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Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82574
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

I don't know. I want to say that I don't think Billy is going to give up on his resolve just because of birth control. I would like to think, and if I'm right about his character, the sex is just a part of it but he wants all of her. 

I'm a bit torn because Paris does have a point about them getting their education and then thinking about marriage, but at the same time I just keep thinking that if she gave him a little bit more of a support, that it can definitely work out. I guess I want her to believe that they can work, I don't think she believes it fully and that's where a bit of the problem is. Maybe I got that wrong, but I just think that if she truly beleived that no matter what she was in it till the end then she'd be able to work something out with Billy and be a help in finding the answer that they seek.

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 07 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Brenda first I have to touch upon the last part of this. It is great absolutely ugh yes i love it. I love how Janie is supporting Charles. She's the strong one right now. She's helping, encouraging Charles to deal with his demons and for that alone I have gotten some more respect for her. What she is doing is so important!

Second, yep just like I thought, Billy is an honorable person in my eyes. It's not about only the sex, he wants that commitment, that promise and I love how he holds steadfast to this. I don't think Paris got it before, and it tweaked me a bit when she was disappointed when Billy said that he was going to abstain from all sexual touches with her. I mean tit for tat she disappointed him so  now it's her turn. I think that for the most part, the sexual sensations were more in the forfront in her mind than the marriage that Billy wanted - or at least took up a bit part whereas for Billy, the sex was there, but his dick is definitely not running his mind. 

I like the swap here because normally we think of the girl asking for the commitment and not the guy. I just want her to have more faith in them as a couple and I don't think she's ready to go there yet and I wonder what it's going to have to take for her to get there.

You're making me think Brenda lol I love it. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 07 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Milton man they're going to make a mess out of you in prison, or maybe he might just like it disgusting. He's disgusting for all that nastiness he did and still try to do...good riddance with your ass

now onto Paris and Billy. Brenda wait is Paris ready now? Does she fully believe in them and its not just the fact that she's been without his touch that she's ready to marry right? I just want to double check

I do like though that she openly admits and says that Billy is her fiance I love that!



Author's Response:

Paris had been thinking about it before Billy showed up accusing her of cheating.  She knew he was graduating, plus she has a good job.  She figured that she could help him while he is in law school.  Their parents wanted them both to get their degrees and she figures that she has hers and Billy will be graduating so they should be happy.  

Yes, she does miss him and she's horny.  She doesn't want to wait any longer, but that's not the only reason.  Now she feels that their relationship is strong enough to deal with the racism.

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 08 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Wow Charles way to be a freaking negative geez... you'd think that with all the good things that he has going for him he'd stop being irritating but oh well

And I'm definitely ready for this wedding. 



Author's Response:

Charles still has his insecurities.  LOL  Wedding is coming up tomorrow (hopefully)

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 08 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

DI never know what to address first in your stories everything is just jumping out at me. Ok.

First Janies handled that perfectly. She nipped his craziness right there and then. Good for her. I loved that

Ok on to the last part.

As Paris would have told her, yes this is what blacks have to deal with everyday. welcome to our world, that is exactly how we fell, what we get. I really kind of wish at some point she's able to tell Candace that because right now Candace feels like dirt but I think also allowing  her to connect that to how black feel would have definitely gotten that light bulb to go off. It's one thing for her to say that she has no problem with black people, but when you actually get to understand the emotional level to it, even if its just a bit, that's a taste of what happens and it makes the understanding that much stronger. Now its not just a statement, but it's a statement with reason because she can feel what it is like to be treated like dirt.

Also Brenda thanks for answering me back on the previous chapters about Paris' change in now wanting to marry Billy. It was good clarification.

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 09 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Hell yes they need to enjoy their wedding dammit. They've worked hard on themselves in trust, love, communication and they deserve to be rewarded with their fantastic wedding.

Good for you Reverend Fleming for directing the crowd to the right area. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Thincakes!  Paris Point of view is up!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 09 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

I can't wait to see what Billy does to that Inn...nasty asses, plus a horrible liar geez

Also I'm glad it worked out for them and I definitely can't wait for PAris POV.

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 11 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Beautiful. that is all

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 12 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

This is what Love is right there. How many years is it and they're still going strong? Their love for each other still very fresh and youthful! I love all of it! 

Also Billy really loved that idea of a house full of women haha he's too much and I am very happy that they have both made it that far and are continuing to prosper good for them.

This was a great story Brenda. Like always you delivered!

Thanks! Can't wait to see what you come up with next ma'am 



Author's Response:

Thanks foryour kind words thincakes!  It was a joy to write this one!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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A collection of romantic/erotic short stories based on black women and the men that loves them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5911
Read Count: 4810
Published: August 05 2013
Updated: August 07 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Baby, I'm Home (chapter I)

NOOOOOOOOOOO ok I  read your end note. Ok I can wait, but I like this idea you have here. Short stories in a row under one category... like a mini book I like.

