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Mind of a Minor: :Daydreamer
Smirker: :AnimeFreak
Grade A Procrastinator: :Complicated
If acquaintances had to pick My Deadly Sin they would probably pick Sloth & Pride - one pick is wrong.
Encased in what some people call a GlassHouse for reasons I can't explain but I'm a lot kinder then most people think.


:Believe in Love at First Sight but doubt it exist in 21st century:


:If Love is blind then it's certaintly colourblind:


 


New Year. New Goals. Time to write. write. and write.


Current Story:


In Blood We Pay (Smoking Guns & Black Roses - A Mafia Series)


Esmee's (Not So) Little Brother


Upcoming Story:


The Rise (I) The Fall (II) & Ouroboros (III) - The Golden Empire Trilogy


Make Me a Believer


3 Libras


 



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Retired
Consequence by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - New Year's Resolution

Yes! Yes! Yes! So flippin glad that Natalia kissed Anthony - finally!! Just praaay that she doesn't take it back - though I fear she will. Stay strong Anthony and hammerjack Natalia's walls...!

Barb - seriously.  I know she's blood but she's working my last nrrve. So damn pushy...! Damn.

 

Oh well thanks for the quick update! You simply rock!! :D

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Date: July 23 2014
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

this chapter was simply great. there were so many things that i liked. the one thing that stood out the most for me was that the father Anthony longed for was real and he fought for him - i really really really hope that Anthony and David get to meet and that you won't pull a Jax aka throw a sharp curveball that will literally knock us out, hahaha! XP

thanks for the fix, JJ! superb superb superb!

 



Author's Response:

"Pull a Jax?"  (*bats lashes innocently*)  Why whatever do you mean?  

LOL!  

Thanks Yuukiyanagi!  So glad you enjoyed chapter.

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Date: April 04 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

another very very good story! i'm truly enjoying and looking forward to seeing Natalia and Anthony grow closer as friends and as a couple. i cant stand Barb...! she's rude and keeps on butting in on Natalia's life - why? why the hell does she feel that need to do that...!?

i'm curious as hell about Richard - is he really such a cruel and two-faced person or are the reasons for his behaviour? why is he calling Natalia? does he want her back? if i was Natalia i would answer the phone or something because Richard strikes me as a person who can suddnely show up on your doorstop if you keep ignoring him - and that would be very intersting if he did, LOOOL!

i know you have tones going so i wont ask for an update because i know the wait will be worth it! thanks for sharing this story with us! :D

 

 



Author's Response:

The reasons behind Barb and Richard's behavoir and his calls will be revealed in future chapters.  As for your presumptions about Richard popping up unannounced, excellent call. 

I'm hoping to eventually get back to this story when my schedule eases up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!!!

 

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Date: June 22 2014
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Regrets and Goodbyes

JJ - i need you to bring the rainbow and sunshine because i'm fresh out of tears...! another emotional filled chapter that was beautiful written. you easily conveyed Talia's feelings and as a reader i wanted to help her so badly...! i dont know why Anthony hasn't called and that makes me worried - he isnt a guy that breaks promises easily - especially to Talia.

this was so good! thank you for the triple treat updates!!



Author's Response:

I know I've been taking you through these last few chapters, but I promise things will get better...eventually.  Why Anthony failed to call and what it means for him and Natalia coming up in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Cassius Noir, and for my the clip!!! Lol.  MJ he is not.

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Date: September 10 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Risk of Regression


Anthony has seen the light  and is coming home! i swear my heart nearly stopped when i thought he slept with that woman - Heady, lool! - but he didnt. i understand Anthony for not telling his family the truth about his time away. i mean the whole situation is MESSY...but i dont know. his lie kinda reminded me of Richard and how he used to lie to Natalia & his family - i just hope this "little" lie doesn't bit him in the a** later on...

i really like Rich. yes he's a drinking manwhore but he loves his baby brother and he made me laugh. i loved that Anthony promised to hook him up with Barbara - “Is she a beautiful as Natalia?”

“They could pass for twins.”  If Natalia frowned all the fucking time and was possessed by the devil. - LOOOL!!

One question how many kids does Richard have? Three sons or?

chills ran down my spine when Richard called Natalia - he isn't going to go away easily or quietly. i wouldn't be surprised if he is at Natalia's house when Anthony returns, lool. smh.

bring the angst and the drama - i'm here to the end! this story is so goood!!



Author's Response:

Lol!!!  I can't get enough of your clips.  Okay, on to the response.

Anthony did recreate the trauma that ended Natalia and Richard's marriage, and unfortunately, it is sure to come back and bite him in the arse.  I'm with you on liking Rich.  He's dysfunctional as hell but so unabashedly himself, at least when it comes to Anthony.  You haven't seen the last of him. 

