Response to the Made to Order challenge!
Selena doesn't know what to do with herself - I mean with hmi jumping on her like that hahaha she's not prepared man
Also ok so let me get this straight Ms. B. So Alfred is going to help her find a mate while at the same time sexually pleasing her (and other things ofc) -well at least that's the plan - so this is assuming that she does not get too attached to Alfred that therefore, is not attracted to anyone but him. hmmmmmmm interesting!
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedThere is nothing more to do at this moment then to laugh at the craziness that is Anne Fleming - the entire time after she left, all I could think of was villian taking public transportation back to a house. She's truly a super star thinking that she's just won SMH
I can't wait till she gets hers it is long overdue
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedIn 69 B.C Gaius Julius Caesar, a loyal general of Rome and protector of his people, fell in love. It was not the love of his beautiful wife, Cornelia, nor was it the love of his promise to Rome, but of a simple slave girl who possessed his heart at the age of thirty-one, while she was seventeen. Her name was Nona, and this is their tale before her heart was captured by another and before the ides of March.
LOL you went there with Spartacus I see you...*currently watches God's of the arena* lol
Reviewer: thincakes SignedLOLLLLL.... ok so my girl Marena has a problem listening. See why does she have to go create more problems for herself. We only mean for her to be careful not that she can't see the man anymore damn... of well those who won't listen will have to forced to learn unfotunately
Also this little triangle Welp I;m interested to see what you do with it as I have only one outcome in my mind.
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HOOOOOOOOOO... what is going on Gaius is overcome with jealousy, insanity, so much WOW
DAMN I don't even know where to start... bring on the rest! I'm excited to see what happens
Reviewer: thincakes Signed OH LAWD noooooooo troublessss
We have lions fighting lions, my sexy gaul about to be beat, Marena about to be beat... everybody about to be beay. I can't keep up
Keep it coming!!!
LOL THANKS
Reviewer: thincakes Signed And it continues!!!!
It's like I'm watching an episode all over again brilliant more please!
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i don't think Nona is a whore in fact I'dbe hella confused in said situation as well. I mean damn Gaius is married wth and what exactly was he about to do on that table... state his dominance I mean Gaius come on that's a bit too much calm down
And then we have Gallius about to fight lions damn
We shall see what happens. There's so many possible outcomes :O
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SCHWAT just happened... I did not gurllllll what are you trying to do to me
Welp you did surprise me. No one won damn tough life y'all
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Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.
Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.
WOAH The action continues... onto the next before I write my longer comment
Thank you so much for reading. On to the next one LOL!!! See ya then.
Yevette
Reviewer: thincakes SignedNOOOO I need more.
I need Jace to spill it all stop stalling DAMMIT HURRY UPPPPP!!!!
Can't wait for the next update!
LOL!!! More is on the way. The next update is coming in a few days. Yeah, Jace needs to get with it but he's got a plan. He's gotta convince her to trust him again.
So please stay tuned. More is on the way. I appreciate the reviews. Yevette
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Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted.
Including her.
Jason Momoa is damn beautiful!!! I love that you share in my Jason Momoa love UGH the man is too damn fione!!!
Reviewer: thincakes Signedthe kermit NOOOOOOO you're killing me here I can't with this LMAO and coming from the caribbean it was most definitely weird with people having issues with all sizes of women in America. Lawd I remember when I was a teen I was highly self-conscious of my bones because I was around women with so many curves...oh how I wanted those thighs and big butts that mostly all the females in my family back home had.
To sum it up, idk what's wrong with everyone else. Big, Thick, slim,bones (as I was so affectionately called LAWD) whatever they want to call it It's all damn bountiful and respected so people need to get on that bandwagon and stop body shaming women.
Right rant over.
Can't wait for the next update! Woot!! Bring it on
Reviewer: thincakes SignedCamille kills me! I love her. She read him right. BAI
Also I love your 5 things a week posts at the end! Keep it coming.
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I loved their introduction!! Why he gotta lie thou? Just tell her you own the damn place. Ok look if not now hopefully song. I think out of all the lies that you could have this one is just not worth it. Keep it one hundred and fiftie!
And yes I can't wait to see them out in public!! New scenery yay! Keep it up coming I'm living it!
also YAS to all of number 4!!!!!!!!!! Nothing left to say dats it
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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?
Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?
OUU I'm interested in Dina's situation. Tell me more! I mean we can't have a Dominic/Adaline relationship if he' still preoccupied with the idea of Dina so she's necessary.
