Penname: skriver [Contact]

Real name: Emma

Member Since: October 03 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Enjoying reading. Currently reading  ANight to Remember By Eve Vaughn and Deceit, Regret, Confession by Kaleah.




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Reviews by skriver


Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104083
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

This story is readable in it simple style/plot.  It doesn't make you think alot because, you kinda know what will happen next, so it makes for easy reading. Unless the writer has a twist up her sleeves, for example Devyn stop acting like an overwrought teenage who can't life and start acting like a grown woman with self-confident. Anyway next chapter please.



Author's Response:

lol....Thx for the review....and she does have some growing up to do; but we all know ppl like that, don't we?

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Taught to see the worst in people so he lived life semi- emotionless, that is until he met her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1643
Read Count: 10516
Published: December 26 2011
Updated: August 23 2015


Title: Heat

Keep going, it's a great read.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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In NYC, all species come together with out fear of being shunned for who they are. Well, unless they got caught up in the Black Market, of course. It's the city where you can be yourself, as long as you have the power to back yourself up. Love and Life. Little Fae, Jacqueline Sabi, has a lot to learn when it comes to the outside world. When being the last of your kind makes you #1 on everyone's most wanted list, who can you trust? Vampires? Witches? Or the race that imprisoned you, werewolves?


 Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6605
Read Count: 3476
Published: February 03 2012
Updated: February 04 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Escape To A New World

A very good start. Your main character Jacqueline seem smart, I hope she continue to keep be smart and not be push around or have a chip on her shoulder. I like supernatural story that has a female who can hold her own.  So more please.



Author's Response:

Thank You! That's waht 'm trying to do. I love street samrt characters. More is coming.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Bad Beginnings

Wow Dominic is full of himself, but he has a point and I hop Jacqueline see the benefit and take him up on his offer for her own protection. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Another capter coming soon. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2012

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 424]
Summary:

She despised celebrities, maybe even hated them. That was until she met him. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 88706
Read Count: 298128
Published: June 18 2012
Updated: April 23 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow!!! Jason is wow,wow,wow,what a speciment and Keyshia wants him and who wouldn't.  As for her two friends, she needs to get new ones with morals. Great story, so more please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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A cop and a assistant discrict attorney hot moment.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1206
Read Count: 7788
Published: July 01 2012
Updated: June 17 2017


Title: One Last Time

This story seems like it's going to be a good read. Grayson caring and in love, Harmony, hot and cold emotions not good for Grayson,  but saying that I feel her past could be the reason for her mess up emotions. If that is the case then, I can't wait to read what happened to her, so on that note next chapter please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Crossover of Scandal and Revenge

The Grayson family calls in Olivia Pope to restore their family image, or so she thinks. A weekend meeting in the Hamptons with the Graysons nets a tragedy, a reveal about Emily Thorne Grayson and a face-to-face reunion with Fitz and Mellie Grant.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Scandal
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 23005
Read Count: 8594
Published: July 11 2012
Updated: September 02 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my goodnes, what is this you are writing and making me so exciting that I want to be the watcher of all the bugs placed in that house of scandal and now murder.  Whew.....So much is happening, it's hard to know who is who. But I must say this and it is bothering me a bit , is why is Olivia behaving so out of character, for a supposed highly intelligent woman who can fix anything , her behaviour is not as that.  She is so blinded by her own agenda that she is failing to think straight. I mean how could you let Mellie tell you who to have a baby with. I really think Olivia need to get her head out cloud nine and face reality and know she can't fix everthing....Jeez.... So onto the next scandalcious chapter please.

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Date: July 18 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 282]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81076
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 In Enemy Territory II

Wow!!! Josef annoucement was straight to the point so hopefully it mean Douglas, Fawn, Aunt Cecily and the rest of the backstabbers. I can't for the next chapter.  Hope your internet is back working, but hey  I'll wait.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2012

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I watch this guy swim in the OS London 2012 amd wonder if he and Phelp would date black girls, because I will be down for that chance LOL.  Anyway love the start, so please keep the chapters coming.