Richard has three kids, all sons.  Rich and Thomas are from his first marriage with Theresa, and Anthony is from his second marriage with Mercede.

Don't be surprised by anything Richard does.  He's decided he wants Natalia back, and we all know he isn't above using unscrupulous method to have what he wants.  Stay tuned, because the angst and drama has just begun.

Thanks for faithfully reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!!! You and your clips keep me smiling and encouraged.

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Date: September 14 2014
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

f.me. i'm crying. this was perfect just perfect. so so happy right now...!! TWINS! hell yeah...!!

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thank you for making my monday. JJ! THANK YOU!

 



Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, Yuukiyanagi!

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Date: April 13 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Miss Me

nooo...! one more calm update - pretty please, JJ? =p it's like you never left - a superb and hot update! i've missed these two - thank you so much for the update! :D



Author's Response:

You know I love you, but I'm afraid the storm has already made landfall.  (*shrinks behind computer screen*)  Sorry. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!  And I promise to make up for the misery in furtre chapters.

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Date: January 03 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Victim of Deja Vu

 

 

not much of a review but it was good reeeeeal good. the update that is. not the vodka, lool!

thanks for a quick update! i hope barb stays the *beep* away. dont want her going on about how it was about time you broke up with that boy. lord. she's coming - isnt she? -__-' 

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  You already know.  Thanks Yuukiyanagi!!!

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Date: January 07 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars

if there was any doubt before know that i DEEETEST Barf *cough* i mean Barb - i just cant! i have no words. the way she lied straight to Natalia's face simly irks me to the MAX. Jamison is a phony! patient and loving my ass...!  he knew exactly where Natalia stood and yet he ambushed her - in front of their families

to me he's like everyone else who seem to think that Natalia needs to be led through life - as if she's a child that doesnt know any better. i would get that if she had been deadly sick as a baby or something but she's not. Talia is stronger then most think. she has been riped apart time and time again - these people dont know anything...!

so out of the blue - i was wondering if you're going to introduce us to Barf's *coughs* i mean Barb's hubby kline? i know he was mentioned briefly previous and that he's sick or something?

other than that - thank you for another brilliant brillant read! :D



Author's Response:

Barf (lol) is deserving of whatever ridicule she garners, and she's not even done yet.  Jamison is open to interpretation.  I can definitely see why you would think he's not as innocent as he seems.  You'll get a little bit of a better understanding of him next chapter.  That may or may not change your mind about him.  At any rate, I agree that people love to think they know what's best for Natalia, and that she's stronger than they and, more importantly, she thinks. 

Kline is a brittle diabetic.  He will be appearing in a scene or two in the future, but I don't know that it will be very long or feature any dialogue on his part. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!  So glad you enjoyed the update!

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Date: January 11 2015
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Mirror, Mirror

After have read this two chs I feel that I judged jamison too harshly and now...I feel sorry for him because this tearphy is not going to work out the way he thinks it will. however I hope it'll help him to heal and teach him to not to settle for less - he's a good guy and he deserves real love.

Rita was a breath of fresh air. Blunt. Straightforward and fierce...! When  she said she was wrong about Natalia - was that a compliment, lool!? I also like Jamison's mum and i hoped she and Natalia would be friends but yeah...that's not likely.  

 

Thanks for quick & great updates! Still hope Barf *cough*Barb gets run over and i hope Natalia goes to party - now that would be something else ;) 😉



Author's Response:

Yuukiyanagi, where have you been?  I was getting ready to send out a search party.

Rita saying she misjudged was sort of a compliment, but nothing for Nat to get excited about.  Viv and Nat remaining friends when and if the ruse is finally over is not to unlikely, but highly unlikely. 

There are a lot of people hoping an automobile will send Barb to the great beyond.  And Natalia going to the party would be something else.  We'll see if she does next chapter.  Update posted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: January 16 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

sorry for going m.i.a. i've been or rather i'm sick, tthe flu, that's why but i'm getting better now :)

very proud that Natalia went to the party even though it hurt like f**k. i loved the last scene when she drove past the ocean - for me it felt like the start of something new. i love rich - he's a straightup jackass but damn in ch 23 he was just awful. i get it if he wants to open Anthony's eyes and help him realize that he's lying to himself but Rich went to faaar and the banter between him and Sabrina...uhm...i wouldn't be surprised if Rich slept with her - hope not. but rich is rich...

so so so glad to see an update with Anthony. i've missed him(!!!) and wanted to hear his thoughts. wow...! Anthony isn't doing well. not at all.hope to see more of him *hint, hint, wink, wink - LOOL*

thanks for the updates!!

p.s. Anthony can use my shoulder - or ANYTHING ELSE too, JJ! =P



Author's Response:

Well, I hope you're feeling better.  It's been like a week, so I'm sure you're cured.

