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Summary:

Tai never understood why his family thought it was best to send him to the United States until he met Lana, a beautiful woman with a very troubled past and is broken. Can he fix her, or will she have to fix herself? And what's up with her obsessive ex boyfriend and her colleague who she sees as just a friend?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 15162
Read Count: 4703
Published: February 23 2013
Updated: July 16 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LIfe has a tendency to throws obstacles and matters of the hear are no different.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: February 27 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So far so good. I am curious to see how all their lives will be affected by their choices.  I t seems That Tai is a man that is in store for the twist of fate as well as Lana.  I know that Channy feels her life is over as most teens do but time heals all wounds and any guy that cannot see how wonderful she is is not worthy of her.  I support Lana for breaking up with her ex because she knew that he was not for her, fate has someone better in store. As for kent i hope that he will find happiness as well and learn to open up just a little.

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Date: February 28 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

  It seems that the sisters have more to deal with than i originally thought and that makes them realistic.  Channy has more issues than i thought and the fact they are not telling will only hurt them in the end.  As for the father, i know he sacrificed alot to be a real father and it is time to to start living his life.  I hope they will be able to overcome their obstacles and find some type of happiness.

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Date: March 18 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lana does have a troubled past and she sees herself as broken and that there is no man out there just for her.  Tai is trying to find himself or a part that completes him in a foreign country can be difficult.  Two people being brought closer as each day comes and goes.  How it will it happen only time will tell.  



Author's Response:

Thank you more to come.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16 2013

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Summary:

When it Hurts so Bad

 

 

When best childhood friends, Cassandra Bishops and Jae-Hoon Whitaker, share a night of passion, they find that making their new, intimate relationship prosper would prove to be more challenging than they realized. When heart breaking secrets come to light and obstacles arise, will they choose to fight for their love or will they go their separate ways?

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 30419
Read Count: 9388
Published: March 19 2013
Updated: August 11 2013


Title: Chapter 12: Act 1: Ch12

It seems that people always try to sweep their troubles under the rug until they are ready to face it.  However the things under the rug nag at us.  Only time will tell when she will be able to face it for her own sake and not just because of other people.



Author's Response:

Hey reader101, I wish I could write a response as deep as your review, but I simply can't! I agree with you. I think Cassandra really does need to face these issues head on. If she is serious about being with this guy, she can't keep pussyfooting around the problem. She needs to speak her mind and not worry if what she says or do will determin whether this man leaves or stay. Fear is her worst enemy.
Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 22 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Act 1: Ch 11

Life is complicated, simple as that.  No one said it was always like sunshine and happy days.  Time apart perhaps is the best thing for them.  A for the update always worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :)

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Date: June 22 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Act 1: Ch16

  It is true that things are a little bumpy but every relationship have it s share of bumps.  The point is that they do love each other and that they still have a chance to work things out.  Not saying thst it will be easy but anything worth having is worth the struggle.  No one wants to deal with the tough choices but life is not always a walk in the park.  A situation like this would seem beyond all help and best to cut losses.  Of course everyone is different and trying is alot better than just giving up.

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Date: July 28 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Act 1: Ch 15

  Considering everything that has happaned, her aunt was the best solution in this situation.  She clearly knows what she is talking about and solid advice is good advice.  This applies to many of lifes obstacles.  This is what Cassandra needed to hear in order move forward wirh her life.  

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: July 28 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1: Ch 1

It always seems that life likes to deal more bad hands than good and that things will not change.  So far so good.  It appears that what happans in the past always has a way of coming back.

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Date: April 06 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Episode 1: Ch 2

  A little more detail is helping to move the story along with a much more natural flow that is not rushed.  Flashbacks are usually helpful in stories that deal with trust issues and fights.  I hope that she will be alright.



Author's Response:

Gah! I know this is late, but thanks for your review and input. Greatly appreciated :)

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Date: April 06 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Episode 1: Ch 3

Apparent feelings that are clouded by life can be a real pain for anyone.  At one time or another, there comes a time when we feel the need to make a life change.

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Date: April 07 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1: Ch 1

Wow is all i have at the moment.

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Date: April 10 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Episode 1: Ch 2

I can see that there will be quite a few flashbacks that will fill in the blanks.



Author's Response:

Yes yes quite a few :3

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Date: April 10 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Episode 1: Ch 4

There is nothing wrong with picking up the pieces and trying to start a realtionship because the feeling were all ready there.  I know she loves him and is afraid that he might leave again.  It just seems that they had to wait for the right time.

