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Title: Chapter 30 The First Date, Part 2

I'm finally caught up,,, and there is going to be some drama coming,

OK David needs to beware of Ms, Gabby, that girl needs meds, she is not going to give up on David; I am glad that he did set her straight,  maybe Larrisa needs to talk to her as well and Larrisa needs to trust David, Oh and I don;t like David's mother and her attidtude Latina women are not the only women that are strong and stand by thier man no matter the race, Maybe she needs to stop being a DOORMAT and let her hubby go if he's always in and out of jail.

As for Lisha, she needs to step back and look at herself she is so distrustful, Reese has never given her a reason to doubt his love for her and IMO she is gpingAnd to push Reese away And stay out of Brian's business what he does is not your issue, and Reese is right, he doens't agree with what is brother does, however he's not going to let you keep bad mouthing him either.

Whew, glad I got that all out LOL.



Author's Response:

Hopefully Gabby gets it through her head and lets the couple be happy. David's mother is experiencing some culture shock. Lets hope she gets over it and accepts Larissa. if you had to guess, how do you think David's father would react to his relationship with Larissa?

Yes Elisha needs to heal, I hope she gets that. Do you still feel like Reese is an undercover player?

Another question, how often would you like me to post chapters? A good portion of the story is already written, but I am still working on it. I dont want to overwhelm you all with too much at once.

Thank you for continuing to read and support me! I greatly appreciate it.

 Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2024 05:20 pm
Title: Chapter 30 The First Date, Part 2

Loved that first date!!

Wait...Miriam?!?!? As in Kendra's mom???



Author's Response:

thank you! im glad you enjoyed it.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2024 02:50 am


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