Love AA and I/R reading. Honestly just discovered alot of it about 6 years ago.
Love some of the authors and creators of this site from another site and would love to read new work from other authors as well.
Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice. Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?
First....“Slide up here and let Papa show you”.....haha, Cecil, you frisky rascal!
Second....I really don't appreciate how they (Douglas, Gena, Fawn Cecily) keep talking about Cara in relations to her virginity and privates like that. It's rolling off the tongues of these tactless, base, vulgar nasty people, too easily.
Third...“Now enjoy your breakfast, check out of your rooms and enjoy the rest of your life." Could not have said it better myself. That's right, kick rocks!
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I got a little emotional myself right along with Stephan. I understand why he reacted that way. It may seem a little irrational, but I totally get it. I thought the same thing. Brenda, why would your muse choose to do that to Stephan? That's a shame! Cara robbed him of Josiah's birth, and that hurt him, so I was really hoping he would have that with these babies. If he'd had that at least, I dont think this would have affected like it did. Now it just adds up to zero. He got to name them, but it's not the same. He's missed all of his kids births! Both families were all gushing and holding them and he felt like an outsider. Even Douglas was there and that was really hard for me to take; considering how he feels about Cara. He, especially, didn't deserve that honor! I just feel so bad for Stephan.
This was bittersweet for me.
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Glad it was relatively smooth, the wedding.
Douglas, well, he just needs to go home.
Cara likes to get down like that, too! Stephan is going to love this!!
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed Well done! Great ending.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Ok, married finally. Good deal.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Kayleesi is just about to start her senior year when she starts reacquainting herself with her childhood friend Sebastian. Overcoming their own insercurities to come together may prove to be a challenge.
Ok, so Kay seems a little wishy-washy. And Sebastian seems to be pulling this weird passive-aggresive thing on Kay. Which all makes me unsure what they are all about. They buried the hatchet, finally; now its all about SEbastian being jealous and practically daring Kay to sleep with him. On the other hand, here's Kay upset because she finds her ex only wanted sex the whole time they were dating; now she says what the hell why not concerning Sebastian? These two are confusing me.
It's not that she was upset that her ex only wanted sex with her that makes her upset, it's the fact that he used that as an excuse as to why he was dumping her. She just never felt comfortable with the idea of letting that part of herself go to him. Also she isn't exactly saying what the hell I'll sleep with sebastian, more like she's going to have fun instead of over thinking everything as she normally does and if that involves a few hot make out sessions with seb then why not? lol
hope that cleared that up :D
thanks for the review
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?
LOL...ok, I guess I see it a little differently cuz um, no ma'am, no breaking down in a pool of tears. She explained, and if he remembers, she told him they would discuss it later before he took off. No pleading and begging here. He knows the particulars now and she shouldn't allow him to use it as stick to beat her with. Its awkward enough. The rest of the stuff he has issues with her about is something else, but this one situation is weird and awkward. Anyone, including him, would have trouble with something like this. Its not exactly the norm, you know. It was during a devastating part of her life and things can happen in extreme grief. Gavin knows this so what else does he want from her on this matter.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed The best part of this chapter was Nyla talking about her daughter. That made me smile.
I'm so glad Nyla's going to tell Gavin about Trent because I would love to know why he's calling and harassing her like that. Is he crazy? It was a freaking one night stand! Who the hell harasses a one night stand anyway? Most people would want to keep that on the QT in this type of situation. Seriously, what is this dude's problem here. This isn't normal.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed I'm really enjoying this story so far. I just read the whole thing. There is the potential for more depth with Nya and her trying to seriously date and figure out how she feels about it all.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed Ok, yeah, so that was kinda weird at the restaurant, and maybe Nyla shouldn't have just assumed anything. Having said that, they do have to decide if exclusivity is what they want; because neither one owes the other explanations at this point.
So I guess Nyla turned to alcohol in her at her low ebb, huh?
Good!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Wow! That was heavy. I feel for Nyla. I'm glad that they have cemented the relationship, so they can move forward from here.
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I think this is the wrong way to go about this on Nyla's part. Tell him. It was a ONS; they are what they are. Everybody knows this. Is it Gavin's business, really, no. But the situation calls for full disclosure because not doing so just makes it worse. Is it awkward as hell running into your one and only ONS like that? Yes. Is it disconcerting to also discover that your ONS is the best friend of the man you are currently dating and in love with? Yes. But they are adults here. I seriously doubt Gavin is going to hold that against her or judge her on something that happened before they even met. Of course he isn't going to be pleased that his best friend has intimate knowledge of the woman he loves...literally, but there it is. It going to be uncomfortable more for Gavin and Trent than anyone else. Nyla barely remembered him and it was during a devastating time in her life. My concern is that this doesn't move her backwards in her therapy progress. I don't want all her hard work undone by that prick Trent.
