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Just Ordinary by Forks and Knives
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Six-Strategy{an ugly mind is a terrible thing to use}

Wow, I can't believe how delusion Carmen is. I love how Richard knew and asked Nichole about her sister and knew what Carmen tried to do by side stepping any blame, when it was all on her.

I hate how they have to pretend to break up to catch that bitch on her lies and manipulations to get some revenge,but I still wish they didn't have to. Carmen really need to die soon

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Date: October 02 2012
Raising Alex by QueenConsort
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54941
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love Jamie and Mitch and that morning loving was hot. I want Jamie to contact her mother so that she can have some peace but not for the benefit of Paola . I think after her own mother abandoning her like that and not even try to get her back even though she got married and had another child is wrong and she doesn't deserve to have a relationship with Jamie cause that strong woman will always feel smaller and worthless with her mothers actions.The fact that she blamed her daughter for her messed up life in her mind, well that right there is cause to end her relationship with her mother on her own terms.

 

I want Jamie to have happiness and peace but that doesn't mean just cause you forgive a person you have to talk to them and have them in your life, that is a mistake that a lot of people make when family does them wrong. You forgive them for yourself so you can have peace and live a fulfilled life.

 Reviewer: lovinnforgiven Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2013
The Darker the Berry by idiotendenial
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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God forbid you be an ugly girl, 'course too pretty is also your doom, 'cause everyone harbors a secret hatred for the prettiest girl in the room.


Ani Difranco



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3076
Read Count: 3539
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: July 22 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Haven't You Heard?

Love love love it and I'm glad you are back to writing and posting again.

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Date: July 23 2013
Big Girls Do It Better by Renee Banks
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

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After a scathing indiscretion, NBA all-star James “JD” Denson is shipped back to his hometown in Tennessee to lay low, and to let his legal team handle the fall out of a night of drunken debauchery. With a lot of time on his hands, James accidentally concocts his own hair-brained scheme to get back into the NBA’s good graces.

When Tayla Maxwell, fresh out of culinary school, returns home to take a much needed break before real life begins, she has the misfortune of running into an ego-maniac with a laundry list of issues no one in their right mind would try to fix. Convinced that helping him trick an entire nation is a good idea, Tayla suddenly finds herself stuck between a rock and hard-headed fool who’ll either drive her to drink or make all of her dreams come true

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13762
Read Count: 6272
Published: October 24 2013
Updated: December 30 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming

I remember this story but I wasn't a member here yet. I'm so glad you are putting it back up with rewrites. Can't wait to read the rest.

 Reviewer: lovinnforgiven Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 24 2013

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