Also I'm digging their loving relationship and how they're working with each other and understand one another. It's a great relationship!

 



Author's Response:

LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had to tease you guys a bit. I decided to write a bunch of stories that uplift black women. I love my fair share of drama but I love when two people that love each other can just simply be with each other without it. And thats what I'm writing about.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! It meant a lot!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 06 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Baby, I'm Home (chapter II)

Rusty? You call that rusty? Well then what happens when you're all oiled up?!?! haha

"Fuck the food. Daddy's hungry for something else."

That...best line 

This was really good and I'm excited to see what you have next for us... as for the teaser... I would rather you just go with the story and not tease me 

 

Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

LHH thank you so much!!! I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 07 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Until The End Of Time *TEASER*

OU OU ou ou ouuuuuu 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 08 2013

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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 

The Lindor Kingdom and the Hattori Dynasty have been in a disposition ever since King William came into power over the Lindor Kingdom. His daughter Ava was bored with her princess title. That is until the day her trip to the bathlands is ruined and she's kidnapped by the Hattori army and taken back to their palace by orders of General Kuroda Ren. All of a sudden, she's missing the heavy guard detail she once took for granted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3905
Read Count: 6031
Published: August 26 2013
Updated: September 15 2013


Title: Chapter 1: prologue.

Ou interesting! I want to know where this goes please do continue. I'm intrigued 

thanks!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 26 2013

Title: Chapter 2: cast.

Oh hell Ren is HOT. I had to go back and read the prologue with this picture in mind and it did not disappoint YES

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: September 12 2013

Title: Chapter 3: one.

Hahaha I went back and saw Jan and then thought of him in the story and hahaha he's a hoot man just wow well at least Ava got her wish yes? She's been taken from that horrid life she could have been living.

Oh don't you worry Ava, you wanted to go explore your feminine wilds hahaha Ren weill most definitely help you with that. 

I'm ready for this! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: September 12 2013

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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

I didn't come to HBB just for the coffee...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: How Do You Like Your Coffee?
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2117
Read Count: 1920
Published: August 28 2013
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH Dirty Dirty DIrty....she's the definition of naughty and then trying all the exquisite delicacies that the shop has to offer well well well...I like the way she thinks!

Also this I beckoned him with the crook of my finger and showed him all the sites our humble city had to offer. ... best line. I loved it 

I love this! Can't wait to see what you have in store for me!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :]

I think I might ask ElizaBlu if I can make it into a series 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 28 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yesss! HBB Series here I come! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: August 28 2013

Retired
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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50809
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Obsession

HAHAHAHAHA this woman has gotten on the train straight to looneyville! She's just mad ... there this is a straight jacket patted cell that awaits her! I can't even be mad with her anymore it's just too hilarious how mad she is smh. Girl needs some help

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: October 23 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Creators

UGH UGH UGH can we deactivate Anne dammit... oh right she's a human - well we can still "deactivate" her hehe *rubs palms together* eh in due time she's going to get what's coming to her.

I can't wait to see how they get rid of the prime directive... for some reason i just keep seeing iRobot flashing through my head 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: September 25 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Moving Forward

And bingo... we have located the main problem - the Prime directive. We'll have to find someway to get rid of the prime directive in order for him and her to be completely together.... huh I wonder how it's going to be done, if at all. Soooo excited to read more

 

 Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: September 22 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Makeover

HAHAHAHAHAHA I. Can't. With. Alfred! The last part though LOL I die. I love him he's hilarious. I wonder what Selena is ging to do? Faint? That's a big possibility hahaha

 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: September 20 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Chase

this has gone too far LAWD. I need Thomas to report this mitch and I need Selena to drop kich Anne's ass pronto.. everyone is getting blows in my book. Anne is just goingto have to go into a coma because I'm coming for her... she is too cracy for my being LOL

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: October 19 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Trouble

Why when everyone is suspicious of this nasty byatch... why do they just walk with her like it's nothing? Keep all eyes on her wth... stop trying to be civil with her OMG. If I see anyone of them turn their backs on this lady and leave themselves defenseless one more time OHHH... she's getting away with too much and nothing is happening back to her. UGH Kick her ass to the curb watch her get in that damn car and drive off and stand there for another good 30 to make sure she doesn't come back like people let's be on her ass to make sure she's not shotting people with tranqs and powered defibrillators.... I just want her demolished 

ok done with my rant.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: October 17 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Coming Together

Oh wow! That's quite elaborate that plan, but at least I have something to definitely root for... I hope it works... fingers crossed

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: October 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

OH HEY NOW Brenda... Now wait a minute! I like this. He's very intelligent and sharp. Wow. This right here is going to be another fine story. I've gotta get myself mentally prepared. Just give me a few...

Right now my girl Selena has definitely bitten off a whole chunk...in fact she's sputtering (I'm sputtering haha) He just pounced on her and just started hitting her with all these answers and then dived in oh lawd! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this story - work your magic on me ma'am for I am ready!

 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed
Date: September 11 2013

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