I am loving this story. I love how she notices that he is attractive, but she is not hooked on his every word. I can not wait for an update.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it, Im not sure if Ill be able to update till tuesday or wednesday, But I may post a new story.
Date: June 01 2009 01:53 am
What a poor looser Melissa is. Cant wait to read more loved the updat
Author's Response: Yes she is, the next update should be up later tonight, working today =(
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 10:47 am
update soon plz!
Author's Response: tomorrow hopefully
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 09:05 am
I am really enjoying the story, keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Im glad you are enjoying it, Ill try
Date: May 31 2009 07:11 am
hmmmm...sounds like Melissa isn't through with this one yet. can't wait to see what develops between grant & Kenya
Author's Response: Nope Melissa will be back..=(
Date: May 31 2009 05:15 am
I'm really liking this! Please continue...
Author's Response: Im glad you like it I will
Date: May 31 2009 03:24 am
This is a great story, I am loving it so far. Update soon
Author's Response: Im glad you like it
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 02:51 am
So Melissa basically hired herself out to be her father's whore...how sick is that...so glad Grant shut her down with a quickness...and she thought she could run with the big dogs...
Melissa is a vengeful, spiteful witch which can only spell trouble for Kenya...watch your back, girl!!!
Grant's mind and senses are so full of Kenya...he can't even think straight...can't wait to see where all this goes...
Looking forward to the next update...
Author's Response: hopefully next update meets your expectations. Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 02:45 am
Woman is crazy. point blank.
Author's Response: lol Amen.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 02:33 am
i like this story. it's cool that you update so soon. melissa is a crazy tramp and poor kenya has to watch her back. i was wondering if you had an editor. it's a good story but some of the mistakes are a little distracting.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it and still looking for an editor thinking of asking my friend but that would mean the updates would be few and far between.
Date: May 31 2009 02:11 am
Grant just made a serious enemy with Melissa. He better keep his eye on her. As for Kenya, if he can't step to her in the correct way, then he needs to leave her alone.
Author's Response: So very true. Reviewer: juno Signed
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 02:05 am
Surprise surprise Melissa was going to try and trap Grant by getting preggers. NOT! Now on to plan B. I see her going out to have sex with someone to get preggers and say it is his. Oh, but Grant did flip the script on her azz by playing her like she thought she was playing him. I don'y feel sorrow for her.
Kenya is going to have to watch her back because Melissa is going to be gunnung for her. I hope Grant look after her because the melissa thing is his problem.
TY for updatind so soon. Please keep spoiling us.
Author's Response:
So true, No problemo Im enjoying writing this story as much as I enjoy the wonderful reviews.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2009 01:36 am
Oh Melissa played herself the idiot. Just because hse was putting out she thought that they were in a relationship and she had planned to get pregnant...hello, NEWS FLASH, white me do not always arry the woman that they get pregnant... Tom Brady anyone. Thanks
Author's Response: lol @ Tom Brady nice one.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 12:41 am
Oh man, interuptus...LOL. Which was probably a good thing. It is clear that she is a good girl and he is so bad...I mean make you want ta holla bad...LOL. Thanks
Author's Response:
lol Im glad you like it.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2009 12:35 am
Ohh...I hope you update soon I'm really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Im glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 11:25 pm
Oh Melissa is a trifflin trick! I like that Grant knew her schemes and was playing her the whole time!!
Loved the update!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2009 10:45 pm
A kiss would have been nice, but the drama created from it was worth it. That Melissa is crazy and I can tell this will not be her last appearance.
Author's Response: lol You are very right, women like Melissa dont understand rejection. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 10:37 pm
I have faith that grant/jason will not screw up. Well yeah he sorta will, but still! Keep them coming, i'm loving the story. :D
Author's Response: lol Im glad you like it writing it is alot of fun
Date: May 30 2009 10:20 pm
I am loving this story. Great update. Keep them coming.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it, I will do my best to keep them coming.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 09:52 pm
uh,oh. kenya doesnt even realize that her world is about to br rocked.
Author's Response: lol I dont think Grant realizes his world will be rocked also
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 09:46 pm
Dang he's cold but I love him.
Author's Response: lol so very true, and Im glad you like him.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 09:24 pm
I like this story. Could you make the chapters longer?
Author's Response: Im glad you like it, At the moment its hard for me with juggling all of my stories and updating them each day seeing that Im new to writing, but I will try to make the updates longer in the future. Reviewer: Gypsi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 30 2009 09:22 pm
DAN GRANT GROUPIE IS A REAL BITCH AND GRANT WAS COLD BLOODED WHEN HE DROPPED THE CONIVING TRAMP.. LOVE THIS STORY AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol Grant gives as good s he gets thats for sure, Im glad you like the chapter
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2009 09:07 pm
Damn...Melissa and her shady ass I know she did not think she could get over on Grant...LOL that was so funny when Melissa said they would be fucking right now if she hadn't walked in and all Grant could do is smile cause he like the sound and the view that popped in his head. Great update as always...
Author's Response: Thank you, Im glad you like this chapter I wasnt sure if many people would like it.
Date: May 30 2009 09:04 pm
She's going to have to find another meal ticket, it certainly won't be Grant bailing out her father.
Author's Response:
lol Amen. Melissa is a conniving though, she always has a plan B
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 30 2009 08:28 pm