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In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80852
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

One of my favorite stories so far, I get soooo excited everytime I see an update. Can't wait for the next update, I love all the characters and their stories. Sooo Please update soon.

 

P.S. I've read all your other stories and they are amazing as well, your a great writer, keep doing what your doing.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  I know I've strayed away from Lei and Micah a bit, because my muse was really in an erotic zone and those kids weren't ready for that so I had to difuse it through Teddy Lee and Sabrina.  Ah, but the senior year is here and they're both 18 consenting adults...so more of Micah and Lei is on the way!

 Reviewer: Joanna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.