Penname: Onimosity [Contact]

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Member Since: 30/08/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

It's time to trust my instincts, close my eyes, and leap.


Totally stealing the idea of a story queue from Missus James.


In the Pipeline:


Anatoly's (of Beastly Things) story


Challenge Fic for Nene


Challenge Fic for femmenoire


Completed:


Beast


 Ever After*


The Art of Giving*


Broken English*


In progress:


280 Days (The next story in the Beastly Things Series)


*Visit the website below for more information on my completed works and works in progress.


 


Published Works:


Goal! A Love Story written as Bellamy Black



Beta-reader: No
Web Site: www.shadesofthemuse.com

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Unthinkable by Cholyn
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 80]
Summary:

It's been seven years since Billy walked out of Lily's life. He's returned to Genoa City with one goal, and he's willing use all of his resources to accomplish it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



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Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Lily Winters
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: LnB stand alone stories
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85777
Read Count: 147423
Published: 01/07/10
Updated: 07/04/11

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Title: Chapter 7: Seven

Oh this is some lovely plot thickening. And so good to see a lighter exchange between L and B. And a not stupid Nick. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, LOL! It's always good to have add a little lightness. 

 

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/10
Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

Nick is such a slimmmme. And this is how you slip and fall into adultery. Sigh. I kinda wish he wasn't though. A teeny tiny part of me wishes it would be more of a struggle for Lily, and hey, maybe it will be. But with a kid and La Sharon out there? Oy vey. And THEN she'll have to deal with the fact that Billy knew all this. Oy vey again.

 And kudos on a non Donkey Cane. He's smart and refused to drink! Wow. 

 Well done. 



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting.  lol @ Donkey Cane. I really like this version of him.

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/10/10
Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

I knew Lily had power over him should she ever choose to wield it. Mixed feelings about the adultery, gotta admit. But what was there was hot. And wrong.

So like Billy to leave and then come back thus keeping his word.

And La Sharon is still around. I want her to spill her guts!

Great update! 

 



Author's Response:

Onim, in rl I am so anti-adultery, so it took a lot for me to write this story. It was the damn song that put this story into my head, lol.

Billy admitted in chapter...four or five that Lily had the power to make him call it off, so he had to be extra tough with her.

 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. : ^ ) 

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Date: 30/11/10
Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen

Ohhhh....Nick is slipping to the dark side. 

So glad Lily was leaving regardless of the baby. Why do I think Nick could have done something to the pills? Lil Victor Newman.

Also glad that Lily saw her own complicity in her bad marriage. Sometimes it does take two.

Great update! 

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/02/11
Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen

You went with  realistic ending and showed great respect for your characters. They (especially Lily) needs time to sort themselves out and it was an excellent point about "young love" and needing to learn each other again. They had both been so caught up in the young love aspect that they sort of breezed by his betrayal and the fact that he left to begin with. So, all that is to say I am very pleased with the ending.

Now......

You writing a sequel right? With them getting closer and crazy Nick in the background right? You're starting that now right? Right? RIGHT? I can't hear you.... Okay, I'll look for that new story next week.  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're pleased with the ending. It was important to me to stay true to the characters.

I apologize, but I'm having trouble understanding your second paragraph.  

 

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Date: 07/04/11
Final Dissolution by Renee Banks
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Photobucket

It's for better...and for worse.

For the "Less Is More" Challenge 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 94
Read Count: 3053
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: The Papers

Well done, very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you, Oni :) I'll have to SA update out this month....promise!

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Date: 06/07/10
I Miss Her So Much! by neneburge
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

I use to be a part of a fansite for two wonderful dancers from SYTYCD Season 2.  I was so inspired by some really awesome writers on that site to write my own little diddy. It was an experiment and it was fun. I thought I would share it with you all since a certain someone (Sebine) says I never write but I am always begging for stories :)!...I hope you enjoy it and remember I am not a writer so be kind!!

BTW it is Unbetaed..lol!!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2200
Read Count: 2827
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good job Nene! Way to dip your toes in the water. Do it again soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading sweetie...it was fun and just something to make you all smile!

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Date: 07/07/10
Happy Birthday, Baby by miquerida
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

It's Jack's Birthday and Jill wants to celebrate. . .

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.   

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Drabbles , General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: Movie Night
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 862
Read Count: 1457
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Hungry?

Uh...well now...Wowza.

Well done. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  Wow, I feel like poppin' my collar because ONIMOSITY gave me a review.

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/10
A Wife Scorned by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary: Connie thought she wanted revenge on her cheating husband. She got more than she bargained for.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 9974
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know, I was scared of where this was going but really liked the destination. It was raw and hopefully cathartic. Well done.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked where the story went. I wasn't too sure how to end it at first, but decided to finish on an up note with Connie having a few life-changing revelations. Had the story been longer, she might have done all kinds of truly wicked things to her hubby. lol.

Thanks for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/07/10
Hurry, Hurry by curiouslyamused
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


 


So much to do, so little time.


My (failed) attempt at the 1000 word fic challenge. 


Banner by curiouslyamused 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1060
Read Count: 2466
Published: 11/07/10
Updated: 11/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Please, Please, Please

What a pleasant story. Well worth the extra words!