Reviewer: skriver Signed
Date: August 11 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 81]
Summary:

She was forced into his world thinking it was a nightmare, but with a gentle kiss and a heated touch she realized it was a dream come true. Unofrtunaly Asgard is anything but a fairytale.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Be My Hero
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 25622
Read Count: 14877
Published: August 15 2012
Updated: August 29 2012


Title: Chapter 11: XI

Wow!!! How gullible can Ava be.  Why is she not questioning the reason why Thor told her to keep away from the witch?  Well I for one would love to see that she wise up before she drink that posion and become infertile or disfigure.  I want to see Ava use that badass self she give Balder on the witch, well not in that way, but by following the feeling she get went something just isn't right. Anyway as the saying goes 'If you can hear you will feel'.  So next chapter please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6953
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012


Title: Chapter 1: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Dinner time!!! Ummm.... Who is going to be eating who....??? Chilling.... I think me curious....I mean two beautiful, it could only mean one thing, especially with this kind of title. Ummm......Indeed.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65822
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is so well writen, which makes it readable. I don't why some woman make themseleves single mums. When they choose not to tell their man.  I think it's selfish.  Azalea is selfish, I don't care what her excuse was, she was not in an abusive relationship, so she had no excuse. She is selfish!!!!!

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4-Who is going to run this town tonight?

I so agree with Matt.  Azalea is so wrong.  She selfishly kept his daughter from him, so he has the right to make up for those lost years.  She need to thank her lucky stars, he didn't filed for full custody, because unlike her he was thinking about his daughter.  I think you should make her feel shameful of her action and the consequences it brought.  But this a great story to read.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

 

 

 

Professor Wilson is in the office late again grading papers. I wonder who'll stop by...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19538
Read Count: 18965
Published: March 25 2013
Updated: November 24 2013


Title: Chapter 5: In the Woods

This story is a great read. I like your style. I kinda feel sorry for Amiya. She is falling for him and is going to be hurt by him.  I hope she fair well in what is coming in the near future.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Roddrick Kennedy likes to think that a strong dose of worrying is good for her health, and keeps her in control of her life. When she finds herself taking on everyone and their problems, she sees that maybe she should turn her attention to herself every once in a while. When Milo Vitale comes along to teach her how life can be stress free, she discovers herself in for a whirlwind of change as he helps to flip everything upside down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 58790
Read Count: 46799
Published: July 23 2013
Updated: February 28 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh no indeed!!!! It would not be the norm for a woman of colour to have an easy life/relationship especially with an attitude like the "angry black woman" a chip on their shoulder full of angry and hurt, brought on by their past. Roddrick is just that. I don't know why but most of the stories whether on this site or others with regards to women of colour have the same set scenario angry or weak or both. I wonder is this a reality insight.  But hey I love ready your story regardless of my rant lol.                                           

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

He's the world's most famous supermodel.

She's the church singer whose hypocritical lifestyle has been unveiled by one simple picture with him.

 

A story of redemption, love and family.  

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 26153
Read Count: 31591
Published: October 22 2013
Updated: October 24 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Burning the Mask

This story sound promising.  I like the cast photos of Glory and her Mum, just natural beauty of real black women. I don't know image you use for David, good looks. Now this story is going to be real for a lot of your reader, who will indentify with Glory two world, so I am looking forward to see where you take us on this journey of Glory. 

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

The death of the Crane patriarch changes the town of Harmony.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Passions
Characters: Eve Russell
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 50511
Read Count: 7288
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: April 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, such a complicated story, so many characters, with som much going on, just can't get my head around who is who. I hope you can do this justice and make your characters easy to know. I have read this chapter twice and I still can't define who the characters are, so I will read your next chapter to see if it make sense. But I must say Alistair sound like my kinda Guy 'Smooth' lol.

Reviewer: skriver Signed
Date: December 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34246
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Great read. Wow more drama for Griff and Roxie. Here is hoping they both wise up quickly lol.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Who doesn't want to be wanted



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4460
Read Count: 5864
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What I think is that I want to know what this story is about, so more please lol.



Author's Response:

Just bear with me and you'll get you questions answered.

Reviewer: skriver Signed
Date: January 30 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 106]
Summary:

He waited a thousand years for this day to come. He waited a thousand years for her to come into his life and say the two words that will make his life complete...I do.

Now that this day had come she will finally be his for eternity.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 1264
Read Count: 2843
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: January 17 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Readable first chapter. I like vamp...stories, so yeah more please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed
Date: January 30 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Cast

Goodlooking cast.  Now you need to write more that 3 chapters. Why? The brothers needs mate too. Lovely dark skin mates just like Lana. The adventures these brothers could have finding, fighting others for their mates. So more than 3 chapters please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143296
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

This woman is mess up. Lonely I don't think so. Damages is more like!!! Good read.  I do fel sorry for those men she is leading on, because of her damages past. Jodi needs therapy now.

 

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.