Penname: Renee Banks [Contact]

Real name: Sylvia

Member Since: 18/12/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

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I love creating whole universes with words and wouldn't give it up for anything in the world.


Feel free to facebook it up with me.



Beta-reader: Yes
On Hiatus: No

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Harmony Peterson, an ambitious young medical student, wants to perfect her bedside manner before she begins her clinical rotations. Keegan Grant is more than willing to help.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7603
Read Count: 7614
Published: 26/01/10
Updated: 04/02/10


Title: Chapter 4: Muscles & Nerves

I'm definitely, definitely into this story! The chemistry between Harmony and Keegan is off the charts. I can feel the air sizzling around them. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing this chapter! I was hoping to convey the sort of chemistry that was nearly combustible between H & K so I'm glad it came across. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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Are U Still Down? 

Girl it's alright, baby (Its alright)
'Cause it's there in your eyes yeah
(Its in your eyes, i can see it in your eyes)
I can see that you want me (dont cha want me? dont cha want me?)
By the way that you smile (Hahaha)
(Uhh)Are u still down for me?


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Graphics by SPAC



Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3082
Read Count: 1918
Published: 01/02/10
Updated: 01/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That kiss was fiah! I wasn't feeling Jean-Paul up until that point. Aaliyah could for sure have done better than a married man with a son. But any man who can make a girl feel like she's just had a Sunday soul food dinner because of a kiss, is alright with me! Maybe I'm a stickler for couples who fight and then end up against a wall still telling each other how much they loathe one another...what? Oh, sorry. I drifted off for a second, haha! I love this though SPAC. Nice job!

Author's Response: LMAO.  Renee you're so funny girl.  Jean-Paul is an ass.  And Aaliyah cared enough to set his ass free.  Here he comes reminding her of how he makes her feel.  They could kill each other, literally with all of that accelerant.  Thanks for reading.  And yes, I know I'm slacking on the updates.  Distance makes the heart grow.  I'm falling back in love with my stories.  Updates are working out.  Feedback is appreciated.  :-)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary: Paris Madison is one of the top tabloid writers at "Inquiring Minds". Her life seems perfect,except her love life needs some work. Then her luck changes when she runs into Justin Timberlake, three times.They soon fall for each other but Justin doesn't know what she really does for a living. Paris finally gets the nerve to tell him,but its too late...or is it?

Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 64496
Read Count: 76191
Published: 11/02/10
Updated: 10/05/10


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Totally brings back memories! My first stories were about N*SYNC, though you can't find them on the internet (thank God). You have great ideas, the only thing I'd say is watch your tenses. There was a point in the first chapter where you were past tense and then there was a sentence in present tense. That's all. Nice job.

N*SYNC forever! :)



Author's Response: Hahhaha lol stick with me kid. Theres still a lot nsync boards around, though many of them just focus on Justin & JC. Thanx 4 reading and your feedback! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
Date: 21/04/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

I'll never talk again

Oh boy you've left me speechless

You've left me speechless, so speechless 

And I'll never love again

Oh boy you've left me speechless

You've left me speechless, so speechless 

-Lady Gaga

"Speechless" 

 

Cassandra Mitchell never could fight the spell that pushed her and Christian Norris together. Their love was sometimes up and sometimes down but always there. And now that he's gone, she has nothing left to say.

 

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9846
Read Count: 29337
Published: 11/02/10
Updated: 21/10/10


Title: Chapter 1: How?

That was simple and very well written. Nice job!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Christie Monteiro thinks about some things over her morning water. Yes morning water.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 439
Read Count: 859
Published: 09/03/10
Updated: 09/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm interesting. That was probably the shortest actual story I've every read on here. I believe I've read a poem here too. Anyway, I would say continue this for sure. I need a little more depth, meaning some background and of course interraction between the girl and her secret love! They should definitely fight and then have some hot, sweaty se...haha, sorry. Continue :)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
Date: 09/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The Court Has Ordered Franco To Therapy Sessions With Dr. Lainey Winters. As She Tries To Understand Him, She Allows Him To Consume Her Mind And Connects With Him Both Mentally And Physically.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Lainey Winters
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Something New" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2218
Read Count: 1171
Published: 11/03/10
Updated: 11/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...that was very interesting. Sadistic and erotic all at the same time. Very creative! Welcome to the Chamber, my dear :)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
Date: 12/03/10

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 177]
Summary: DA Banner

 

Twenty-three year old Leigh Grayson has had only one thing on her mind for the last five years: Justice. But to get justice she will have to fight one man’s sick obsession.