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Date: 11/07/10
My Brother's Keeper by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 132]
Summary:

 

 MY BROTHER’S KEEPER

Twin - One of two offspring born at the same birth; or one of two identical or similar people

Brother - a male who has the same parents as another

Family - Two or more people who share goals and values, have long-term commitments to one another, and reside usually in the same dwelling place

 

Love - A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness. A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair 

AM I MY BROTHER’S KEEPER?  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 43918
Read Count: 28055
Published: 19/08/10
Updated: 19/02/11

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow. I suspected that Noah wanted Jude to father a kid with Samara. I did not suspect the method or anticipate Jude's issue which is completely believable, by the way.

Really can't wait for more. Please update soon. 

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/09/10
Title: Chapter 9: A/N - Not a Chapter

So sorry Kelly Klue!

Take as much time as you need to recoup and I hope the cops find the bastids.

And remember, the stories are in you.

Oni  

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Date: 19/02/11
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Argh!

 Everything is so sweet and idyllic and loving between Jude and Samara and you can see the love that is growing between them, the tenderness. And then Noah returns. He frustrates the life out of me! I still feel he is so selfish. And somehow, when the three of them are together, Noah makes it seem sordid and when it's just Samara and Jude its so beautiful.

Argh!

 

I love this story can't wait for the next update. Hope you are feeling better!

Argh! 



Author's Response: Lol!!! Noah is I think conflicted. He wants this to happen, but I think that it means acceptance of so many things for him.  Thanks for reading and commenting as always.

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

If you put pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard) and tell of a world that only exists in your head then you are a writer.

On to the story. 

Really enjoyed the flashback to the crime. Good to see both their perspectives because I was (and still am a little bit) finding it hard to feel for Noah. How could he let his brother serve his time, the plotting behind Jude and Samara's back...he is an interesting one.  

Samara would view it as Jude's baby...interesting and thought-provoking.

I love this story and can't wait for more.  

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like this sentence:

"He always wanted a big family and had enhanced the ranch over the years in anticipation of the day that his big family would show up and claim him."

 

I really like the image behind it. Very nice. 

And Noah refusing chemo is a thinker....hmm. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Yep Noah not wanting to lose his hair speaks to his vanity. I have two dear relatives who have bested cancer and the tales that I can tell about treatments and patients..well it would be a very lenghty one. To my surprise I learned that quite a bit of cancer patients refuse chemo treatments.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/08/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this.

 

I'm not even going to guess where you are going because I don't want to be wrong. Please update frequently. Who have you cast as Samara? I can't quite make out the face. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading. And I am a huge fan of your writing. Samara is soul singer Vivian Green. I am working on the next chpater, stay tunrd.

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So I was trying to think if there was anything that I wanted to add to my other review and the only thing I can think of is how much I love this story. I love the premise, I love the characters (maybe not Noah as much as the others), and I love the really long updates. So much to think about.

And whenever you are ready to post another update, you just go right ahead.

 

Like now. 



Author's Response: Thank you!!! I appreciate the feedback and chapter seven is up. So please tell me what you think.

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Date: 03/11/10
Daydreams by femmenoire
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary: Scotty can't think. In fact, he can't do much of anything, without thinking of her... and him.


Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1882
Read Count: 1452
Published: 09/09/10
Updated: 09/09/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Daydreams

If you wanted to continue this, I certainly wouldn't object. Yeah. We'll leave it at that.

Author's Response: Ha! I have one other story with these 3 called "Lock the Door." And this was part of an lj challenge for 50 stories. I have no idea if I'll do all 50, but I absolutely have a few more in the works, so... you get your wish! :D

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Date: 10/09/10
Teenage Dream by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

 

 

 No regrets, just love.

When a family crisis forces Broadway diva Charise Leone back to her hometown in wyoming, she expects it to be the same country hell hole she left 11 years ago. What she gets however is one surprise after another. She was the girl who spent most of her teen years in tears. Who knew she would get a second chance at her teenage dream?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4797
Read Count: 4775
Published: 29/09/10
Updated: 14/01/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Don't Ever Look Back

I love your cast and your set-up and will admit to a tiny crush on John Carter.  Can't wait to see where this goes.

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/10
Title: Chapter 3: How many of us have them?


So I am review lazy (which is bad as I love them) so I decided to review the chapters I missed before posting a harassing note in the shoutbox. Loved this chapter! Love the hello kitty-ness of it all, and really interested to see how the whole "friend of an ex" or "ex of a friend" will work itself out. Well done. 

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Date: 02/11/10
Title: Chapter 4: Feeling some kind of way,

Awww...I love young love and young **unrequited** love. But Mona still loving Scott has me worried. Can't wait for more!

 

I am now free to post harassing messages in the shout box.  

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/10
Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

Hmmm....Mamacita has returned. Bringing drama I'm sure. Great update. Now, hurry up and do it again!

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Date: 17/01/11
Sister Winter by Candace
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Doctor Who Season 3. Tish Jones endures during the Year That Never Was. Written for the prompt: Tish/The Master, Like Persephone.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 480
Read Count: 414
Published: 09/11/10
Updated: 09/11/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This one totally slipped by me. Can't believe I missed.Please, please continue.

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/11/10
Retired
Loving Mia by katherinemadison
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 660]
Summary:

 

 

 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229046
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11

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Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Surprises

Loved it! No baby and Mama's in town! Love the light tone of the chapter and them being so thoughtful when she's on her period. What woman doesn't want that?

 Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/10
Title: Chapter 2: Two Men And A Little Lady

I am so glad this is here! I have been following this on fictionpress and am so glad you brought it over!

Author's Response: THank you! I'm hoping it does well here. What's your pen name on fictionpress if you don't mind me asking? 

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Date: 16/11/10