Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past. Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.
And the plot thickens...
WHAT IS THIS? Where is this going because I'm having all sorts of feelings with this right now. Ophelia is getting played again big time isn't she? ridiculous
Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedI dont know man...her method is making me really dubious...there's a big BIG possiblity of it all backfiring in her face.
The plan does sound mad to me because what if she can't prevent him from taking the child again. He has a lot more influence than she does... the chips do not seem to be falling in her favor.
Also she needs to talk to someone about this like Bennie suggested.
This is all making me anxious eeek
Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Wow there's a lot to cover
First, I guess Ophelia really did wrap Raymond around her finger. I was certaintly wary, waiting for it to completely backfire, but it seems that it might all fall apart differently than I expected. If he does die from the brain aneurism then what happens next? Did that mean she got her revenge or would that be all washed away with her grief of loosing him? And if he doesn't die, what happens next? Does she continue with her plan (which I'm still waiting to really figure out... i have an inkling, but not that confident in it yet) or does she get so frightened of losing him(which would mean that she's still that emotionally tied to him) that she gives control to him and is by his side completely.
So Many Questions that could do either way and open up new speculation gahhh... I love it
Second, I died when Bennie was like ‘packing’?!?! I don't carry any weapons. Did she think that he looked like a gangster?....PRICELESS!
Thanks for the review. I will say this much, that death would be too easy for Raymond. I want to play with his evil butt a little longer. LOL
Reviewer: thincakes SignedOphelia needs some serious help. I don't feel bad for Raymond, but I do hurt for Ophelia because right now she's lost. She's been dealt the worst of hands by her mother and Raymond. At first I was pissed off with her because revenge never works and for someone who knows what pain is, to try and get revenge pissed me off to the highest degree, but now that I let it simmer, I feel sad for her. She's scarred real bad!
As for Bennie's and Keisha's relationship I love it. It's straight forward and it's a great break from the craziness between Ophelia and Raymond
Thanks for the update!
Ophelia is obviously not thinking straight and we know that. Raymond is at her mercy not knowing what she's going to do next. stay tuned!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed
A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.
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ok ok first I'm glad Dmitri told his sister like it is because she needs a hard slap maybe two. She's absolutely ridiculous and I hope she figures herself out before it's too late. sad child she is.
second- I was happy that Dmitri was able to introduce Sasha as his girlfriend...It's about damn time
third- What's up with Slade?
Four- not surprised that he couldn't say I love you back... Dmitri still has his problems to work out, in fact, it's bad but I've been waiting to see if, what his brother said about him breaking her heart, if that's going to come true, because I still have my doubts about Dmitri and to make matters worse, I'm comes the bull of a father.
Five- what's going to happen now that dad is here? Is Sasha and Dmitri's relationship going to the shits because if Dimtri does not stand up to his dad and take his life back, since he still has not fully done that yet, then who knows what's going to happen... ugh TELL ME
thanks for the update
Reviewer: thincakes SignedPackaged deal! YES Dimitri Yes!
That is all!
Thanks for the update! Can't wait to see this dinner... it's gonna be saucy
Reviewer: thincakes Signedok alright I cracked a bit so there happy lol
I've always been a Dom lover he's my fav and I'm glad he's the bigger one here. He's the one talking sense here esp. to Dmitri and I am happy that their relationship is on the path to being resolved. I hope Dom get's a good love in his life he's a good man
Right Sasha girl hahaha she's making his behind work look at that... in all though I'm happy for her and we'll see where this goes. Both Sasha and I are watching that Dmitri mmhmm we shall see
Thanks for the update ever a rollercoaster this Dmitri haha he's a charater all right
Reviewer: thincakes SignedWHOOP BAM! Tell it like it is... good for you Sasha to finally let that off your chest and tell him exactly what was racing up in that head of yours.
I wonder what D's next step is going to be. He still losing some points with me as of right now
Also Dominic YES again thank you for putting this once again in front of Dmitri's face.
Thanks for the new chapter and for you response above.
Reviewer: thincakes SignedWait she said "LIke I need you" out loud?!??! LOLLL yo feelings are running deep with these two. Intense. They're both so intense that I just need them to get back together so that the world can continue to rotate properly hahaha these two are a hoot.
Also I never had an issue with the change of pics. I got where you were going with it - the change in Sasha was pretty evident for me and yeah she lost some innocence, but that's what happens. Big things like what happened between her and Dmitri will change someone so that I did not fight against. It was good though to hear your thoughts and what you were going for. I did not notice the change of power between the two pictures and now that you point it out, it's very fitting!
