Penname: ohsoolee [Contact]

Real name: Lee

Member Since: February 26 2012

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Retired
Betterment and Betrayal by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved the update! I kept wondering why at the end of this chapter Pearl called Eshan "Jesus" and them i realized a couple chapters ago when her mom asked Joss who she liked, she replied Jesus lol. Very clever! I guess her mom knows who she cares about after all



Author's Response:

Pearl doesn't know etiquette or the first thing about being PC.  But she knows her child.  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for reading and commenting, Ohsoolee!

 Reviewer: ohsoolee Signed
Date: October 09 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really hope Joss kicks Sahirah out the apartment. Sahirah definitely needs to get a taste of her own medicine.

 



Author's Response:

I agree.  Thanks Ohsoolee!

 Reviewer: ohsoolee Signed
Date: October 16 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is there going to be a part two or epilogue? lol I want to know what happens after they're married and how their life together is. I really enjoyed this story it was a great read !!! =)



Author's Response:

Thanks Ohsoolee!  There most likely willl be an epilogue or a short of some kind. 

 Reviewer: ohsoolee Signed
Date: October 18 2013

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