Reviews For Heroes and Thieves
Title: Innocence is but a State of Mind

Just caught up with the story, I'm enjoying it very much. Great writing style and I love your choice of cast, especially the charming hottie with depth - Jeremy/Chris Pine! Update soon, pretty please!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2010 06:20 pm

Title: Innocence is but a State of Mind

I am sooooooooooooooooooo happy you updated. :D The story is rolling along. I love all the characters, and I can't wait to see more interactions between Alicia and Jeremy.  Regina needs to get her attitude in check and give Ben a chancce.

 

You changed tenses during the story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks... i'm glad you're still interested... and thanks for the heads up on the tenses... I went back to edit...I think I caught them all. :)

Thanks bunches!

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 17 2010 07:24 am

Title: And the Sun Sets...

Please update this story, it's been a long while and the story has bearely begun.. Where are you????

Reviewer: TinyTim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2010 10:00 am

Title: And the Sun Sets...

Glad that you picked this story up again I'm really enjoying it. I liked seeing a bit of their families and can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2010 09:30 pm

Title: And the Sun Sets...

It was nice getting a glimpse into their family lives. I just realized that the past six chapters, have all taken place in the same day. Hmm... 

Thanks for updating. I hope you update more often.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2010 05:45 am

Title: And the Sun Sets...

Glad to see the update. Loved it.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2010 05:44 am

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

I'm really enjoying this story :) 

Update soon! If you don't I understand because it can be difficult to come up with something that seems just right. 

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2010 03:45 am

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

i'm lovin' this story. please update soon and very soon!!

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2010 05:19 am

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

I did get that Ben is interested in Regina who shot him down.  As for Vanessa coming over to Alicia to apologize that was whacked.  So Regina is the one that has tot tutor a student that isn't doing well in Math.  Alicia is the one with the new guy in the school that is giving her a hard time and she is upset that he doesn't like her and everyone likes her so she doesn't no why he doesn't and she is bothered by that.  So who did Ben spill his coffee on?  Did the new guy at the school live in this area and moved back recently and he knows these guys but they don't remember him?  Is that why he is so mean to Alicia?  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 02:53 pm

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

Ben was really cute, and Regina was way rude to him. I have knows Jeremy? I can't remember the leads name.

Regina had no right to be up in Vanessa's face. Yeah, Vanessa screwed up and hurt Alica, but that is between Alicia and Vanessa.

I like your writing style. Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 08:28 am

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

Why is it bitches have the baddest clothes? Just makes you hate them more.

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 01:05 am

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

That was good, I want Vanessa get knocked out!!!  That would really make my day. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 12:07 am

Title: Chapter Three: Force Together

lovin' this story so far. i like the flirting between the two. okay...waiting for more

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 05:33 am

Title: Chapter Three: Force Together

I'm really liking where this story is going. I'm glad they don't like each other right now it gives more room than love at first sight type of thing.

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 08:04 am

Title: Chapter Three: Force Together

Oooh Another good chapter. I love that they don't like each other right now. It will make the story all the more sweeter, when they fall in love. lol

Harrington needs to get that chip off his shoulder. He doesn't even know Alicia for him to be so freaking rude. He's boiling everyone in the same pot, without knowing any of the particular spices.  

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2010 08:00 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Just a Tease

Well I for one hope that it is real soon. *g* These two are going to be great together. The chemistry is already simmering, and I for one am looking forward to it boiling over.

What was with the uniform? She could have at least wore here hair down, as not to look like a kindergartener.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2010 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter Three: Force Together

I had actually given this story a pass. But I finally started reading and I couldn't stop until I reached the last chapter. This is good. I'm liking it a lot. Poor Alicia is having a rough go and Jeremy is so cute and bad. He's teased the poor girl to distraction. Who will admit the attraction first? Can't wait.

Gina is a straight up hoot.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2010 11:11 am

Title: Chapter Two: Just a Tease

Thanks for a great update. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2010 03:31 am

Title: Chapter Three: Force Together

Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2010 03:30 am

Title: Chapter Three: Force Together

Wow, such aggression!!!  I like this story and I can't wait for those two to fall in love with each other.  It will be explosive!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2010 10:28 pm

Title: The Heroes & Thieves: Character Page

OMG, I've been looking for this fic! I read the first chapter and have been hoping for the next update. I totally forgot the name, so I thought that you had stopped writing it. I am so glad that you continued. I can't read it right now, (work) but I will later.  

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2010 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter One Part Two: Collision Course

This will be a great story!!  I can't wait to read  more.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2010 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter One Part Two: Collision Course

Thanks for a great read.  I left a longer post on TST. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter One Part Two: Collision Course

Hmm, and the plot thickens.  

Update soon! :D

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 07:00 am

Title: Chapter One Part Two: Collision Course

Loved it. Hope she doesn't let her ex and Vanessa see her sweat. Hmm, Jeremy seems like a rebel. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2010 04:42 am



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