Penname: mdpierrette [Contact]

Real name: pierrette

Member Since: May 04 2011

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Right Place, Wrong Time by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Leslie West is a quiet beautiful southern belle who just moved up to New York, Blake Caldron is a fashion guru who can't seem to keep his eyes off of a new church attendee. Due to certain circumstances he needs to watch from a far... But for how long?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 28720
Read Count: 33061
Published: August 14 2011
Updated: December 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Hello New York

i have to admit , i kinda like your story, at least at the begining, but now it's just a mess, sorry to say that like that, i really really love your story, but we have two people who cheated on others people, i mean u described leslie as a sweet & simple girl, hell now she's almost like a sl""t, i mean she loves another man, but she sleep with marco, blake was like that at begining but now at least he try to do the right thing, whereas leslie try to hurt him just because she's jealous, now she accept to married marco. I mean even if she refuses after, she did the wrong thing, maybe im too harsh  with the character but both of two are wrong but more leslie than blake now.Continue to update i want to know how u gonna fix that, maybe it 's leslie who gonna be pregnant with marco's since he didn't use condom

 Reviewer: mdpierrette Signed
Date: August 23 2011
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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140140
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

damn it you kill it, i mean you are so good to writin, im speechless, bravo, what an amazing chapter, i was so much pain, you describe that so real, & redemption is really something they need. i guess you are a christian because you always talk about GOD & it's good, continue your work the ony point that i can complain, is im addicted now so all i think is update lol. thanx for ur work



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  Yes, I am a Christian and we know that we have to forgive for ourselves as well as for others.  Julian and his family will come to terms with their past.

 Reviewer: mdpierrette Signed
Date: September 01 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.