Did he really think that he didn't have to tell her that he was a famous football player? WTF? Also, how come her friends didn't know that he was a football player? Especially her friend that was a reporter and then another friend was a model? I hope that she tells him off for not being honest with her about who he is. Thanks
Author's Response: I think the Alcohol played a factor in the whole lapse in memory....or did it? Sometimes a friend knows best and Im sure at least one of them knew exactally who he was but who would want someones status in the world to take love away from their friend....Being a small town girl I think Grace would have shied away from sharing herself with an international Icon, not wanting to draw attention to herself..This way she has to face the music and hopefully would want to continue her relationship with him. If he had approached her by saying "Hey Im a NFL player, lets get married and have all our business as front page news." I think Grace would have tucked tail and ran, and I think he would have used the dinner date to tell her more about himself...To bad the vultures got to her first.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2009 07:09 pm
Yes you need to continue. I liked the start of the story. I was LOL at some parts of the story. So they are married? Thanks
Author's Response: Yep they are, Im glad you got some laughs and Im glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2009 06:58 pm
great story update soon
Author's Response: Glad you like it, will do my best.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2009 04:31 pm
i'm really liking this story. i can't wait until he meets the mom. she sounds like she's something! update soon...
Author's Response: Im glad you like it, next chapter should be very interesting indeed.
Date: June 24 2009 04:32 am
This story is great so far. Please update soon! Can't wait for more, you've got me hooked!
Author's Response: lol glad you like it, ill do my best to update as much as I can. Reviewer: Marissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2009 12:06 am
Ooh, this is getting good and I can't wait to read more. On a sidenote, his publicist's needs her ass kicked. Maybe if we're lucky Grace will do the honors.
Author's Response: lol Sara will in time kick her own ass, she is only one of the people we have to watch out for..hopefully all the enemys dont...team up =D
[Report This]Date: June 21 2009 07:32 am
Loving this story so far and now they're married!
Oh, things just got a whole lot interesting. He not only took her virginity, but he married her, can't wait for chapter two.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. thanks for the review~ Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: June 21 2009 07:26 am
Fat! By no means is Grace fat, sultry perhaps but not fat. She’s not a bone, she’s got curves in all the right places. And I love how Kevin is with her already: her protector, her husband. A gorgeous, fione, sexy-as-hell man who’s very much into his wife.
Check this out though, this is what I’m trippin’ off of: wouldn’t Grace be curious as to how her mother knew she was married, even before she ‘knew’ the very next day? The thought never crossed her mind as to why her personal business would be all over the news? She’s not a famous person. She’s just an everyday Jane (but obviously intelligent), so why wouldn’t she ask Kevin what was going on or what he did for a living? I guess everything happened so fast that those thoughts never crossed her mind.She’s about to find out though isn’t she!!!
Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: lol Im glad you like it, I hope to keep you interested... I think if I were in her position I wouldnt take into account how or why my mother got the news, My mum is like a ninja she knows everything that goes on in my life. Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 10:32 pm
I am loving this story. Kevin is really trying to protect Grace from the press. I hope they have a happy ever after.
Author's Response:
Im glad you like it, and so do I. Thanks for the review~
Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 20 2009 09:15 am
Good start and great storyline. A few errors here and there, but nothing distracting. Keep up your momentum. I'd like to see how this story ends.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review~ I hope to keep you interested.
Date: June 20 2009 05:01 am
4 BROTHERS!!!! He is in so much trouble. I don't care if he plays ball or not, they are going to eat him alive.
Author's Response: lol =D we shall see, bt if I were Kevin Id be more afraid of Graces mother.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 04:32 am
can't wait to read more. I am hooked
Author's Response: glad you like it, thanks for the review~ Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 03:45 am
I like this story. Why doesn't Grace know he is a NFL player. Shouldn't her friend who is a reporter know. and Why didn't Kevin tell her what he did for a living.
Great... can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Personally I dont know many women interested in Football but there could be other reasons why she wouldnt know, and I think maybe the drinks killed her friends' brain cells. Kevin has his reasons, they will be revealed in time.
Thanks for the review~
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 20 2009 03:35 am
That boy is goingto fall in love with her just wait and see!! I love that they decided to stay married. I think that is going to work out just right for them..I cannot wait for him to meet her family especially momma..lol!
Ilove this storymso sweet and cute ..cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the review~ Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 02:03 am
Another great chapter, keep it coming
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review~
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 20 2009 01:23 am
I Just found this story and Dam that was HOTTTT I am so loving this and I can't wait for more this will go under the FAVORITE Pile...
Author's Response: Im glad you like it enough to add to your favorites I will do my best to keep you interested.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 12:20 am
Hi Sade!!!! Sorry to hear that you life's a bit crazy right now thank you so much for the update it is greatly appreciated. Take care of what you have to and hope to see another update soon. This one was great and I want Kevin to stop being so evasive with his wife. By telling her what was going on he could have shielded her better to the reporters he knew he was going to get and it would have prepared her. I love the chemistry Kevin and Grace share but all your characters have such great chemistry it so hard not to feel it thru your writing. Again great update and can't wait for the next one ;0)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Im glad you liked the chapter, Kevin will have to come clean soon enough.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: June 19 2009 10:46 pm
I hope he isn't just using her and really has developed some feelings for her. He should have told her a little bit more about himself it's not like it's not going to come out eventually. His publicist sound like she's racist!! Enjoyed the chapter.
Author's Response:
I think Kevin is in for the ride of his life, he will be meeting her family in the next chapter and lets hope he survives. And Sara serious has issues.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 19 2009 09:33 pm
love the story! the publicist needs to chill with the name calling.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. lol she will be trouble thats for sure.
Date: June 19 2009 06:46 pm
Uh-oh, Kevin's secrets are about to be revealed in a very public way. Wonder how Grace will react?
Author's Response:
lol so do I =D, Thank you for the review~
Reviewer: Robin Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 19 2009 06:21 pm
i love it! update soon! and i hope your life settles down and you're happy:]
Author's Response: Glad you like it, and thank you.
Date: June 19 2009 04:49 pm
I like the story line, but some of the sentences seem to run-on a bit...just fyi. Please continue to update!
Author's Response: Will do my best, thanks for the review~ Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2009 04:34 pm
Looking forward 2 the next chapther.
Author's Response: Hope to keep you interested, thanks for the review~
[Report This]Date: June 19 2009 03:29 pm
I am going to love reading the rest of this story!
Author's Response: Glad you think so, hope to keep you interested.
Date: June 19 2009 02:55 pm
Glad to see you and this story back, Sade...
So they decide to stay married...seems like they really are attracted to each other and it just wasn't the liquor talking, lol...hope we are in for some more steamy passion between these two...hope Grace can handle the paparazzi invasion into her life...bet she's just realizing how high-profile the man she married is...seems Kevin has a rocky relationship with his family...interesting...so Grace has four brothers, hmmm...something tells me Kevin is in for a serious arse kicking if he steps out of line with babygirl...great update...can't wait to read more...man, I've missed you and your stories!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review~ Im glad you like this one its been a little crazy around here but hopefully I can get back into writing now. And Grace's Family will be in the next chapter. Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 19 2009 02:18 pm