Will Detective Damien Crook be able to convince her to accept his help and most of all his love?

I want to say a huge thank you to Renee Banks for all her support and editing skills. Renee, you have no idea how much it means to me!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33650
Read Count: 31683
Published: 09/05/10
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

I just read the whole chapter, and it reads so much better Kaye! You're doing such a great job with the writing of this. Michael seriously gives me the creeps and Damian is such a hottie. I can't get over how much progress you've made in these past couple of months since starting this. It's really coming along nicely. You should be VERY proud of yourself! 

Anticipating Chapter 13 sooner rather than later ;) 



Author's Response: Thank you sweetie, your words always bring a smile to my face!!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

My baby is all grown up and writing stories *tear*. I'm sooo extremely proud that you put out your first fic. How's it feel, my dear? Exhilerating right? See! I told ya :) This is definitely on it's way! I'm so happy :) *more tears*

Author's Response: I am crying too!! I will never thank you enough!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This story is coming along Kaye! Michael needs to be dealt with before someone gets hurt. You're storytelling is getting better and better. I'm so impressed with how far you've come in so little time. I look forward to the next chapter (editing and reading it before anyone else) :)

Author's Response: Thank you Renee!! I am trying to keep it interesting, but it is hard work!! :-) I am working on chapter 8 now and will be emailing you before by Saturday, hopefuly!

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Date: 03/06/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

You know, you could totally do a spin off story with Agent Johnson! He seems like the type of guy that's had everything handed to him and hasn't really had to work for a woman. Definitely be thinking about that one, Kaye ;)

Anywhoo! Great update, dearest! I'm glad you're progressing with this. And no need to thank me for anything I do. That's what friends are for :)



Author's Response: Thank you my friend! I will think about your suggestion. But I need to finish this story before you go back to school! So I must get my poo poo together and sort it out! :-)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/06/10

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Finally decided to update! This is shaping up to be a very nice story. I can't wait to see how you finish this one out (even though I was no help in that department), I know you're going to wrap it up amazingly well. If I can help, I'll try. Great job girl!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 Connie is a young, beautiful, recent graduate who is finding her post matriculated life a lot harder than she expected. What lengths will she go to, to get the life she knows she deserves?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 625
Read Count: 2447
Published: 06/07/10
Updated: 06/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Decision

What I want to know is...what would make a young lady who has everything ahead of her (smart, beautiful and accomplished) want to become employed by an escort service. Definitely not expecting that one at all. Maybe you should extend this one. I'd like to know why she's crying and why she'd suddenly think an escort service would be the key to her happiness.

The writing was nicely done! :)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
Date: 06/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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So she poured out the liquid music of her voice to quench the thirst of his spirit.  ~Nathaniel Hawthorne

For 'The Less is More' challenge

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 724
Read Count: 1105
Published: 06/07/10
Updated: 06/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Serenade

Such a sweet tale, Kaye. I'm glad you decided to post this. I'm glad you nixed the part where they speak to one another. I don't think the story would have had the same sweetness to it if they'd actually spoken. The fact that she conveyed everything through song was enough. So simple and sweet. Good job, dearest :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, love. You are a very persuasive Miss Banks, and I love it!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

I use to be a part of a fansite for two wonderful dancers from SYTYCD Season 2.  I was so inspired by some really awesome writers on that site to write my own little diddy. It was an experiment and it was fun. I thought I would share it with you all since a certain someone (Sebine) says I never write but I am always begging for stories :)!...I hope you enjoy it and remember I am not a writer so be kind!!

BTW it is Unbetaed..lol!!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2200
Read Count: 2854
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mama Ne! You're a Chamber Author now! I love how our roles are reversed right now...it's so new and exciting! This was very nice! I wasn't expecting the end, that's for sure. When I read the author's note, I was like "hmmm 3 years ago...hmmm" and then I saw the name Banji and thought, "Madden?? From Good Charlotte?" Then I saw Lacey's name and was like "Oooh! A SYTYCD fanfic! Love it!" This was my all-time fave season with Travis, Allison, Donny (my fave girl ever) and Demitri. You did make me smile for sure :) Thank you for this!

Now I can stop bugging you about posting a story, you've fulfilled my wish. Thank you, thank you! 