Speaking of Trent, he is the one that puzzles me. The fact that he would suggest they hook up again now knowing what's going on says more about him than Nyla. He seems to think that he has her pegged, when in reality, he knows nothing about her or what happened to her in any great detail. He's showing a kind of hostility towards Nyla because of this ONS, for some reason. Again, they are all adults here so what's his problem?
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Perfect! Moving on from that loser!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Loved Gavin's family. I'm glad they were down to earth and cool like that.
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Colossal error in judgment here! To presume things over other peoples' family matters is a tricky thing. Assuming that whatever the problem was, it was Nyla's to get over was a mistake. And frankly, I'm kind of offended on Nyla's behalf. He implies she acts like some sort of flighty alarmist. Now, this money-grubbing heifer is in; and Gavin is the one who needs to get her out since he jumped the gun here. Let him deal with her. I also hope Nyla gives him a proper ass-chewing for his slightly haughty assumptions. Heavy-handedness indeed!
And I already see some kind of unholy alliance between Tina and Abbey in their one goal; which would be to get Nyla out. I could totally see Tina doing it for a big payday; since that's why she's there anyway. That, and to make life hell for a sister she's clearly jealous of. That's gravy for her.
However, I will give Gavin one small concession; Nyla could have given him a bitmore information about her family. Just enough so he had a better picture of what was going on with them.
The fur is about to fly now!!!
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed Tina needs to go and Gavin needs to get on that for Nyla! Thats all I got!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Loved the drama free chapter. Its nice to just see a day in the life of this couple.
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That was sweet with Ava.
Tina really must think Nyla is a complete moron! How is she gonna think she can just break up Nyla's relationship like that? She comes on the scene not knowing her ass from her elbow and because she put some plan into motion, it definitely supposed to work because Nyla is weak and vulnerable like that. Ughh! Really? That might have worked before, but Nyla has come a long since then. My shock would be that any plan to dismantle her and her confidence would work. What thread is she talking about?
And the fact that Tina thinks that its okay to even try to completely ruin her sister mentally to get her out of the way, then say she can just build herself back up again like she's talking about a toy is breathtaking. Who does Tina think she is?
And what's wth that mother of hers?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed I loved it.
Trent and Lisa are something different, huh?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed That was a lot for Nyla to take, and I think she did a good job, considering. Maybe one day she and Drake will meet again.
Greg's relatives are a trip. And I hope those people can understand why did cheked out of life aftewer her family was killed.
Gavin is a fool....lol!
Loved it! Hope you update soon.
You were the only person who seemed to sympathize with Drake. I'm not going to lie it hard for me to sympathize with him, but Im a grudge holder so. And your right Gavin is a fool.thanks for reading.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed I just love this chapter and the comfort level these two have managed to achieve.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed When Nellie McNeil goes up to a rich country club called 'Hilliard's' with her family, she never expects that she'd lose her sensible thoughts. Easily swayed by Julius Hilliard, one of the owner's son, she starts to like him. When her father finds out about her escapades, Joel McNeil and JD Hilliard split up their children, not wanting them to see each other. But like all mischievous kids, Nellie and Julius find themselves back together, trying to make their parents see they've fallen for each other. Hard.
I like this a lot. There is the potential for some serious drama here...lol!
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Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?
Matt is psycho! He really thinks Azalea dropped that bit of info to mess with his head? Really? Get over it, like he keeps telling Azalea he has. Granted, he has a right to be mad that Azalea his Chase, but he's being all kinds of rude and nasty to her all of the time. Not to mention he's parading his fiance all around, insinuating she's the better woman. He's mad, we get it, but now its time to get over it, move on, and make a new way with Chase; and with Azalea for Chase. Besides, his mother is a major contributor to the reasons why Azalea never told him. I can't wait until he finds out so he can get off his high horse about it! Will he be just as rude and nasty to her?
And I'm glad Azalea got him told. His not knowing about Chase doesn't give him the right to tell Azalea what to do. He has some nerve! Look at him second-guessing Lizbeth in his own life, yet, willing to subject Chase to her just the same.
I never say this to the writers, because you are giving us this for free and you have real lives to tend to, but....update soon!
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed Azalea needs to tell Matt about what really went down. I'm a little tired of his attitude. I get it, and he has a right to be angry, but he's taking things to another level now. All this snarling and huffing isn't needed. Lets see what he does when he learns the truth of things.
Lizbeth is sooo getting on my freakin' nerves!
Chase is a cutie!
Bring on the drama when his mother gets there!
Glad this story is back, too!
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