Reviewer: thincakes Signedwelp F Dominic.. he did once and then he tried again tonight... NOPE move the F on. ATM he's not worth it at all. screw him. I am highly disappointed in his behavior... very nasty. HE needs to check himself.. gross
Any way! Great to see Adaline feeling more comfortable with everyone around! Team Adaline all the way!
Thanks for the update and I'mma kick DOminic in his ass for acting a fool!
Reviewer: thincakes SignedI actually don't mind the Dominic/Dina thing because he's gotta get over this before he can move on. Found it funny when he finally realized who the dad is lol Slade right. Jokes. Can't wait for te Slade/Dina reunion... what even happened there?
Also lol I see Murphy out there catching sneak peeks okay okay.
Can't wait to see what happens next and when Dominic and girl Adaline finally get it on and poppin' yay!!!
Thanks for the chapter
Reviewer: thincakes SignedOh hell! HAHAHA Dominic is gonna catch his tail with this one once he realizes he messed up big time. I mean I do applaud him for taking his time to get over his hang ups and not entering a relationship and dumping that on Adaline but LOL it's gonna be fun once she gives him some blue balls. I'm going to enjoy reading that
Thanks for the update!
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Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.
YAS YAS YAS YAS!!!!! THIS. WAS. FIRE!!!
Thanks thincakes!
CG
Reviewer: thincakes Signed I've tried not to say anything but... E be trying to "drop kick" Justin's ass. Well I'm gonna drop kick her ass! WTH E get your shizz together UGH F man. she's waisting time... all now she could have been with Dean. BAI E I'm calling you out for being basic. Be better
On another note, I love the outfit hmph lol!
Thanks for the update. Interested to see where this goes next
YAS! Call her out! Not gonna lie, I’m looking for that outfit in real life too. Thanks for reading and reviewing thincakes.
CG
Reviewer: thincakes SignedLMAO that gif is wild! You're wild! AHAHAHA Love it!!!
Lol I keep a few of them handy, so I’m glad you love it thincakes.
CG
Reviewer: thincakes Signed DAYUM! YAS. Twirl Twirl Twirl! That was hot! Just DAMN!!!!
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When Caleb, heir of the four and alpha of his pack, attends a party celebrating his twin deltas’ birthday, he doesn't anticipate finding Luna’s greatest gift: his mate, Ava-Rain. Immediately consumed with curiosity and undeniable interest, he manages to make his presence known to her, but their introduction is kept brief. To reject one’s mate is to reject Luna herself, and that is exactly what Caleb intends to do. Not because he wants to but because he has to. But will he be able to stay away in order to ensure both her and his pack’s safety, or will their unbreakable connection lure him back and add even more trouble into the mix?
Alpha Female! YES! Ava-Rain show them who is boss!
Our girl is finally stepping up & taking control, not just for the pack but for herself, as well. She's doing us proud, isn't she?
Thanks so much for reading & for your review, thincakes! I so appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: thincakes SignedYAS I finally caught up to this story and it is LIFE!!!!
I love all the characters. They're so dimensional and there's so much more to them I love it!
Caleb has my heart yo! His loyalty to his pack is something that I can respect like none other! He's just... Love him
My girl Ava-Rain I'd mob hard with her any day too! She's definitely stronger than others perceive her to be... hell even stronger than what she assumes her self to be!
She thinks she's trouble, but I think that she's gonna be an answer to a lot of questions.
I'm rocking with Alpha hard rn!! I haven't left my computer since I started reading it this morning.
Show me more! I'm so involved and I'm following Caleb and Ava-Rain so hard. I ship them and I love even the Betas and Deltas. I'm ready to run up on anybody that's trynna mess with this family.
YAS thanks for a great read and I can't wait for the other updates!!!
Oh, my gosh, this review is LIFE!! Thank you!
I'm so extremely happy that you're enjoying these characters because I love writing for them—which is totally biased of me, I know, lol. Sometimes they drive me crazy, they infuriate me, make me sad, make me laugh & cry, but I love them & I'm glad that they're not coming off as one-dimensional.
Lol, don't you just love you some Caleb? His pack means everything to him so I'm glad that's coming across.
Glad you're enjoying Ava-Rain's character, as well! You totally hit the nail on the head, she is definitely stronger than she gives herself credit for. She thinks that because she's human, that makes her weak & that she has nothing to offer to this new supernatural world, but she has no idea just how wrong she is.
Again, I'm just so happy that you're enjoying Alpha, thincakes! Thank you so much for taking a chance on this story & I'm glad it was able to hold your interest. There are definitely going to be a lot of people that will try & mess with this pack, so be prepared to throw some bows, lol!
Thanks for reading & for taking the time to write this amazingly awesome review! I truly appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: thincakes Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.