Again great update and keep it coming. These two have got to get their situation in order lawd
Reviewer: thincakes SignedAlright everybody is going to get a damn beat down from me. I am hella furious. Lord I don't even know who to start with
1) Sasha girl. Girl. I know you are hurt, you've been hurt, and the thought of people you love running out on you is a fear, darling I understand that, but woah girl you have got to know when you need to just leave people in their damn own mess... Dmitri has major issues (which I'll get to) you can't fix all of him if he doesn't want to be fixed... girl you gotta know when you cut those losses because this man has got to figure out himself before he can ever fully love you. He Is Just Not Ready for what you have to offer him so girl cry it out but you just need to stop talking to this man and let him come to his own on his own terms. You can't try and help anymore because anything you do will never work out if he does not want to help himself. I'm on your side, but you've gotta let him be. Done
2) Dmitri boyfriend... fix yo'self. If you think you're living right now without your father controlling you then baby boy you're not as smart as I thought you were nor are you as confident with yourself as you think or try to make yourself out to be. You're being played by dad and by sister and it's sad. Get it together. This whole I choose my sister over Sasha bs that you just pulled with your eyes all buggin and veins poppin and that show you put on there in the hospital is not cute... it's nasty (and honestly if it were me I'd leave your ass on the curb yesterday for you to figure out your issues) She's been trying to help your ass from the get go (sure she has her faults) but that nastiness you just pulled right there NOPE sorry I'm canceling you real fast. Figure It Out - Boy Bai
3) Nikolai is just a massive ass bully unable to come to terms with his wife's death and instead just wants to beat the crap and punish everybody instead of looking at his own nasty ass tendencies. Boy you too bai... be gone. You're ruining one son and you're ruining one daughter like it's all in a days work... how are you going to stand there and try to hit Sasha or just try to hit a woman in general, damn if I had a damn dog I'd have him bite off your offending hand your ass is too much. I need you on a time-out because you are just running around throwing tantrums - too much. In A Damn Corner You Go And Face The Wall - Childish
4) Nadia- trick. You need some help. You're nasty, manipulative, sick, confused, sad, and horribly possessive - oh and you make horrid decisions (which you know btw some of these bad mannerisms we can all point towards your father for cultivating such shit) I cannot wait for your wake-up call - let's hope you get one because if not your time is dwindling let's not try and sugarcoat it. Get Yo' Ass In Rehab you never know, it will probably improve your nasty attitude too. Grow Up
5) Dominic called it from the get go when he said "It won't end well for Sasha" right now it is not ending well for anyone. I have nothing on Dominic at the present. He's the only one saved from my rath on this faithful night.
My bottom line - Sasha girl be done with Dmitri right now. He's not ready to be a real adult man in love so you need to move along with your life because at the present he's treating you like shit and if you still come around with the I Love you's then really it's not making him respect you. You displayed enough love if you ask me take your break. Dmitri you just - bai
Thanks for the update! I can't wait for what happens next and what realizations Dmitri is going to come to. Everything right now rides on what epiphany he has! I am spent wow
Reviewer: thincakes Signeduhoh Dmitri is playing with fire. See he thinks he's only in for a joy ride, but oh he's going to be wrapped around her finger and so whipped soon...poor child hahaha
thankd for the update!
I am looking forward to this just as much as you are, It is going to be a joy to write. lol Thank you!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedI mean hell keep it going hahaha I don't care if its long lol... I'm teasing but seriously Nadia mind yourself. I don't like her little princess attitude right now. Nope not a fan of the bs princess look...she better check herself.
Also his father is just one major load of douche
Great update though you'll have to come fast with another because now i really need to know what happens next.
lol. Its funny how I havent even introduced the father yet but he already has such a bad name, I fear what the repsonse will be when he finally comes into the picture. :-) Thank you!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedLOL you threw Carter in there?!?! Stop it that's naughty
Dmitri is the type of guy in which I'll be nice to him because my home girl loves him, but I'll won't myself forgive him for hurting her that much for a long time.
Also OK Miss I have my Own LOVE LIFE... I don't so imma need these updates to be every night ok. I'm kidding. Do your tang I'll be here whenever you come back
Thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedDamn finally these two got their shizz together! I was wondering when they were going to stop their little banter they damn well knew they wanted each other TEASE
It was great and while there are still problems I feel like these two are at a better place to fix them together and Lord knows the journey was rough
Thanks for the update and I will be looking forward to the next
Reviewer: thincakes Signed
No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway.
NOOOO not Chandler...anyone but chandler...also these men in this office are some pigs - Can't deal!
Can't wait to see what's next
Reviewer: thincakes Signeddamn these group of people are a task good luck to Sky. She's got her work cut out for her.
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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas. Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.
You have to ask if I enjoyed the story? It's great I love it. The plot and everything was very attractive and you delivered very well as usual.
I like how things are winding down for both of them and its smooth and I'm very happy for them
LOVE IT
Reviewer: thincakes Signed
That's right Big Willie show them what time it is...nastiness
Billy you go ahead with yourself. It's a tense time but I support your bravery ad love go man go
Reviewer: thincakes Signed
I love this guy...he's so adamant on what he likes and what he wants and he wants all of Paris. Love this story thanks!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedThat was great advice that Dr. Weston gave... ok onto the next
Reviewer: thincakes SignedOh Janie Janie Janie Janie that's not a good look for you babe...all desperate. Girl pick yourself up and go try and do some thing better with yourself damn
Reviewer: thincakes SignedWhat is going on??! Now there's Charles after him can Billy catch a break geez? He's just makign everyone horny...I think Billy is gifted hahaha
One a serious note I'm glad that he took that room with Robert. Billy is true to himself and that's enough for me to respect him
Reviewer: thincakes Signed1) As muc has Janie is a fool, I worry for what Charles is going to make her go through
2) I'm glad Billy found a friend in Booby and I hope it lasts
3) love love love billy absolutely
Reviewer: thincakes Signedaw hell hahaha Janie just took over...I'm glad that Cindy told her about Charles and I'm happy she listened, now work that man!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedOH wow the way things worked out - unless Brenda are you going to put some plot twist in there?!?! *watches from the corner of my eye*
They're going t get married in a year. I'm excited!
Thanks for the update
Hee hee *sees you giving me the side eye*
You never know what's coming down the road. Billy doesn't want to wait, but he figures that her parents will be more accepting of the marriage idea once she graduates.
Reviewer: thincakes SignedDisclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
