The Chamber :: Redbird

Penname: Redbird [Contact]

Real name: RaShonda

Member Since: October 14 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Hmmm...well I live in Houston TX...I discovered a love for writing after participating on the So You Think You Can Dance Fanfic Site...I am also a member of The Sweetest Taboo site.

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Reviews by Redbird

Regret by Brenda1257

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 776]

Summary:

Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers. Could he make it right and start anew? Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108484
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017

Title: Regret

I absolutely adore this story! Dana is an amazing little girl! I am so glad she was able to get through to her grandmother!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Glad to hear your husband is doing better!

Author's Response:
Thanks Redbird. He's coming along nicely. Dana is determined to pray until her Papa wakes up! More is coming!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: March 30 2013

Title: Regret

As usual I LOVE Dana! I liked the way she refused to give up on her mom and grandma! It is amazing how simple it is for a child! If only we could keep that childlike forgiveness as we get older!

Really excited that Jayden is awake! Jay had me rolling with his prayer!

Nancy is going to come around soon! You have done a phenomenal job in showing her slowly reconciling all of the pain in her past!

The only person that irritated me in this chapter was Tamayea. I do understand that she blames his mom for Jayden's illness and their breakup, but she was almost as inflexible and intolerant as Nancy! Hoping they can at least be cordial towards each other once Jayden fully recovers!

Marvelous job as usual!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: April 06 2013

Title: Regret

Wow...thought I disliked Tam in the last chapter, she took my dislike to another level in this one. I do have to agree that she is now turning into Nancy, trying to control Jayden and her kids.

I can appreciate that she was upset with Dana for being disobedient, but I think she was a bit harsh. She needs to do as much soul searching as Nancy needs to do. Both of them are more alike than they realize!

Love the update! Hopefully Tam is going to come around!

Author's Response:
Tam is blaming Nancy for keeping her and Jayden apart. No one is expecting Tam to be forgiving, but they are expecting her to be civil if she wants to marry Jayden.

Tam felt that she had to go all out on Dana to get her attention. She did, but at what cost? More regret ahead perhaps?

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Regret

Wow...Tam is letting resentment completely tear her life apart...that is so sad. Hopefully she will have a change of heart soon or she is going ot loose everything that is important to her...

Looovvee this story! But you are incapable of writing a bad story!! :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: April 26 2013

Title: Regret

Dana is absolutely my favorite character in this story! I absoluely love her character! I also love the way Jay sticks up for his big sis! :)

You actually have me starting to feel bad for Nancy...now that is truly the sign of an amazing writer!! LOL...hopefully she will have a chance to show eveyrone she is changing before they all give up on her.

And prayerfully Tam will get a revelation or in 20 years she WILL be Nancy!

Author's Response:
LOL on feeling bad for Nancy. Nancy wants to be better, she just don't know how to be better. She knows that Jason has given up on her so now she feel lost.

More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: May 09 2013

Merri's Secret Fantasy by Brenda1257

Rated: 17 and older

Summary:

Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun. Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7553
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Absolutely love the start! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: April 06 2013

Skin Deep by Brenda1257

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 417]

Summary:

Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past. Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53967
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

You are simply amazing!! I love this story already. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: May 15 2013

Roxie and Griffin: Ever After by GeorgiaP

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 301]

Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34246
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Wow...at this point I think Griffin needs to back off give her space and do him. Obviously his commitment level for her is higher than hers is to him.

Hopefully while she is staying with her dad she will grow up...she is nothing more than a child right now playing at being an adult. To me Griffin is more her daddy than her fiancee.

Love this story and can't wait to get Roxie's point of view.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: February 11 2015

Adaline:The Silent by sha2011

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 286]

Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40812
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Love the story so far. I think Adaline needs to move on. I am not getting from Dom that he will ever see her in the light of anything more than a litttle sister or as a friend. I am hoping that Adaline will meet someone who is worthy of her! Hopefully she will give Murphy a chance!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: July 21 2015

Ezekiel Black by Brenda1257

Rated: 17 and older

[Reviews - 151]

Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather. Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40501
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015

Title: Ezekiel Black

So glad to see another story from you Brenda!! I am already hooked on this story and cannot wait for the next update!! Hopefully Zeke will remain strong and not allow his grandfather to change him too much! Love the romance brewing between Rosa and Frank! They are too adorable.

I hope LaDonna can stay strong and not fall for any tricks from Willoughby!

Author's Response:
LaDonna will be tested. You know how Willoughby is. He looks forf weaknesses to exdploit. More is coming!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: November 15 2014

Save Me From Myself by Missus James

Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 433]

Summary:

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 302220
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021

Title: Chapter 12: Guest of the Hour

I absolutely love this story! I stumbled on it last night and have enjoyed reading it! The only downside is now I am caught up and am itching like a crackhead for the next chapter! LOL. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response:
LOL, I will try to get your next fix! I promise.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed
Date: October 05 2015

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