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Sugar Mama by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 960]
Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284022
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019

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Title: Chapter 11: Sugary Sweet

PLEASE,PLEASE let us readers (aka your FANS) name the babies. Yes, BABIES, Sugar deserves twins or triplets to make up for all the shit Lance put her through. And as for karma let Mariah's baby daddy be some trick she picked up and not Lance or the other wealthy ballplayer...and let Lance have sand in his balls; yes sand as we in the islands say...he can't make a baby



Author's Response:

Sugar is a twin and twins are known to have twins or multiples. ;) Three little Chefs running around. Heaven forbid! LOL You guys can totally name the babies. :D

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Date: October 29 2017
Title: Chapter 12: Sour & Selfish

So...Are the babies gonna be S's or M's? I vote M's...LOVE, LOVE the update.



Author's Response:

LMAO! I like M's too. 

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Date: December 04 2017
Title: Chapter 14: Sweet Satisfaction

No words...None can describe how absoulutly DELICIOUS this chapter was. Chef is THE MAN...OMG



Author's Response:

I am glad that you enjoyed the feast, LOL!

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Date: December 18 2017
Title: Chapter 21: Bold Limits

WOW...I think I need to take several seats after that



Author's Response:

LMAO! 

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Date: June 25 2018
THE PIECES LEFT BEHIND by marchpisces92
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Leviticus 20:21 states "And if a man shall take his brother's wife, it is an unclean thing: he hath uncovered his brother's nakednes; they shall be childless" Are circumstances different if said brother was a complete bastard? Let's explore what that verse really means.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 8565
Read Count: 1664
Published: October 23 2017
Updated: May 06 2018

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Title: Chapter 1: THE BASTARD'S FUNERAL

You have really good story ideas; and not meaning to put you on the spot but is there a reason that you do not finish them? Your ideas are REALLY REALLY good; do you start them here and finish them on another site? Your fans would ike to konw so we can read them. Anyway; good start; shows much promise. I hope Marley was the one that shot that raping ass in the back of his head.

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Date: October 26 2017
Title: Chapter 2: THE WILL

Child Support supercedes everything in an Estate. Sullivan WAS NOT married at the time of his death. If he was then his wife would have been entitled to 1/2 of his estae with the rest split between his minor children. Sage is his only child and she is entitled to financial support; the whole estate can be held up (entire, no money going to anybody) until paternity is establised and Sage is awarded her rightful support. Even in the real world I hear women of colour saying they "don't need his money"; maybe they don't need "his" money but "his" children are entitled to "his" financial support and the mother does not have the right to deny the children the support. You don't want to spend it? Fine...put it in a trust for the childrens future. The only person you are spiting at the end of the day is your own child (cutting off your nose etc.). why would any self respecting woman let her childs father's parents and mistress live off of his money while her own child is suffering? SMH

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Date: November 06 2017
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Changed by CrimsonBlaze
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 67139
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019

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Title: Chapter 4: The Change

Maybe I'm a meanie...or just realistic but please do not let her do the I'm a human and a wimp thing and forgive her so called "friend" for putting her in that position. A real friend would not have done that. So far all I can see is one female who thought she was "superior" to her human "friend" and did everything she did all in the name of "she knew better". I'm liking the storyline, but there are times when the werewolf/human story lines get redundant and we get tired of werewolf=smart/superior; human=dumb/inferior/need a keeper to run their life. I'll keep reading as I hope this story is different and it shows a heroine that does not take crap from anyone; human or werewolf or vampire (as Ian seems to just go along with what his wife is doing with no opinion of his own). What Beth did was wrong and I'm feeling as if she had an ulterior motive; she did what she did for her brother and her people with no consideration for her so called "friend" and employer.



Author's Response:

I am trying to keep this different so i hope you keep reading! I dont know if Mia can forgive Beth. Maybe after some time but it probably wont be right away if at all. Beth's actions caused the course of Mia's life to change forever. 

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Date: February 14 2018
Loving Luc by Gabriella Clark
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

My name is Arianna Mae Nyx, I always thought my name sounded like a kick ass heroine name. The name of someone great and doing awesome things. Not the name of a 25 yr old bike messenger, not the name of a college dropout and certainly not the name of someone who broke the promise she made to her dying mother. Mama got sick again, the cancer that had been in remission came roaring back with a fury that consumed her body before the doctor's could do anything about it. Before I knew it she was gone, my best friend was gone and I was left buried in grief and a mountain of debt. I had to sell my childhood home and take any job I could find in the city to pay off the debts. There would be no more college for me, no more taking any chances. 

My name is Luc Kapena not only am I the COO of Totality and the head of Autonomous, but I'm also the Kai of my hale. I'm the second in command of the most influential hale on planet Earth. I'm also a bit of a playboy, I like hanging out at the human clubs and I absolutely LOVE their women. When I see Arianna Nyx for the first time I think to myself this hottie needs to loosen up, she needs some fun in her life. I never expected to fall so hard, so fast. I never expected that she would be my Ke'Ola. Now all I have to do is convince her to give me a chance. What could go wrong?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16661
Read Count: 2355
Published: February 20 2018
Updated: April 08 2018

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Unless Arianna signed a promisarry note of some kind the hospital cannot come after her for her mothers medical bills; even as hers mothers "heir" unless there is money in the estate (which there is not as Arianna even sold her mum's house)they can't expect to get any monies from her.

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Date: February 21 2018
PROMISE by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

A werebear/werewolf story



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 18877
Read Count: 8415
Published: April 08 2018
Updated: July 28 2020

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Title: Chapter 1: LITTLE SHE BEAR

I'm another one that will ask...Can I be blunt? You have a WONDERFUL imagination; why do you start these stories? Is it to keep count of how many people are going to be pissed off? I understand how when you are a writer; ideas pop into your head all the time; is this the right venue to write down those ideas without followup? Your ideas are great; write them down in your journal etc. It is not fair; yes I understand we are not paying you; to start what you have no intention of finishing. You have over 25/26 stories on this site and I think; correct me if I'm wrong; you may have finished one.

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Date: April 09 2018
From Broken Heart to True Love by magensby
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

She thought that when she married it would last forever but it ended with a broken heart, hers. Now she journeys alone making the best of things until an encounter in a museum changes everything.

 

This story has been removed for self-publication.  You can find it in both eBook and paperback form on both amazon.com and barnesandnoble.com.  Thnx to all of the readers and reviewers on this story and the great encouragement received from my chambermates.  Although this story is no longer available on this site I remain an active participant here.  You guys are my 'crew' and don't you forget it.  ;>) Thnx.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3130
Read Count: 6220
Published: August 07 2018
Updated: August 21 2018

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Title: Chapter 1: The Museum

I don't normally read the "mature" stories; thinking; I don't have much in common with them. Your story caught my attention...and I like it. Please continue it regularly.



Author's Response:

Stories thnx for reading and reviewing.  Glad that my 'mature' story 'caught' your attention.  Hopefully you will continue to read and stay on this journey with Alessandra and Alistair.

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Date: August 11 2018
Title: Chapter 2: The Tour and the Law Office

Let her buy a home outside of London, close to the seashore, but also close to the rail system.



Author's Response:

Stories, keep reading the best is yet to come.  Thnx for reading and reviewing each chapter.  It encourages me to see the readers so involved.

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Date: August 11 2018
Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

Keep going please.



Author's Response:

Thnx again Stories for your continued support.  We will continue.

 Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2018
Title: From Broken Heart to True Love

YES!!



Author's Response:

4 for England, 0 for America.  Stories thnx for the review.  

 Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2018

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