I like Rich too.  He could have chosen a different approach, but he felt attacked himself and might have believed Anthony wouldn't have listened.  A little more on that next chapter.  As far as him sleeping with Sabrina, you'd like to think he wouldn't do that to his brother, but one never knows.

Your wish is granted.  You will see more of Anthony in next chapter.  And I'll send him on over to your place and you can do with him what you will.  (Is it wrong that I'm pimpin' out my characters?) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!

 

 

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Date: January 19 2015
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

you know i love Ant, right? but i'm not happy with him. this miserable life he's "living" isn't right and he's the only one that can change that because Sabrina isn't going anywhere - no matter how badly he treats her so if Anthony wants out then man the f-up dude...!

i was super proud of Nat because Richard is charming as hell...! there were part in ch 23 when i nearly melted, lol! so when she decided that she would tell Richard right away that there weren't going to be any seconds chances and applauded her but shiiiit...these Talerico just keep on showing up on her doorstep ...!

hahaha! I mean RICH...!?  Rich showed up! 

 



Author's Response:

You're right, these Talerico men are relentless.  And Nat seems to have a soft spot for all of them.  Let's see if that's all she has for Rich.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi, and the clipart I can't stop watching!  I'm a bit mesmerized by that wagging bottom lip. 

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Date: February 01 2015
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

Rich is KING...!! LOOOOVE him!!!

i mean this chapter was a fucking masterpiece - it had everything! i've nothing intelligent to say - i'm soo flippin happy right now! thank you! thank you! thank you!



Author's Response:

I LOVE this review!!!  Thank you, Yuukiyanagi!!!  So happy you enjoyed the chapter!

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Date: February 04 2015
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Happy New Year?

still skipping happily thorugh fields

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again. i apologize for this whack review, lool! but when something is so so good - you dont have to say anything. i'm loving this - this very moment and Rich...! hahaha, that guy is something else and always makes me laugh whenever he appears.

i'm looking forward getting to meet Thomas *rubs hands* it's going to be fun, fun fun...! :D

thanks for this steamy steamy update!



Author's Response:

You're very welcome.  And no need to apologize.  As always, your review made me smile : ) The wait to meet Thomas is over.  Update's posted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!

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Date: February 19 2015
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Jesus...! What...!? We're having? You mean those tiny shoes might come to be used!!?? I just...

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Author's Response:

LOL!  I LOVE IT!!!  Thanks Yuukiyanagi!

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Date: February 24 2015
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

i forget to say that Thomas is on my s*** list...! what he said didn't impress me. not at all. i mean if Richard couldn't accept Anthony when he was an innocent child then what makes Thomas think that Richard would accept Anthony now, even if he dumped Natalia...?!! is there a reason behind Richard's hostile towards Anthony or he just resent him because Anthony was born at a time when Richard didn't want any more kids?

i'm was glad that Rich had a "come-to-Jesus (LOOL!) talk with him (which i'm curious to hear more about =p). however i was a bit disappointed in Anthony. he knew that Thomas wasn't happy hearing the "whole" story but he was glued to the phone. work or not i wished he would've been more supportive - instead Natalia stepped up and showed us a major change - she's done apologizing her love for Anthony.

along on my list of people that need to leave Anthony alone is his mother. i get that she's concern and worries about Anthony but she isn't listning to a word Anthony is saying - he's happy and that should be enough!

you've warned us that the road ahead is going to be tough and maybe the person i think  will bring everyone together - because i refuse to believe that this story wont have a HEA, JJ...! LOOL! - is Anthony's grandfather. i loved how he took Anthony fishing and i believe he will end the upcoming storm...

...weeell, at least i hope so, lool! thanks for the updates!



Author's Response:

I get your disappoint with Anthony.  He did leave the castle unguarded.  Between work and believing his brother had the good sense and decency not to go in on Nat as soon as his back was turned, he didn't anticipate a need to protect her from him.  Had Anthony not been on the phone, he would have probably been more aware of the tension and did what he needed to do to keep his brother in his place.  But Anthony feels he's behind the curve with Natalia, and is constantly working trying to measure up.  You'll get a bit more insight into that, what Rich told Thomas, why Richard resents Anthony, and the role Pop-Pop plays all of this very soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!!!

 

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Date: February 24 2015
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

 i get it, really i do but this could easy end badly. the journals are in his office and someone could slip up - looord, the suspense is killing me!

brilliant update - thank you!



Author's Response:

The build up is a bit much, but the tension and the story will soon come to an end.  Thanks Yuukiyanagi!

