Penname: Acdromance [Contact]

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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28572
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Marriage, Alcohol and Other Things on the Rocks....

Tess is getting on my nerves, she needs to grow up.  If Jay wants a marraige and family he better get a work life balance .

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Date: January 04 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Fantasies and Process Servers...

He is sleeping with someone else. He's a dirtbag .she should have stayed with the ex at leat he didn't pretend to be a good guy. I hope she finds a good guyeventually. 

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Date: January 12 2014

Title: Chapter 15: Apples and Assholes...

Im over jay. As far as im concerned Jay is just as gone as Toni. He couldnt hold out till his marraige was officially over and he is still lying to women. Dueces Jay. I am impressed with Tess growth but if she had yoked up that chick in the supermarket i wouldnt have held it against her.

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Date: January 11 2014

Title: Chapter 12: And Everything Went Dark....

Dang girl. Why you trying to do me like Mary J Blige. Got me all emotional and hating men right now. But I'll forgive you if you update soon.



Author's Response:

Mary J. Blige though...I am dead to the bed on that...I'm working on the next chapter now...Actually I wrote this while listening to Donny Hathaway...lol

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Date: January 09 2014

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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Entrances and Exits

This was worth the wait. Fantastic job. Im still grossed out that she is pregnant for her former stepchild but I m workng passed the ick factor. I appreciate that they are both being so mature especially anthony. She caused this on herself so i dont have that much sympathy for her but he is taking this not only in stride but handling her and their situation respectfully.



Author's Response:

Anthony is being a man about the whole situation.  We'll see if he maintains his poise as pressure mounts.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Acdromance!

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Date: February 05 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Reaping

Ahhhhh. I am so mad at you right now because I am at work trying not to ugly cry. This story is so good. Your writing us terrific. I just love how you describe things. Please give me more but cut Natalia a break and I am not opposed to killing her sister off. 



Author's Response:

I don't have any immediate plans to kill Barb off, but you never know when a homicidal urge might spring up.  As for Natalia, I don't know how much of a break she'll get.  I'm plotting out the next couple chapters and it ain't looking too good for our girl.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Acdromance!

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Date: July 31 2014

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhh how I loathe his mother.  I think the father can come around  but ohhhh the mother.  I feel like more of Eshan's personality and charm is prevalent in this story. I am loving how sweet he is with her. I hope she doesn't cower to this woman. I am so happy for the continuation of this couples story.



Author's Response:

Mrs. Kourosh is worthy of contempt.  You will get to see more of Eshan's romantic side now that he and Joss have decided to pursue a relationship and are no longer keeping it a secret.  More on Joss's reaction next chapter.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Acdromance!

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Date: December 20 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

“My sisters and I will be fine.  My mother’s silence is not as great a punishment as she would think.” This was my favorite line. I love me some Pearl, she had me lolling. 




Author's Response:

Pearl is an unmitigated mess.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Acdromance!

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Date: December 27 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh how I love this story. Eshan did the right thing by talking to the ex but I completely understand why Joss would be upset. His mother is dreadful and I don't trust his brother at all. I adore her mother she is a ride or die chick. I really appreciate your descriptions it paints such a clear picture. Great job.

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Date: June 20 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34242
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

I love Roxie and Griffin and with him in the NBA there is a ton of juicy story lines can some one say on a break baby but I really don't want them to turn into an episode of Maury.  All that being said if you write it I'll read it and if you publish it I'll buy it.   Just keep us posted.

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Date: January 18 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I screamed "Nooo" when I got to the end and realized there wasnt another chapter. I love this story. 

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Date: February 15 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I seldom give reviews but this is so good I have to. This story is soo good. Thanks for keeping it simple. The drama was just right not over the top.i love this story



Author's Response:

I love hearing from you Acdromance! You don't know how happy it makes me seeing y'all's comments! This book put me through ringer sometimes with all the hard topics and I'm glad you guys really enjoyed it. Rock on!

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Date: February 18 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

 

What happens when you begin to second guess the gift you gave to someone? Do you ask them for it back? Or perhaps you just take it back? Maybe that gift was fine for then, but holds no value now. Five years later, Teddy considers re-gifting but Tanner is worried that it is the same old tired shit just wrapped up in a shinier package. *Sequel to “The Gift of Goodbye”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10569
Read Count: 7616
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 19 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this very much. I hope you keep going.

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Date: January 23 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am so happy you continued this story.Tanner needs to pump the breaks for she ruins a good thing with Teddy. Just cause he named the place after her couch doesn't mean she should fall back into her old ways. At least make him work.



