Penname: got2luvmel [Contact]

Real name: Mel

Member Since: November 10 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Me


I'm Mel... I'm a perpetual bookworm, I read any and everything, and I write romance—erotica, historical, suspense, and interracial. And, although I am quite the procrastinator, I'm quite determined to be published in the future. Stories posted here are solely for practice and my amusement, if others enjoy them that's even better.


As an aspiring author I can be a bit anal when reviewing and tend to digress, but I'm pretty laid back when it comes to people's tastes. Hey, If You Like It, I Love It (that's my motto)...


My General Review: All great writers use an editor (beta); don't post a story nor updates without having an experienced one look over it first. If you don't have enough respect for your writing at least have some for your audience. 



Beta-reader: No

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 257]
Summary:

make it nasty

 

Emery Johnson has been crushing on her older brothers best friend for years, too bad in his eyes, she will only ever be recognized as 'Darrell's sister'. Ready to change that, Emery enlists the help of a single book to snare her dream man, but along the way someone else steps into the picture, shaking up the feelings that Emery thought were tightly secured and forever stable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 116446
Read Count: 149078
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh, so now she realizes she didn't ever have a crush on Logan? Yeah, right! That's why she was losing it when she had to go over there ROTFLMFAO loves it!

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 14 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

CONGRATS on getting into school! You'll love it, I'm sure ;-) 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 14 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:
Tom Williams thought it was going to be an okay day, until Joe, comes in to tease him while he's at work.  He has a genetic disorder called lipodystrophy, which causes weight lose in his face and limbs. Tom has the appearance of an old man, the kids at school give him hell for it. To make matters worse he sees the beautiful black woman walking to his register, while he is being harassed by Joe.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 11328
Read Count: 43131
Published: August 14 2012
Updated: July 04 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Me and you

Can you update the pics? I want to see them.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 11 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 171]
Summary:

Getting on a airplane and leaving everything she knew behind hadn’t been easy. Knowing who was waiting at the end of the long air flight made it all worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 14749
Read Count: 38868
Published: January 18 2013
Updated: January 26 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Wifey

Interesting, but you need a beta. Missing words, spelling and grammar issues can kill a piece no matter how great the story is.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it. I'll do some revision before I update the next chapter. Please continue to support me.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: February 08 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

 

Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28493
Read Count: 19571
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: May 19 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Chance Meeting

I LOVE your writing style :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

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Date: February 05 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Cast

GOD! I love Ted King, he's fine as hell...YUMMY *le sigh*



Author's Response:

YES! YUM  indeed!

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Date: February 12 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108485
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

Seriously, your stories are addicting...keep the awesomeness coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  More is coming!

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Date: February 12 2013

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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196764
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Where is a pic of Dina?

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Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I prefer the original pictures-portrayal of characters. I hate when authors change it up after they've made us fall in love with the originals...but whatever

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 09 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I prefer the original pictures-portrayal of characters. I hate when authors change it up after they've made us fall in love with the originals...but whatever

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 09 2014

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Summary:

 

10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10431
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

Those two actually look like a cute pair. I wouldn't have ever thought to put them together. I like how this story has started out. That was brave leaving him that letter; my scary arse would have been too hurt to even do that. I most likely would have just disappeared and came back years later, hopefully not still licking my wounds and with a new guy.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: July 12 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50809
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

This is just too unique for words, I'm speechless and LFAO...I love it already!

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Rules

OMG Alfred talking about giving Selena an orgasm had me rolling, too funny! "I am ready to service your sexual  needs." <-DYING! Alfred freaky as hell, too bad this couldn't be reality...I'd love to order my perfect companion and have him at the ready at all times ;')

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Date: September 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

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After a scathing indiscretion, NBA all-star James “JD” Denson is shipped back to his hometown in Tennessee to lay low, and to let his legal team handle the fall out of a night of drunken debauchery. With a lot of time on his hands, James accidentally concocts his own hair-brained scheme to get back into the NBA’s good graces.

When Tayla Maxwell, fresh out of culinary school, returns home to take a much needed break before real life begins, she has the misfortune of running into an ego-maniac with a laundry list of issues no one in their right mind would try to fix. Convinced that helping him trick an entire nation is a good idea, Tayla suddenly finds herself stuck between a rock and hard-headed fool who’ll either drive her to drink or make all of her dreams come true

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13762
Read Count: 6277
Published: October 24 2013
Updated: December 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming

I loved it the first time around and I'm sure will love the rewrite too.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: November 04 2013

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What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26198
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Idiots all around. 

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Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love sex as much as the next but it did come a little fast. Well, actually, I don't really object to it coming this fast (no pun intended) it's just the declarations that I really am not feeling. Okay, they like each other and quite literally gave each other the business quickly. But, should they be at this emotional level already? No, I don't think so.

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But, it's also not my story and I'm here for the ride regardless. so whatever...

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Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this is one of the few times when I am not rooting for the bffs to make it. i like kerri and brandon....they're really cute together.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: April 11 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.