03:34 pm

Title: Chapter 7:Lucid

I like that I haven't had a firm grasp on where this story is headed. Not as easily predictable as I originally thought it would be. Excited for it. 

Reviewer: jael3205 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2020 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 7:Lucid

What have she gotten herself into. Aiden is a piece of work. Love it!!!โ˜บ

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 06:43 pm

Title: Chapter 7:Lucid

EXCELLENT!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 06:19 pm

Title: Chapter 6:Temp me,Tease Me, Trick Me

She dodged a fang๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I like!!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 12:21 pm

Title: Chapter 5:Nice to Meet You

Here ass should have stayed downstairs๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 12:19 pm

Title: Chapter 3:The Party

RUDE!!!!!

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Date: May 27 2020 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Freaky Friday

Great start๐Ÿ˜€

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 12:15 pm

Title: Chapter 2:Meet the Band

Good character development!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2020 12:20 am

Title: Chapter 3:The Party

It's great! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2020 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 3:The Party

I can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Freaky Friday

Great start 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 11:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Freaky Friday

Good start!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 04:55 pm



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