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Date: March 02 2015
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Friends and Foes

maaaan, i knew that Natalia would eventually meet the family but i hoped it would be on her turf - not in philly, at a funeral and where Sabrina is going to show up because she will, lool!

my feelings towards Barf are displayed in the pic below. she will never. ever.learn and loved that Natalia wasted very little time on her *applauds*

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i was slightly confused over who baby Kayla and Camille was - i'm guessing that's one of Barf's sons and that he has a family or?

really liked the introduction to Takara and Rich - talk about sparks, sparks, sparks!

the upcoming chs are going to be interesting - with Ant bringing along Natalia, Sabrina being there (-_-'), the truth coming out or maybe not. yeah, there's a lot but as long as those twins - yes, i'm with Happy2bNappy bandwagon  XD - are okay then we're good, JJ, hahaha!

thanks for the recent updates! you must be working like a beast during the nights or did you win the lottery, by any chance? XD



Author's Response:

Camille was mentioned many, many chapters ago.  She's Kline's daughter from a previous relationship and despised by Barbara, hence Nat's shock at Barb having her baby. 

Barb is just...that clip says it all.

Now you know Mercedes is going to invite her number one draft pick to the funeral.  Question is, will she go and will Nat be there to see her.

SMH at you and Happy2bNappy and those twins.

Lol @ did I win the lottery?  I wish.  Nope, nothing as fortuitous at that.  Census has been low so I've had a lot more downtime at work.  Just trying to get this little diddy done while the gettin's good.

Next chapter will be fairly sedate.  Just consider it the calm before the storm.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!!!

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Date: March 04 2015
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

you know what? natalia has really grown. i dont think she would've gone to philly without ant saying it before and would've probably stayed at home even though in her heart she knows she should be there.

before this chapter i didnt want natalia going to philly because of the timing but maybe it was a blessing in disguise, lol! i mean Ant's mother had to shut up and behave so yea, maybe this is/was the perfect time for natalia to meet the family - this time around.

now the funeral...yeah. that's a whole another ballgame.

lastly, loved that rich called natalia sis - that was awesome to read XD

thanks for the update, JJ!

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Date: March 14 2015
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

wow...after have read this, it seems i held out hope that the man natalia once loved would appear but after this...richard is simply scum. lower even. i applaud natalia for not sinking to his level. she could've easily revealed the fact that ant isn't his just to hurt but she didnt.

i liked how you portrayed sabrina and didnt turn her into a cliche - thank you for that :)

i didn't like the way the talerico just stood by except for ginger and aunt when richard attacked natalia - that was disturbing. uck! no wonder ant is ashamed for them *shake my head*

i'm glad that natalia left - it's time for her to focus on herself, ant and the twins - Channing & Nico. like the names? sound good? if not i got more, hahahaha!

thanks for the double update, JJ! you're my rockstar!!

 

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Date: March 17 2015
Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

superb. magnificent. amazing - i have run out of words. this chapter had everything. loved how you wrote that David's love survived life and death -  this reunion was everything and it sucks that it's the end, lool! i want more. yup. i'm greedy like that =P

thank you again and again, times 1000 - this has been an excellent read!!

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Author's Response:

You are very welcome, Yuukiyanagi!  Thank you for the wonderful reivew!  So happy to have had you along for the ride.

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Date: May 04 2015
Becoming Mrs. Kourosh (Sequel to B&B) by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i agree - just beautiful with the perfect end! i'm so glad that Joss and Eshan finally wed and i have a feeling that their story isnt over quite yet for us *wink,wink,hint,hint* XD LOL!

thank you! thank you! thank you, JJ! this has been a truew pleasure to read - look so so forward to your upcoming stories! YOU ROCK!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the fabu reveiw, Cassius Noir!!!  I so love writing about this couple and have every intention of continuing to tell their story, whether it's through one shots or a full-on sequel.  Stay tuned...

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Date: July 09 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

gaaah dammit...! i'm

 

 

Joss better turn up and walk down that aisle or there will be a riot up in here!

 

i wish there was a magic pill that i could take so i could be with Eshan - he's simple woooow!! and i would gladly have his babies because Eshan has me

 

One chapter to goo - gaaah! the suspense is killing me, lol! thanks for the quick update!! :D :D



Author's Response:

LOL @ "Dying. Dying."  I so love your reviews. 

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Date: July 07 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

love love loooove this story! i'm so happy that i saved up chapters because now i could sit back and simply enjoy Joss & Eshan :) your writing is superb! the people, the subjects, the love, the struggles, the happiness - it all feels so real and it's so very well-written...!!

btw do you know how many chapters you plan to write? other than that - thanks for a GREAT read! i'm really really looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Yuukiyanagi!  Right now, it's looking like there'll be four more chapters.  I hope to get the next one edited and posted sometime this week.  Thanks for reading and taking the time to revew.

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Date: June 22 2014
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love love love! damn, i'm tearing up over here - that was beautiful! thank you!!! :D

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Date: July 01 2014

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