Please keep this story coming. You are a very talented writer. I am so enjoying this story. I really would love to see what Kevin does about this pregnancy. The connection with his wife is simply breath taking.
Author's Response: Thank you, Im so glad you enjoyed it. hope to keep you interested. Sorry for the long wait.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2009 05:59 pm
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
PLease Nooo not an ex ...:'( its a joke right :( ....cant wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol thanks for the review Shel <3 thank you for inspiring me to write. The next chapter was because of your pestering <3 Reviewer: Shelanne Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 31 2009 11:10 am
I loved it loved it loved it!! 20 out of ten!! :D
Author's Response: lol Thank you Shelanne and thanks for calling and telling me to write I love you cousin, even though youre crazy <3
[Report This]Date: October 31 2009 11:01 am
lol i guess you didnt stop i just dont know how to work this website lol nut dang im addicted!!! <3
Author's Response: Lol glad you like it, thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2009 10:52 am
I love it!! Monie ur an amazing writer! its just getting intense and you stop :/ lol <3
Author's Response: lol thank you Laquisha, sorry for the cliff hangers makes things a little more interesting. Glad you like it! Reviewer: laquisha :) Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 31 2009 10:39 am
I am going thru withdrawls!!!!
Please update soon!!! I am in love with the characters and I can't wait to read about who called and how they are going to work thru this...
I am beyond hooked to the story!!!
Author's Response: Sorryyyyyyyyyyy for taking sooooo long. glad you like the story. hope to keep you interested. thank you for the review. Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed
[Report This]Date: September 16 2009 02:39 pm
I have been following this story and it is great. I am already invested you your characters. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: sorry for the long wait, hope you like the update, sorry it took so long.
Date: September 06 2009 08:19 am
Please Please Please Update!!!! This is getting soo good. I can't wait too see haow this turns out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait, hope you enjoy the update, thank you for the review.
Date: September 04 2009 08:08 pm
Please let that be his sister or some family member calling to spread some good news and not some skank trying to trap him.
Author's Response: you shall see in the update, thank you for the review! sorry for the long wait.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2009 05:14 am
that is cute how fast he became part of the family and how well he got along with them. i hope that grace and him are continously happy but i doubt it with the phone call that he received. update soon.
Author's Response: thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait. :(
Date: September 04 2009 03:42 am
they are so cute together and in love. i guess love happens at first sight.
Author's Response:
yes they are, thank you for the review!
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2009 03:35 am
very good start and interesting story.
Author's Response: thank you, hope to keep you interested.
Date: September 04 2009 03:31 am
This is exciting, who's calling him stating that they are pregnant, and is it really his.
Author's Response: lol we shall see, sorry for the long wait. thank you for the review.
Date: September 03 2009 08:25 pm
Oh you just had to bring on the drama! Okay, ready for the next chapter.
Author's Response: lol I try my best! sorry for the long wait. thank you for the review
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 07:14 pm
I really like this story. They make a cute couple. Hope Kevin survives.
Author's Response: Glad you like it! thanks for the review! he does survive :)
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 07:05 pm
Keep it coming. I can't wait for him to meet her family.
Author's Response: woot glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 05:59 pm
I couldn't remember if I'd already started this one. So I'm going to read it again. Great start by the way.
Author's Response: Glad you like it! thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 05:45 pm
who the hell i this chick and please update soon
Author's Response:
lol you will see in the next update, sorry for the long wait.
Reviewer: Kendra Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2009 06:53 am
where have you been!!! i really like this story and have been looking for an update. sounds like things are about to get very interesting! update again soon....please!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! thanks for the review! sorry for taking so long with the update.
Date: September 03 2009 04:30 am
I like this story. I saw the first chapter and never saw anymore until today. So, I was very pleasantly surprised! I like Grace and Kevin together. But this woman calling about a pregnacy...I hope it is not the wife of his comrade in NFL. And I would be skeptical, if I were him, as many women probably want to make the claim....and they are NOT pregnant.
Can't wait for more.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: Glad you like it! thanks for the review! Sorry for the long wait. Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 04:12 am
Wow, great update
Author's Response: Glad you like it! thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 03:58 am
Aw, hell naw...you didn't just go there did you, Sade...things were going along just 'too good to be true'...and just when I thought that Grace and Kevin really had a chance to make a go of it...who's on the phone...is it the team mate's wife...damn, Kevin...does he ever wear a jacket when he does the do...this smells like some big time trouble for Kevin and his new wife...and will he still have a wife if what I suspect is true and he's knocked up some other man's wife...
I loved Kevin meeting Grace's family...he's finally found a family unit he can fit right in since he seems to be not close to his own...and then...well, you know...
And let's not forget that we still don't know the outcome from Kevin and Grace's honeymoon night...could there be another bun in the oven...so many directions this story can take...can't wait to see which path you choose...great story...please, please, update soon...I love this story...
Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait, Im sooo glad you enjoyed it! I love writing it for you ladies! thank you for the review. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: September 03 2009 02:26 am
Grat update... glad that Grace's family likes Kevin.
OK now who is the lying chick that says she's pregnant.
Author's Response: Thank for the review~ We shall have to wait and see who the new player in this game is =) Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 09:25 pm
I love the familt being upen and honest with him....now who is trying to make him a baby daddy already. I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter, hope to keep you interested! thanks for the review~ Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed
[Report This]Date: September 02 2009 08:40 pm
I so love thi story
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Date: September 02 2009 08:35 pm