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Real name: Amber

Member Since: December 24 2010

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Lila's Thunder by Voices
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65030
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story has been elliciting some pretty strong responses between either love or hate for the characters. But girl I gotta say, you have me hooked either way. These characters are all flawed, yes ALL of them, even Lila. We can't always expect for the heroine to be the one to make all the right choices and never be confused or conflicted. Just reading the story so far, I'm already conflicted between Jack and Chase and its only been 7 chapters. The chemistry between Jack and Lila is so intense and I want them to be together, yet there is something about Chase that I can't forget even though I know it's wrong because of his age. It's like there's this itty bitty part of me that wants to see what would happen between them. I just hope that no matter what the brothers will reconcile eventually. Can't wait for another update! Just keep writing the way you want it to happen and I'll be happy.

 Reviewer: badone92 Signed
Date: March 18 2012

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