Penname: helloWORLD [Contact]

Real name: KIAH

Member Since: May 11 2011

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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 130215
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Ten

I'm loving this story.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

Ooooo! This story gets better and better every add. I love how Christian is fighting his attraction to Taylor and I wonder how he's going to feel when he finds out he is really a she. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: December 06 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

Ahhhhh! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: October 24 2012

Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

Awww she didn't get a chance to tell him the truth. I hate that things got out of control so quickly but maybe Christian will reach out to her. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2012

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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168992
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Oh no, I really hope Kendra survives the fall and is okay. That's horrible that that happened but I'm glad Deleon got there in time before she was raped.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2011

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Oh no, I really hope someone gets to Kendra in time before that sheriff does anything to her. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: June 20 2011

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

I'm glad everyone's getting along with the exception of Prince and hopefully he'll warm up soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: June 18 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214741
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I love the fact that they're getting closer and closer each time they talk. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow, I really hope Karen wakes up and realizes how much of an ass James is, i mean really realize it. She's so focused on him, she may be ruining the first person that she knows for sure likes her. Felecia is just wrong, cheating when she has a boyfriend. But then again we don't know the full story just yet. I hope Ryan and Charlene don't get caught. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I'll have an update up soon.  I glad you enjoying my story so far.  I hope you'll continue to read and leave reviews.  Thanks for showing your support.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28 2012

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I absolutely love these two! I'm glad Ryan didn't just let her walk away and that she shared her feelings for him. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: July 25 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69899
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 16: The Bargain

Glad you're back! I really hope Olivia has a clean gettaway and I'm glad they were able to get her out. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2012

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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

Banner by me.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 48286
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Erin is a coniving little weasel and I hope they don't let her get by with any other things. She's beeing carrying like she wasn't part of  the reason Cameron and Phillip fell off. Hopefully, now with things out inthe open, they can slowly move towards their potential. Can't wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Hi helloWORLD! Erin is a weasel and has been carrying on like nothing is wrong because of her.  Things are going on the up and up with Cameron and Philip! YAY! Thanks so much for reading, review and rating! I appreciate it very much! :)

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Date: May 03 2012

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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Banner

 Banner by Missus James. :)

 

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?"- William Shakespeare

 

She didn’t believe in love at first sight, yet when she met Fabian she believed in anything. Even the belief of her death at the hands of her lover…

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 10873
Read Count: 20778
Published: December 28 2010
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh wowwwww! First off, I love your writing style. I'm eager to see how Fabian and Meka got to be at this point they are at now and what he's going to do next. I really hope you update soon and I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

THank you! Well, I just updated so you can go see the first part right about now. Haha. 

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2013

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Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 23: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Woww,  he went through with it. I'm anxious to see how things will be after this. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2011

Title: Chapter 21: The Respect Issue Pt 1

Wow, Alexei is something else. I'm glad that Vlad showed him who was boss and hopefully Alexei doesn't suceed with his plan. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

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Date: June 02 2011

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Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78804
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 9: Maybe Not

Aw I'm so glad he told her how he felt and hopefully he got throught to her. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2011

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Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50619
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I'm glad she found out what was really going on and hopefully the lady really wants to help and and isn't really out to hurt her. Can't wait to see wha happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2011

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Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168011
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 19: Jyuu hachi (18)

I'm so glad things are turning out so well for everyone so far. Hopefully his birthday goes smoothly.



Author's Response:

So far so good! Yes. Thank you! :)

UPdated!!!

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2012

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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89295
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

Hopefully seeing Ellie will help Nick. Can't believe he was doing drugs. That's horrible. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Aw its good he knows but he shouldn't be kissing on her if he's married, even if he doesn't love his wife. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: April 25 2012

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

Aw thats so sad. I know what Nick did was bad but I hope they can talk and work things out. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

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Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5

I'm glad Bianca gave Ellie and chance and that they can head on the path to becoming friends or atleast speaking to each other. I'm glad Nico stood up for Ellie and can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This is interesting and I like how Nick doesn't care what his family may think of her and all that matters is his love for her. I just hope he stays that way and that he tells her about whatever it is his family does before she finds out for herself. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Yeah i think he is going to struggle with that because he has been raised to stay bery loyal to his family. Family comes first in his world. 

Thanks for reading 

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3

Oh wow, Bianca is something. Can't believe she was that rude to the girl without even giving her a chance first. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: May 26 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

I'm glad Nick stood up for Ellie instead of just letting his family insult her that way. I really can't believe they were that rude all because of her race, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.