Penname: Charly43 [Contact]

Real name: C

Member Since: December 29 2011

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Never Say Never by wisedec4u
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 150]
Summary:

stories/968/images/NEVER_SAY_NEVER.jpg

 

Tara does something she never thought she'd do, save one of the living dead. Now she's being hunted by the Authority. Eric is the only one who can protect her-that's if she agrees to give him what he wants in return.

Takes place during S4E9 Let's Get Out of Here. JUICY LEMONS! Tara/Eric with a little Sam/Tara and Alcide/Tara flirting on the side (just because I can't resist a little Tam and Talcide)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge, Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76043
Read Count: 48325
Published: August 28 2011
Updated: September 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Special Delivery

I love this story with the Anubis heart. Eric and Tara are so good together and I wish that you wrote for TB because they haven't know what to do with the character or the actress. This story is so exciting and shows both Tara and Eric in a vulnerable light. They are two of the most strong willed and tough personas on the show and you have put them together. Fantastic! I can't read what happens once they go outside to mee the Authority. This is so much better than the show. Thanks.

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Date: September 09 2012
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The Problem with Charlie by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 100880
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Dayum Inga what a problem she has. A man that wants her all the time and has the hardware to do it. I think Charlie is sweet to desire her even during that time of the month. I guess Charlie is the only one who likes doing oral because Inga could have done that to Charlie and he busts a nutt, and goes to sleep then there would be no messy sheets for her to scold him for. I can't wait to read what happens once they are married. Thanks for another great chapter.  

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Date: September 09 2012
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Dominion by WalkingPapers
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 168]
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The Redtips Wolf clan wrongfully accused of hunting humans on Vampire Lord Jye's land; must give the only maiden of their pack,Sarason as concubine, to save their clan from destruction.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 33031
Read Count: 32748
Published: May 31 2012
Updated: August 10 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue~

I love this story and I am glad to see it updated. I love your pics of Jye and Sarason. He looks just the way you describe him and your choice for Sarason is a beauty with very unique features. I can't wait to read your next chapter. I hope it will be real soon:D Hint Hint Hint

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2012
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Falling Stars by KarenaAngel
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132656
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014

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Title: Chapter 15: Welcome Home

Awww, this was soooo short:( I love this story and this chapter albeit very good was short. I'm glad that Aza is back and Carla has someone to at least have a half way decent relationship with. I hate this side of Vita, it is so violent and malicious. He seems to get off on the terror. I have to disagree with the review that wants Vita and Aza to be lovers. How do you love your rapist? I've read quite a few menages that have had MMF relationships and none of them involve rape. You've got your work cut out for you with Vita but your talented so I know you can do it. You had me feeling sorry for Vita and hoping he turned a corner with Carla with this shopping trip but damn he screwed that away royally. I hope the next chapter has more of Aza and Carla. Vita can go piss in the wind. 

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Conspiring, who is he loyal too

I love this story,but I am getting sick of the man handling of Carla. Aza is still the only male that is halfway decent. Kavitak should be punished severely for what he did. I wished for Vita to have cone instead. Kavitak would have just put his head between his legs & kissed his sorry ads goodbye. Still a great chapter, thanks.

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Date: January 22 2013
Title: Chapter 22: Stay Where You Can Be Seen

I am so sorry that happened to you and your loved ones. My prayers and wishes of blessings to you. Thank you for the update it was enjoyable, and exciting. 

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Date: June 30 2013
The Pick Up Artist by Mello2014
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Short Stories/Drabbles between Ororo and Thor. Marvel!Universe. 

 

"So...thou art the Goddess of weather?"

 



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Categories: Movies, Miscellaneous
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Crossover, Drabbles , Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 2239
Read Count: 39625
Published: February 04 2013
Updated: January 11 2015

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Title: Chapter 6: Shame on me

This was good and the title is perfect because shame on me is what I'll think if you don't develop this into a story arc. It's really that good and you have a great talent and should use it.



Author's Response:

Thanks dude:) I'll keep it on my list of things. But I hope you'll stick with me anyways:)

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Date: August 20 2013
The McRyan Brothers by Beastlover 18
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43900
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015

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Title: The McRyan Brothers

Great chapter, but so short! Please update soon. These three are great together. Lots of chemistry.

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2013
Warrior of the Nile by TheHistorian
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 148]
Summary:

   In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.


   Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.

   Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.

   War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.


WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 49658
Read Count: 34598
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: October 15 2014

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Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This was really good but I feel a double cross coming up. Kladon is cray-cray, his hate for Keitou is sociological. It's like no one else feelings exist but his. As for Sap they ought to sell tickets. Raad and Kira are adorable together and I can't believe she is still fighting her feelings for Raad. I can't see peace between the two nations if Kladon is in charge. Keitou is a question mark. Merikki may be able to bring order to wherever the chips fall in Nubia if Kladon isn't around. This story is so good and has so many layers that it leaves me anxious for the next update. Thank you for your response to my previous review and as always I wish you inspiration in all that you do.



Author's Response:

Lol your welcome!

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2014
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Sap is a fool and a tool! I can't believe he is going to go offer his services to the Nubians to bring Kira back or incite a war. I hope he stays alive long enough to have his butt handed to him 2 times! Kira needs to listen to her heart and what Raad is saying to her. He has told her she will never be a whore. He's told her she is his but more importantly he is hers. Uggh! I hope she listens to Raad before she inadvertently helps in her own kidnapping back to Nubia. Thanks for two great updates and I can't wait to read more from you soon:)))



Author's Response:

Ill be writing some tonight! :3

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 UPDATE

WARNING:Many exclamation points ahead;) Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! What a wonderful surprise to see an update on an awesome story! Your writing lets you feel Kira' s joy and then pain of realizing the feelings she has for Raad. I hope Raad sticks to his guns and sends the hooker Helena and her Pimp Daddy Hunai to hell (which is probably home for them). As for Sap, whatever you have planned for him can't be enough for him. I can't wait to read that. Just a suggestion maybe some lemon juice, rock salt and broken dirty glass for starters:) Well, again very appreciative for the update, and I can't wait to read more!

 

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Date: July 02 2014
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow! As always thank you for the quick update.  I think Kira is going to ask for her freedom and to take her servant/bestie Merit with her. Poor Raad, he will probably grant it. I hope something comes up that it's delayed. Helena is a joke but not a funny one. I noticed Sap wasn't mentioned, I wonder what that turd is up to? Hopefully Raad tells Kira how he truly feels and she does the same, then the real fun can begin. Kira having to prove herself to a nation, dealing with Sap, helping to unite Egypt and Nubia, and have time for herself and Raad. That is a lot even for a mighty lioness:)

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Date: July 02 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Boom chicka wow wow! I am so glad that Kira and Raad came to their senses. Now, it's on and for Nasty Helena Buzzzzinga! Kira will be Queen, she and Raad will be a force to be reckonewith. I can't wait to read how Sap and Helena react. That will be great reading. This was so worth the wait! I'm curious to see how her crazy daddy reacts when he finds out about the soon to be Queen of Egypt. Thank you for an awesome update! I'll keep checking in tomorrow to see if you have uploaded the next chapter.



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL 

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2014
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 UPDATEEE

Thank you for this most anticipated update! Wow to finally know what happened to Raad' s older brother. So sad and that awful event shaped Raad into the wonderful man anD leader he is. Kira's story was just as moving and shaped her into the warrior princess and best match for Raad. They will need each other's strength to deal with the upcoming crapfest that is coming there way. Sap is like a roach he is so hard to kill. Please update soon:)))))

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2014

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