Author's Response:

I agree ACdromance. Let's see what Tanner does:-)

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Date: January 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Rya, a dreamer at heart is as imaginative as her mind allows her to be. She can't wait to go off into world and live a life full of adventure. Haseem yearns for a normal safe life. After leaving a troubled past, he hopes to somehow atone for his sins and start with a clean slate. Without complications.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8428
Read Count: 2653
Published: February 04 2014
Updated: February 17 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Educate me.

Ahhhh I love these two.  I can't believe I'm rooting for him but I am. He won't let his past define him. I love getting lost in those little stories in Ryas head. It's completely relatable to me as I was always called a daydreamer. But when she got caught even I was hoping the floor would swallow her up.keep going I am loving this story so far. The chemistry is obvious but not over the top.



Author's Response:

:) I'm glad you like them. Yeah I kinda struggled with Haseem because he was such a bad guy, like the worst, but I guess everyone deserves a chance. And Rya is funny we'll see how this all plays out. Thanks for all your encouragement!

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Date: February 17 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Save me.

This is so good you have to continue. I already love Rya and Haseem. Like that even though he has that element if danger she doesn't back down. She might be crazy but I like it . As usual great job. 



Author's Response:

Thanks ACD! Yep she's got a little crazy in her, but you're right she's not going to back down. Lol thanks for all your support!

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Date: February 05 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

 


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Essy is tired of waiting up for her husband



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1152
Read Count: 2376
Published: February 14 2014
Updated: February 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: LATE

Too cute

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2014

Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

This was it. They had come a long way from that first disastrous family meeting. And now...today was the day he as finally going to go for it. He had done all of the important things first, like asking her father for his blessing...He just hoped Mel felt the same way that he did, still. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1145
Read Count: 2397
Published: February 15 2014
Updated: February 15 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Working It Out:The Proposal

Cute



Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 15 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83571
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Three

I'm loving this so far. She is feisty.

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Date: March 02 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143286
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is so weird that it wasn't sexy to me. But I still like it . Jodi should be scared because Steve is an odd one but then again so is she.

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Date: March 17 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story but it is a little far fetched that she went from a solitary existence to three rich men suddenly after her. Is everyone else in the office, her complex, the world blind. Because it's not like it was a developing attraction all of a sudden she looks lie a sex kitten but just to them. It seems really random. I like the explanation of why Steve knew the layout of her home. But he is still a lil crazy.

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Date: March 27 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Why aren't more of the talented authors from Valentchamber receiving the accolades they so richly deserve? The answer is simpler than you can ever imagine.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 941
Read Count: 2552
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Your Voices Should Be Heard.

I appreciate the thought that went into this and I wholeheartedly agree. I try to support my VC writers. I have purchased the published works even if I have already read the original in its entirety.  I do it to support those brave enough to publish.  Thanks for writing this article and OMG I love Pepper Pace. I'd read her doodle on the back of a napkin. Yep it's like that.



Author's Response:

Lol! Wouldn't we all? Pepper Pace is one of the only authors I have ever read who can write about the details of caring for a person with health challenges with the sensitivity and knowledge needed to make the reader see beyond their challenges, and embrace their abilities. Her level of research is superb!

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Date: April 10 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Secrets are hidden among the plush,moist forest of  Rio, Brazil in the summer of 1955. The Taluro's, a wealthy Afro-Brazilian family have kept to themselves for generations. Bobbie Taluro is the last remaining female in her family....it seems that past women in the families generation have only disappeared. No one knows the Taluro's mysterious secret...except Bobbie's grandfather.

 


But as the sun arises and shines down to the neigboring ocean by the Taluro house... a boat sinking Todd will quickly learn about the tragic and somewhat beautiful secret of the Taluro ancestry.

 

WARNING: MUCH SEXUAL CONTENT



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4320
Read Count: 4163
Published: April 14 2014
Updated: April 15 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Blossom

Oh this was sweet, sad and very original. I really enjoyed this story. 

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Date: April 16 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

An event of neglect brought them together and led to an healing neither one of them could ever anticipate.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 12017
Read Count: 10979
Published: April 26 2014
Updated: May 07 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Blake

This story is fantastic so far. I am eagerly waiting updates. Your writing is vivid without drowning me in words. Lovely.



Author's Response:

You're so sweet! Thank you :D

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Date: April 30 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Amelia

I freaking love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks Acdromance :-)

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2014

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