Penname: Karmal [Contact]

Real name: Monica Keaton

Member Since: July 09 2011

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26196
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really loved this story. I can't wait to read more of them. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 164]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54485
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Love the story. Can't wait for more updates. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: May 04 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215422
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Looking forward to future updates. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: October 09 2014

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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11386
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017


Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

Grest so far. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: March 05 2016

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 960]
Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284293
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I love this story and can identify with Sugar. At some point in our lives we have had a man like her ex. It is so great when someone life Chef enters your life to love you and help you heal. I hope they created twins or triplets. She deserves to share Motherhood with someone that loves her. Looking forwatd to more updates. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I agree that we all have that one ex like Lance who just mess you up so bad that you have to rebuild your life again. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2017

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 147]
Summary:

Fourteen years after his twin brother's suicide Brian Callaghan has to face all the guilt and emotions that he's been carrying for years head on. An unlikely companion from high school Mahalia Evans is there to see him through.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 18262
Read Count: 2622
Published: January 05 2018
Updated: March 08 2018


Title: Chapter 1: ONE LESS FAGGOT

I really like this story. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: January 18 2018

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

 



 


Common sense would have told twenty-seven-year-old Pressley Hamilton that jumping from one relationship into another isn’t the smartest idea. But what is common sense in comparison, to Ryan Morris’s smooth talk, hot body, and unyielding desire to make Pressley his?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4600
Read Count: 8057
Published: December 21 2018
Updated: June 13 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great beginning. Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.