Author's Response: You are crazy Na Na...now that I have posted my little story..I can go back to bugging you guys on the regular and you and Sebine cannot give me a hard time anymore..lol lol lol !! I glad it made you smile..you know I am an undercover comedian..it is my true calling!!! Rotfl..

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary: Denisha and Matt are in the midst of an argument.  Will Matt find a way to get back in Denisha's good graces?  My submission for the Less is More Challenge!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 978
Read Count: 1159
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 08/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was cute RedBird! I laughed out loud when Denisha was like "you don't tell ME to shut up!" Loved their interaction. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I am glad you liked it!  I was listening to Shut Up by Nick Lachey and the story popped into my head!  :)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
Date: 08/07/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 132]
Summary:

 

 MY BROTHER’S KEEPER

Twin - One of two offspring born at the same birth; or one of two identical or similar people

Brother - a male who has the same parents as another

Family - Two or more people who share goals and values, have long-term commitments to one another, and reside usually in the same dwelling place

 

Love - A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness. A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair 

AM I MY BROTHER’S KEEPER?  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 43918
Read Count: 28148
Published: 19/08/10
Updated: 19/02/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, Kelly! I'm very interested to find out what this favor is. I think I have an idea but I'll continue to read before I put my two sense in :)

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Being eighteen is hard enough, but when you factor in the shape shifting, howling at the moon, and a serious craving for rabbit and deer meat being eighteen is less than easy. Meet Edison, sister to three brothers, daughter of Josephine and Tobias Banks. Her and her family, who share the same animalistic habits, have just moved to Brookesville.

When several of the local residents go missing only to be found dead in the woods, Edison suspects it more than the everyday animal attacks. All clues point to the Taylors and their less than normal son, Aiden who is devastatingly attractive, but has secrets even his beyond strange family can't explain. But when one of Edison's friends goes missing along side Aiden's girlfriend, Edison teams up with Aiden in hopes of finding whatever is snacking on the locals of Brookesville.


Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13806
Read Count: 2547
Published: 31/10/10
Updated: 23/11/10


Title: Chapter 2: Can't Escape

I'm liking the pace of this! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The only thing I noticed that was a little confusing was your description of Edison. She's almost a contradiction to herself. The way you described her at first was "observant and mature" but then later in the paragraph you say she throws tantrums at random and steals things. Doesn't really sound like she's too mature to me, but that's just my opinion. Overall, I think you're on your way. Good start!

Author's Response: I actually responded to you in my next chapter, not only to you but to anyone else who gets confused. I wanted to make Edison as absurd as possible, one minute she's mature, but because she's been raised by wolves, literally, she has a tendency to fly off the handle, and the fact that she's the only girl in a house filled with testosterone can lead you to many an outbursts. Thanks for reading, I hope this kind of clears things up. ^_^

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 328]
Summary:

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This is a Fan fiction about Season 11 DWTS R&B Singer Brandy and her dance partner Makism Chmerkovskiy. This is an intense romance btw Brandy & Makism. Enjoy!                           

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 61711
Read Count: 252823
Published: 30/11/10
Updated: 14/11/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Miss Nakia, I'd be happy to beta for you if you need it dear. Just drop me an email at sylvie.maye@gmail.com.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Miss Renee. I greatly appreciate you. I will send you ch. 8 by Thursday evening.

 

 

 

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
Date: 01/12/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

Cassandra Mitchell believed in a lot of things, but she did not believe in fate. So sitting next to a classmate she had not seen or spoken to in 14 years on her return flight to New York from Iceland was pure coincidence.

Lucas Carrington, on the other hand, believed everything happens for a reason; and being seated next to Cassie, was no exception.

 

A sequel to Speechless.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 21263
Read Count: 55443
Published: 14/12/10
Updated: 31/05/11


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- Very,Very Good Thing

I was looking forward to clicking to the next chapter, then frowned when I noticed there was no link going to the next chapter. I need to read on, which means you need to get on Chapter 6! I'm very much enjoying this story. I like the flow of Luke and Cassie's relationship. It's developing nicely. For some reason I was thinking Jade would turn out to be a terrible selfish friend being in the music industry but I'm happy to see that she's genuine and a great advice-giver. I look forward to more soon!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- You Look Familiar

I like Luke's easy going attitude. Cassie very much reminds me of myself and some of the characters I conjure up. She's a little cynical and no nonsense. Luke will surely crack her and have her loosening up a bit before the end. And of course they'll meet again. Liking this very much!

Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/10