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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 48297
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Please continue. I'm loving this story. Everybody just needs to let Cam kick Erin's ass up and down the block. 



Author's Response:

Hi choklit! Erin's horrible and her intrigues will be addressed by Cameron shortly.  Thanks so much for reading.  I appreciate it sooo much! :)

Reviewer: choklit Signed
Date: May 03 2012

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75329
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 1: The PTA Members(Characters)

I'm having a hard time rooting for AJ. I don't feel any empathy coming from him. He is just pushing and pushing Ester with very little consideration for her feelings. It would be okay if Ester was just a woman scared of love but this is a woman who has dealt with a lifetime of abuse from not only her husband but her parents. He sees that she cuts herself and he now knows she is suffering nightmares, but he wants to be a open book after how many years of knowing her? oh right, he just met her. This is a great story but Aj's pushiness without at least making her feel comfortable or being a friends with her is making me uncomfortable. 

Reviewer: choklit Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 22 2012

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