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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196765
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Well this had to occur.in order for them.to move forward in their lives.  Sasha is gaining more confidence and coming to terms with herself so that is a start.  As for Dimitri, it seems that he has his own issues to work out.

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Date: December 18 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Well this chapter certainly answered.alot of questions as well as create more questions that will be explained in time.

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Date: October 06 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

well it seems that things are going into a different direction.  It seems that Dimitri still has a long way to go.  Little by little, Sasha is becoming more confidant.  As for Dina and Slade, I really do not know how to feel.  They started off well I suppose that things change or maybe it was not meant to be.  As for the party, Dimitri took a huge step about making their relationship public.  Of course all good pros come with a bad con.  The appearencr of his father really pushed him off the edge.  The drama will soon begin and I wonder if he will stand up to his father or return to his old ways?

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Date: August 16 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Sooner or later the family was hoing to be brought into the situation.  Sasha is changing him slowly in ways that are not yet clear to him.  From the reaction of seeing his brother, family ties look like their hanging by a thread.  So much drama is on the horizon.   All will be revealed as the story continues developing. 



Author's Response:

Yup, you got that right. Now the question is what role will the family play in their developing relationship. ;-) Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 27 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

A day together is what they both needed some alone tie together to talk without outside interuptions.



Author's Response:

Yea, I really enjoyed writing this chapter. Thank you for you review!

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: June 27 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

As for Faye and Jaelynn, good riddiance to bad rubbish, the type that rot from the inside out. Dina sounds like she enjoyed her date with slade and his dog Sammy.  Sasha finally realised that the people she thought were her friends cared little about her.  Good thing Dina was ther to diffuse the situation, that is a true friend.  The realization only deepened her desire to see Dmitri despite the time or her emotional state.  She really needed to be comferted and Dmitri clearly saw it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 27 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

A talk with Slade was just what was long overdue, thank you karma.  At least Sasha and Dmitri do have people they trust and depend on.  I know that Dmitri is out of his comfort zone and feels confused, perhaps he is growing up a little.  



Author's Response:

Let's hope so or else Sasha is gonna get her heart broken. :-( Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Finding out alittle more about Sasha makes perfect sense to how she acts.  Sasha and her outburst has struck a chord with Dmitri that was not there.  Although she is attracted to him, she expects something more.  This is a reaction that he is not use to and it is a pain. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I detested her so called friend Faye before but without a doubt she is superficial a well as selfish.  It seems that Dmitri is not the only one courting.  Something about Sasha has caught his attention.in ways he never saw before.  What happened to Sasha at the bus stop is unfprgivable.  At least Dmitri was there.



Author's Response:

It really was unforgivable! I never planned on mkaing Faye such a bitch but I'm actually happy I did. The story needs an antagonist that just makes your skin crawl. smh. Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Sasha is alittle too nice for her own good.  These people.make me want to jump off a cliff.  She is herself and her beauty is on the inside. Dmitri is not a type of guy a sane average girl would ever get the light of day.  He is forward and expects things to come to him.  Whatever is going on with these two can go either way.



Author's Response:

Let's hope she eventually grows a backbone and learns who her real friends are. Thank you for your review!

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Something is slowly changing, that is for sure. Friends that do not notice you are not true friends.  In his own way,Dmitri has a point about her and her friends.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow shallowness in it s purist form.  Why is she friends with these girls.  



Author's Response:

More to come! Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Nice cast i understand the appeal.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

okay this whole family is crazy no wonder Dimitri left.  The need to keep secrets in his situation is justified.  Nadia should not be talking about Sasha being good enough for her brother.  I just hope he is ready for when life makes an unexpected twist, him ams Sasha.  



Author's Response:

haha. They are crazy! Thank you for reviewing! More coming soon! :-)

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Date: July 03 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

His sister is definey trying to put a wedge in between them.  Slowly am i starting to it see the manipulative side of Nadia, she is not trying to hid it.  As for the love scene, i will just say that was different for the both of them.  It will be difficult to pull them apart though i see that Nadia will try.  The time for obstacles is on the horizon.



Author's Response:

Yes, it definitely is on the horizon. Let's hope they can withstand it. Thank you for your review!

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Date: July 05 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

As much as they argue, his brother was right about Nadia all things considered.  Dominic is level headed and sees even asking.  He sees Sasha as a special beauty that Dimitri fails to acknowlege.  Sasha loves him but based on observation and points proven, Dimitri continues to deny any relationship.  How long can he go on living like this before he realizes that he is not moving forward but rather moving back.

Many things were brought into the light, things that needed to be said without any filters.  Dimitri still has his fathers influence over him even now with Sasha in the center fold.  The truth is like acid, it burns everything until their is nothing left.  It has sunk in about Nadia and her problems but there is still the situationwith Dimitri and his relation to Sasha.

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Date: July 24 2013
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

That is a lot to take in.

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Date: June 29 2014
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

That is a lot to take in.

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Date: June 29 2014
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

What will happen next is anyone's guess.

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Date: June 29 2014
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Wow that was an.intense chapter indeed.

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Date: June 29 2014
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Blood and Wine by shyangel
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Summary:

Tomaso lived for Nicholi and they both survived harsh times together but now Nicholi was moving on with someone else and Tomaso was on his own. That is, until he meets Nathaniel. The attraction is instant and Tomaso wants nothing to do with him for several reasons, the first and most important one was that no one knew he was gay and he wanted to keep it that way. If only forgetting Nathaniel was as easy as forgetting the rest.

 

Nathaniel knew he was gay and he didn't try to hide it. He hated commitment and loved playing around, that’s why Nathaniel thought he would be a bachelor forever. However things changed when he met Tomaso. The Italian wasn’t the type that Nathaniel would usually go for but he couldn’t get him out of his head. Now he wants more than the Italian’s body he wants his heart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9019
Read Count: 4042
Published: June 13 2013
Updated: April 02 2014

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3- Back and forth

It is clear that things are not going to be as easy breezy as either had planned.  The attraction between these two is so thick it can be cut with a knife.  On a side note, Tomaso has made a slight breakthrough regarding his sexuality and that's a start.  I am not one to plcae stereotypes but the story kind of sounded like so in the beginning but it was also factual too.  One man acknowledges his sexuality while the other has kept it hidden even in today's society it can still be taboo.  Both of these men have had tough lives that requires the use of secrets and it can be difficult to move forward.  

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Date: April 02 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2-Important Information

The plot thickens.  Tomaso is a subtle as a loaded gun ready to shot at any moment.  Things are getting really interesting it does not fail to please.  Nathaniel really has his work cut out for him good thing he is an army brat.

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Date: July 12 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1-First Meeting

First impressions are usually important, this is one exception seeing how the two of them are both usual.  One is fine with being gay while the other is living a lie.  That coffee shop woman is good at observations that it is amusing.  The first meeting is ironic and possibly a forshadow of things to come.

 



Author's Response:

I like your insight. the coffee shop woman is a loose reprisentation of someone in my life. They have the ability to see right through you. i figured the characters in my story might need someone like her around.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed
Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Well this answered any questions i had in full.  Laura is not alone and the fact that he has been looking for her is unexpected.  It seems that he family is not as bad as originally thought.  This will be interesting indeed.  Love appears to be in their futures as well as never expecting it.  

I have nothing against homosexuals, in fact their stories are quite imteresting and this is the first one i ever read on the chamber.  



Author's Response:

Her family is pretty complicated, the biggest factor is her controlling dad.  Love is usually unexpected.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: June 13 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

The cast has alot of appeal do i say continue as you were.

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Date: June 13 2013

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