Title: S.O.B

Why did Sara do that? They are disrespecting his wife!! Nice update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. We shall see what happens in the next chappie.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 10:16 pm

Title: S.O.B

Thanks for the update, Sarah is such a bi**h for booking them seperate seats.  Can't wait to hear the conversation between Kevin and Sarah.  Please update soon!!

Love the banner.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 09:42 pm

Title: S.O.B

Sara done lost her damn mind if she thinks Kevin was going to be ok with her giving Grace an econ. ticket.

Do Sara have a thing for him to. The way she acted when she found out they were married, calling Grace all kinds of names, and now this crap.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 08:55 pm

Title: S.O.B

Oh hell no!! Wonder who made that little slip up. Sarah? I laughed when Kevin said he wasnt whipped. Uh yeah right!! Loved the new chapter and the new banner is awesome.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, hope to keep you interested.Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 08:16 pm

Title: S.O.B

WTF!! Why is Sara playing these petty games? Does she want Kevin for herself? She making unnecessary trouble here.

Awesome!



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 07:57 pm

Title: S.O.B

Looks like now the real problems are going to start, especially with that Sara person!  Come on with the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 06:32 pm

Title: S.O.B

Okay, I have to say after reading this, please write Kevin to go postal on that bitch after pulling this stunt. I love how you write.



Author's Response: lol, I'll see what I can do. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 06:30 pm

Title: S.O.B

Well dang, I hope that's not the only reason you wrote this chapter, you're very talented and definitely need to keep this story going.

A



Author's Response: Awes thanks, its the reviewers that keep me writing. Im glad you like the story. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 06:24 pm

Title: S.O.B

Okay you left a  sister a cliffffffffff Hangingggggggggggg big time. 

 

SARA need to be fired and Grace need to go upside her head verbally and intact.  So now she have Rina and Sara to contend wiith.

Dont mistake my girl Grace weakness for kindess. 

Kevin is so inlove with his wife. 

Can'r wait for next update.

I am routing for my girl Grace



Author's Response: Lol sorry for the Cliffhanger, It makes things a little more interesting dont you think? lol thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 06:19 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

What, should you continue.  Talk about a dumb question.  I'm new to this story, but damnnnnnn.

A



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 06:03 pm

Title: S.O.B

WTH is wrong with Sara.  Sure he made a move without her knowing about it, but she seems to be acting more jealous -- than irritated.  So Grace is going to have to go up against both her and Rina and who knows how many others.  I have faith in Grace, but I'm sure it's going to get choppy for awhile.  Especially as they will be apart.  Good story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you are enjoying the story. Hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: cyn2pede Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 05:09 pm

Title: S.O.B

Sara is a real bitch...gads...she's worse than Rina...how insulting...putting his WIFE in economy class...I hope gets her read with a quickness...with all the parasites in his life before Grace...it's a good thing he met her...

Kevin is falling more deeply in love with his new bride...whether he wants to admit it to himself or not...he is indeed whipped...she has become a blessing in his life...I hope he cherishes her...I love how he didn't make a decision without consulting her...that's something that witch Sara hadn't counted on...Kevin is in this for keeps...he loves him some Grace...and she is not merely a passing fad...

Can't wait to see what happens with the meeting with Rina or Kevin tell a bitch (Sara) what's what when it comes to disrespecting his new bride...

Great update...and absolutely love the new banner...



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:49 pm

Title: S.O.B

Sara needs to be fired. She is acing out too much and being completely disrespectful.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:34 pm

Title: S.O.B

So, I see there are people all over trying to sabotage his relationship with his wife.

Thanks for the update.

Happy New Year! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Happy New Year to you as well.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:20 pm

Title: S.O.B

Ouch... Talk about a slap in the face..

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: indycoolchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:13 pm

Title: S.O.B

Ok Sara is gonna get the heck on my nerves, I can see that now.

I love that they are so happy together.  They are very sexy and sweet. I love how Kevin has totally fallen for his new bride though I can understand why. Grace is a sweetheart but I am sure if needed she can be a cougar for her man, which she may have to be to deal with that witch Sara.

I love the new Banner sweetie..it is nice!!! Great updt !!



Author's Response: Thank you for the review, as always. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:11 pm

Title: S.O.B

OK, Sara is starting to p*** me off. She better have a really good reason as to why she booked that flight the way that she did. It's coming off as disrespectful. Kev better handle this and handle it good. I like how he consults Grace. He's a sweetie but doesn't seem to be a push-over. That'll come in handy when he has to deal with the viper that's "preggers". gah...

Sade, I'm addicted to this story and I love Grace. She matches her name. But she too is no push-over. They're good together. I've actually read this story multiple times. So, I'm always happy to see an update.



Author's Response: Thank you, hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 04:04 pm

Title: S.O.B

Love the new banner.

 

WTF is Sara's problem? News flash, married couples typically fly together. Besides she works for Kevin not the other way arround.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 03:57 pm

Title: S.O.B

this is going to be very interesting. that heifer booked those flights like that on purpose. if i was kevin i would get rid of her ass because the games are about to start. please update.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 03:43 pm

Title: S.O.B

S.o.b. is the right title for this update.

I'm guessing that this woman Sarah is in love with Kevin.

And she hates the fact that he has gotten married, and to a black woman at that.

Someone needs to be put in the place and soon.



Author's Response: lol, Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 03:18 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Great banner. Loved the updated. Too short definitely don't like the cliffhanger. Kevin needs to get in Sara's shut and put her in her place. She is completely disrespectful of his wife. She's disrespectful of Kevin her meal ticket. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Sorry for the length.hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 02:59 pm

Title: S.O.B

That was getting good and I get to the end and bam! Cliffhanger. Please hurry up with the rest of this update! Thanks.

Author's Response:

LOL Sorry for the cliffhanger. Hope to keep you interested.Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Latise Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 02:18 pm

Title: S.O.B

Sara going to get her shelf  hurt with that move.

Author's Response: lol, Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2010 01:11 pm

Title: Kevin and Grace's time.

I believe the sign of a good chapter is that it end with a climax ^__^


Author's Response: lol, that may be true!

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 30 2009 09:31 am

Title: Kevin and Grace's time.

Update again soon, it's been too long

Author's Response: hope to have one done in the next few days, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2009 03:22 am



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