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Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Episode 1: Ch 5

Her sister really is something else, i would prabably feel the same way Cassandra is now.  They are moving at their own pace, enjoying every moment they have together.  The futrure is unclear and it is understadable for Jae-Hoon's feelings of calme before the storm.  They are in a realationship that is rare and often met opposition.

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Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Episode 1: Ch 6

Drama,Drama,and more Drama.  Things really are heating up. I did not expect the situation at the Hospital.  I know know that this is what he has been dreading about.  Either way i know he will feel he has hurt Cassandra once again.  I also wonder what is wrong with Cassandra and how she will take the news.

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Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Episode 1: Ch 7

News like this is something that needs to be discussed in person and not at the spur of the moment.  Where will this lead them.



Author's Response:

So true. Often times people skim over a problem just so that they can get it out of the way and avoid confrentation. But when you do that, nothing gets resolved. Thanks for your input :)

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Date: May 06 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Episode 1: Ch 8

They both have their trials that are forcing them to make fast decisions.  What is needed is time to communicate .

 

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Date: May 06 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Episode 1: Ch 9

 Did not expect the miscarriage.  This is a sad moment but it was the only way they would talk to each other.  There is still many things to dicuss.  Jae will have to come clran.with her or risk losing the woman he loves for good.  Everyone has skeletons but that does not mean that life is a dead end.

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Date: May 13 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Act 1: Ch 10

Trouble in paradise.  Things will only get worse before getting any better.  Sooner or later they will jabe to face their problems but for now a time to be away is in order.



Author's Response:

Reader101, you just read my mind. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Date: June 01 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Act 1: Ch 13

Cassandra is more level headed and thinks things through, that is a refreshing notion.  She realizes that everyone makes bad decisions that we must live with.  Cassandra is willing to try to work things out and have a relationship.  It is never easy dealing with a loved one having a child ftom an ex.  Jae is taking responsibility and that is what makes him a real man.

I understand that Diana is trying to help her but when it all comes down to it, this is between Jae and Cassandra.  She still needs to confront him and have a much needed heart to heart.  He does love her but he also wants to take care of his duties.  What his ex did is no excuse and it will stay with him.  I also worry that she w

ill use this child as an excuse to get back into his good favor.

Anyway

Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: July 10 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Act 1: Ch 14

A mother to daughter converstion was exactly what Cassandra needed and she needed to.know that her mother and family will always be there.  A mother always knows the right thing to say and that reminds us all to be thankful to have parents.  Talking about life changing issues is the best way to move forward with life.  Seeing her spend time with her family during the hoildays brings back all those happy go lucky feelings that come with spending the hoildays with loved ones.  These are the moments that make people happy when life throws a boulder.

That text message is the push that steered her in the direction to try and make this relationship work and that Jae wants the same.  The point is that they do love each other and life is just throwing curve balls af them and everything is being put to the test.  Before sbe could send the message, she is told that someone is there to see her.  I thilnk i know who it is but i will just wait for the day the update appears and see if i was right

This story is more than i expected, stories like these are one of a kind.  There are always interaccial stories on the chamber that help keep this type of relationship alive.  Life is not always easy and relationships are no exception.  Blasian stories are rare and tis may be my favorite becaues the plot is realistic.  Another is that race is not the main issue and they really love one another.  Thank you for all the hard work, sweat, and tears that went into this and your other stories.

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Date: July 10 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Act 1: Ch 17

The new year is a time to start a new beginning.  Jae and Cassandra are willing to try and work things out and that is a positive step forward. It seems that Antoinette is not as honest as she claims but it is quite a situation.  This year will definetly be a trail of obstacles.



Author's Response:

Yes, the new year will definitely be filled with some trials. Thank you so much for following act 1.

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Date: August 12 2013

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Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41275
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15-Vows

Things are changing, pure and simple there is no hiding that.  Both of them.are secretive and stubborn that it is kind of cute.  Neither of them have it easy and their lives are constantly being watched and that is what makes them perfect.  Nicholi is experiencing feelings he has never felt before and does not plane on letting Laura go.  Laura has alot to consider and is weary about showing weakness by falling in love.

As for the letter, Nicholi and his curiosity have once again got the better of him and now wonders what Tomaso his right hand man is hiding.  Either way the truth will be revealed in due time in a delicate manner.  Nicholi is smitten and perhaps that is a gift as well as a curse but either way he sounds fine with it. As for the phone call the news is intense but he has made it known that he will not keep secrets from Laura.  Things are getting good.

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Date: July 13 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14-Promises

Things are becoming very interesting indeed.  Laura seems to just win people over without much effort.  Just like Tomaso said,  i hope Nicholi knows what he is doing.  This woman is full of suprises that never cease to surprise him.  She is clearly not going anywhere if he has to do with it.  

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2013

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