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Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41275
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13-Believe This

Laura is not who she seems, that os to be expected from an army child with the stealth and the hidden weapon.  Tomaso is right when he tells Nicholi that she is a keeper, she is the type of woman he can have in this world that can understand him.  Like Nicholi, she has to watch her back 24/7.   She is the highest as well as an unexpected attraction.  Things are getting good.

 

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Date: June 08 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12-Morning

Knowing alittle more about Nicholi makes him a bit easier to undderstand and how he is slowly changing.  Their really is something changing on him.  However, he still lives the life of a crime boss and he can never show weakness.  But one thing is clear and that is that Laura will be a center point in his life.  As for the meeting in her living room, she is more calm than i would be.

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Date: June 08 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Like the visual and it helps by bringing life into the characters.

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Date: June 06 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Okay a man that wanted a change, understsndable.  So far so good the character is understandable.

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Date: June 06 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I feel for Laura, life is not always sushine and flowers.  Oppurtunity comes when we least expect it.  

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Date: June 06 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3-First Meeting

The first encounter is ususlly the most powerful, or in this case curiosity with a hint of annoyance.  The mam has been hooked, pure and simple.  Laura has made it clear that she will not be another pretty face that is willing.  Destiny is a pain, bur it can also be an adventure.

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Date: June 06 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4-Who is he

A little rough around the edges with an attitude to match.  The scar is a nice touch and gives him a dangerous edge.  Her headaches will soon begin.  She is only human and these feelings are as natural as breathing.  Let the drama begin.

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5-Who is she

The info on her is surprising as well as interesting to him and it only makes the conquest a top goal.  His life seems to have gained meaning to the mundane.  He clearly loves a challenge and will do all he can to acomplish it.

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

Wow pure and simple.

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7-Pieces falling into place

The work of a crime man is never done.  His ambitions are going in a different direction.  Nicholi has a new spark of life in him and all thanks to Laura.  

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8-Second Meeting

Okay someone is in denial, that is fot sure.  That little ecounter has stirred them to the core.  They both have wild imaginations.  The holster would have surprised anyone.  Sooner or later, Laura will have to face reality.  Nicholi is clearly one with his mind and body that much is sure.  He wants her and plans to make it a reality.

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9-The past

They both are troubled, this is one thing they both share and what draws them together.  Laura was unwanted by her fathet and her brothers detested her, talk about harsh.  Well that is their loss, they do not deserve to know her.  Little does she know that someone perfect for her is right in front of her.  

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10-Resolution

All those held in emotions came out in a full circle.  Nicholi was out of his element but at least he was near.  I am still confused to why she thought he was gay.  That sentence definetley woke him up and it was a riot.  At least she let go off all that pain she held in for so long.  well worth waiting for.

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11-Pleasurable retribution

Enough said.  This chapter speaks for itself.

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16-Truth and Lies

The truth has finally been revealed serimg that Nicholi refuses to keep any secrets from her.  He is so smitten with her that it is kind of cute.  The way these two stories connect but also are telling their own was something unexpected.  Laura has gone through so much in her life and deserves to be happy.  Based on what has been written, her father did not love her and lied to her.  

I know that Nicholi wants to protect her from everything but he of all people knows what it is like covering his tracks.  He will never be able to live a normal life, but he refuses to left Laura leave.

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Date: July 14 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Reunions

Step one is done.  They say the hardest step is usually the first. the sexual tension only seemed to make it worse. I wonder how Laura will act to seeing her brother aftyer such a long time. Nicholi seems to have an answer for almost everything.

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Date: April 01 2014

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Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40311
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Seeing Red

Well that was different.  

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Date: October 08 2013

Title: Chapter 19: Rebound

Well after reading this for the second time around I can see where everyone is coming from. I know that Danny is going through a tough time but sometimes the unexpected happens.  He needs to understand tga Noni will only love him like a brother. Both Danny and Annna have their past pains and perhaps this is not exactly the best approach butlife never comes with an instruction manual. Loki continues to react the wordly customs that are funny as well as true. Pop culture, shocking...not really.

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Date: April 24 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

   I can honestly say that getting high is not for me. But everyone has their guilty pleasures, not to mention they are all adults so whatever. Okay first off, it was long overdue for Jenna to be set straight and not just by Danny but also by Loki as well. Her husband has also cleared the air eventhough I doubt there was much left after that session. As for the snow, it may be me but are they all just too high to care? There was definitely alot of experimenting going on in this chapter.

  Loki being high was just amusing and coming from the god of trickery it only made his statements even more unusual. But it was still a bit strange. What exactly was Loki doing and was this thing with the snow a part of a bigger plan in the wings? Now as for Marshall something continues to nag at me that there is more than meets the eye, that and the situation when he touched Terrance. No matter I suppose as everything will come full.circle in due time.  At least Danny is trying to move on and maybe will come to terms that what he thought he wanted was not what he expected.

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Date: April 24 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Medicine

No need to rush. This was full of laughs. But it was also filled with moments of uncertainty as well as a feeling of dread.  Nothing good comes without a bit of storns. There us clearly something on the horizon.

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Date: April 15 2014

Title: Chapter 20: This...Bitch...

I know we should love our enemies but Anna needs to be taken down a few feet. I hope she gets what she ddeserves and hope Karma has a field day with her.  

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Date: April 15 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Voices

well this is not going to be as simple as I thought.  Life is uncertain and things change in a split second.  My condolences for your loss I know how you feel.  

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Date: October 05 2013

Title: Chapter 15: The Gun in the Bun

Intense may be the best way to discribe her story.  No one shuld suffer the way she did.  Life has made her tougher and slightly closed off.  Some like Loki is just what she needs, no other man would be able to understand her.  Noni is not some naive easy woman, like Loki she has her own skeletons.  What happened to Shanice was not her fault.  Her friend would want her to live on.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, she and Loki are both pretty closed off, and a lot of it has to do with self-esteem. Loki always sensed he was different and was often ridiculed because of it. Noni's experiences have made her shy away from the est of society. And Shanice may not have had the best ideas, but she just wanted her and her best friend--her sister, to live a better life than they had when they were growing up. She thought money would give them that life...she didn't take the dangers into consideration. That was partly because she was so young, but also because she never really had maternal guidance to tell her better. Noni was there, but she didn't really have TOO much hands-on maternal guidance. Of course her grandmotehr was there, but then she died. The lessons she learned from her grandma while she was alive are things she remembers to this day. I think if she had had her around longer, or a protective mother around, a lot of her pain could have been avoided.

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Alone

It seems that Loki is not the only person with inner demons, talk about irony.  These two were made for one another.  When they are together they are happy and at peace, their inner demons are dormant.  Noni is the one that accepted his flaws knowing that she has plenty of her own.  The fact thar she can understand him and sees a kindred spirit in him and someone who is strong enough to take care of her. 

Things are becoming intense in a good way.  For the record, this story is not all sunshine these are beings that face obstacles.



Author's Response:

They really do seem to connect in a way that they haven't been able to with others. For now, I think they are on the road to making peace with their past. Though it's not all sunshine, the sunlight does help illuminate the shadows.

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Date: May 20 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

I have yet to read a story on this site that gives Loki's side seeing him as a man that has his own inner demons.  So far i am intrigued.  Everyone at one time or another feels that they need to get away.  He may be surprised at what he sees and learns about earth(Midgard to gods).



Author's Response:

Yeah, they always tend to leave that out. Loki is a hugely complex character. Glad you are interested, and thanks for your review.

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Date: April 13 2013

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