Another winner. I look forward to how the story develops.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 30 2009 07:06 pm
I am liking you style. please update soon.
The blond bimbo needs to go (the slut).
Author's Response:
Im glad you like the style of my story. thank you for the review
the resident Witch will get hers soon
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 30 2009 07:47 am
I'm getting so confused...you're spoiling me with all these rapid updates...I meant Kenya not Alicia...gotta keep it straight...so forgive me, lol!!!
Author's Response: lol
Date: May 30 2009 07:29 am
I'm loving this story already. And you chose a very cute couple. I would love to read more. Thanks.
Author's Response: Glad you like it.
Date: May 30 2009 06:47 am
I like this story...keep writing. Great beginning.
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: May 30 2009 06:10 am
Grantie Bear is going to have problems.
Author's Response: lol maybe =D Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 30 2009 02:09 am
I like the attraction btwn the two of them. If you don't mind could you better distinguish who's saying or doing what. At certain points it feels run on and I get confused as to who's the topic of the sentence.
Author's Response: I will keep that in mind thank you for the review
Date: May 30 2009 01:12 am
This is getting good...poor Grant...he's walking you-know-what-on...and the object of his desire doesn't even know it...and Grant's giving good girl Alicia some pretty scandalous thoughts...so the witch is back...brr...humbug...can't wait for the office shenagans to commence...really liking this story...
Author's Response: You wont have to wait long...there is always tomorrow
Date: May 30 2009 12:55 am
uh, oh. .. all that sexual tension and he has a chick. um a woman.. not good grant. please update soon.
Author's Response: lol some would say she was his chick...but what would Grant say? =D
Date: May 30 2009 12:00 am
Great beginning and great choice in sexy lead male. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much, your stories are some of my favorites~
Date: May 29 2009 11:55 pm
loving this so far continue going.
Author's Response: Glad you like it, I will continue!
Date: May 29 2009 11:48 pm
welcome to the chamber i think this is gonna b 1 of my fave stories update soon
Author's Response: Thank you for the welcome, Im glad it could even be a story you like, if everyone only liked one of my stories Id be happy! Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29 2009 11:31 pm
AWesome I love it. Keep it coming. Its only a matter of time before they will be hitting the sheets. Grant and Kenya definitely have chemistry.
Author's Response: lol they will be hitting more than the sheets, lol Ill do my best
Date: May 29 2009 11:25 pm
I like the plot and the story, but the character seems almost too perfect and things are moving kind of fast..
Author's Response: Ill that that into consideration. Thank you for the review
Date: May 29 2009 10:46 pm
can't wait for your next update. I already hate the blonde and want her gone.
Author's Response: lol
Date: May 29 2009 09:58 pm
I like where you are going with this so far. I also am enjoying the humor through out the story. More chapters please!!
Author's Response:
Ill do my best
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2009 09:00 pm
Aww I am loving this story already. The chemistry between Grant and Kenya so far is really good. Oh hell no with the Grantie Bear sounds like trouble already!! Thanks for the update I am really getting into this story so keep em coming
Author's Response: lol Glad you like it, Ill do my best to keep it up.
Date: May 29 2009 08:58 pm
OH MY GOSH THE UPDATE WAS DELICIOUS WOW KENYA AND GRANT ARETHINKING ALIKE DAMN GRANT GROUPIE COMING IN AND INTERRUPTING A MOMENT..... I LOVE THIS STORY, KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Woot glad you like it!
Date: May 29 2009 08:46 pm
Good grief, keep on! :D *sigh* Jason/Grant is rocking my boat! :D
Author's Response: Woot glad you like it!
Date: May 29 2009 08:30 pm
I am loving this story! Keep going!!
Author's Response:
I will! Im glad you like it!
Reviewer: JMya Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2009 08:09 pm
Another good chapter. He is so into her. Who calls a grown man Grantie Bear. LOL. Keep going love this story so far.
Author's Response: =D I will
Date: May 29 2009 08:07 pm
Love this 1st chapter. Sexual tension right from the start. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: lol im glad you like it
Date: May 29 2009 08:01 pm
Oh that was cute and funny. I am glad to see that Grant has a sense of humor. He is already stuck like chuck on Kenya...and who is this blonde chic cause she already getting on my damn nerves and what you want to bet she is going to give Kenya the evil eye just for being in his office and maybe even almost seeing the near kiss that was in progress. Love it plz continue.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it ill do my best to keep you interested.
Date: May 29 2009 07:54 pm
Great start can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: =D thanks, more to come tomorrow hopefully and if I have time after updating my other stories I may do another update today.
Date: May 29 2009 07:53 pm
I am loving this story! I am loving Kenya!
I can't wait to see where this story goes!!
Author's Response: Im glad you like it! =D Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2009 07:35 pm