Penname: flikchick [Contact]

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Member Since: December 17 2008

Membership status: Member

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Love AA and I/R reading. Honestly just discovered alot of it about 6 years ago.

Love some of the authors and creators of this site from another site and would love to read new work from other authors as well.




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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69616
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

LOL....homey has been saving that since college!! He let her have it!!! And he has a dominate streak in bed with her. Ha!! Good grief.

Can't wait for the morning after events....hehehe...

Love, love, love the dress!!

Nice!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he’s been waiting to put it on her and it showed. Apparently Dean’s newfound dominance is winning in the reviews. Glad you were feeling it & thanks for reviewing flikchick!

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Funny. As. Hell!!! Homey put the smackdown on homegirl!! Ha!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40504
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

Dee is soooo horny...lol! Her not being able to look Rosa in the face again doesn't seem to negate the fact that she really wants to bust a nut! Too funny!!


Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

Well, I'm not ready to give up on Zeke just yet. We still have aways to go. This was stupid, and I think he knows it and that he was taken advantage of. I think his frame of mind going forward is to expect the unexpected. He now knows Willoughby will try anything, use anything, to have his way with him, first hand. Couple that with what all three of his parents have been telling him most of his life should give him a fairly realistic picture of the truth of Willoughby. At least as he stands right now. 


He also needs this time to center himself and remember why he's there with Willougby in the first place. And he's there simply to get to know him and be a positve influence...if he can. That's not a given. Remind his grandfather of this. As someone said, set some boundaries with him. Tell him to seriously cut it out now. Part of the problem is that Zeke has been on Willoughby's turf and that has given him the advantage. He's been too busy on defense and that has left him vulnerable to attack. Flip the script. Get on offense.


Ask Frank where a church that's like (or close to like) his is and tell the old man that while he's still there, its mandatory that he go with him every Sunday. That will help Zeke stay the course as well. Show Willoughby what his interests are, not just do or go where Willoughby wants all the time. Take him bowling, to the movies, go out for pizza; anything he likes to do at home. Ask him about his father, ask him about his grandmother and the rest of that side of the family. Ask him about himself growing up. Zeke can cover some good ground here. And its something Willoughby isn't used to. Having to cut the crap and just be a regular person doing regular things.


Next, he needs to tell his girlfriend what's been happening here. You battle Willoughby with honesty and truth. Secrets, lies, and intimidation is where Willoughby lives, so Zeke'll never beat him there. It's imperative they keep the lines of communication open.


And might Dee remind Zeke that she's been totally down and pushing for the sex this whole time and he's the one who refused! His blue balls is his own fault on that score! However, remembering why he refused might help clear his head with all the fast girls and porn his grandfather is throwing his way. Which was Dee is the one for him and he could wait for her to realize that.


Willoughby sent that boy home tighter than a damn drum waiting to explode! His stupid friend didn't help the matter. I hope Zeke now knows he was full of crap with his extremely poor advice. 


And I'm going to give both of them more credit than to fall for what Willoughby has in mind. 


Whew!


Damn good stuff!!!



Author's Response:

Flikchick, you're on point as usual!  Yes Zeke made a mistake, but he is young and he'd never been exposed to all that Willoughby presented.  Willoughby was counting on that to throw him off balance.  Now Zeke will have to regroup and figure out what to do next.    More is coming up later today, (hopefully)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

Haha....well done, Zeke! Very clever. He got Dee to see what he was saying without too much trouble. Now her own promise to the relationship will help keep her focused.



Author's Response:

Yes it was a setup from the beginning.  Notice that her father wasn't too upset about her going?  LOL

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Date: November 19 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

Well, damn! Zeke is sexy as hell with his absolute confidence and resolve in himself and his faith! And not in an arrogant way at all. He comes at you with simple honesty and truth; and you can be confident in the truth because the truth sets you free! That's exactly how he acts, free...lol! There's really no guile in him! Willoughby can't handle this type of person. He was taught to be his own man, know his own mind, and that money can't buy or give you everything. So Willoughby had nothing to use against someone who can't be bought. I'm loving Zeke! He's kinda different.

LaDonna....Zeke is right, she needs to work on her issues. Right now she seems weak and unsure of herself. It wouls seem Zeke would need someone stronger than this at his side. That can get old, quick. And she's projecting her insecurities on to him. That needs to stop. Again, old...quick. Zeke's right to give her time to sort herself out. I think he wants her all in or all out.

Nice!!

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Date: November 09 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

Is it wrong that all Willoughby did was make me giggle?

Nice!



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Date: November 10 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

Willouhby and those two little skanks were totally digusting!



Author's Response:

Yep and Willoughby can't understand why Zeke feels that way. LOL

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

LOL....Willoughby was acting like all that was positively painful. It just crystallized what a lonely old man he is. Deep down he knows he liked all of it. Its actually having real human connections, Willoughby! 

I hope Dee tells Zeke. Don't be dumb and not tell him.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2014

Title: Ezekiel Black

Good for Zeke! Always thinking....

Dee is really going to have to believe some things in life. First, Zeke is NOT the end all be all. Second, she's good enough...period. If Zeke left tomorrow, she'd be ok in the end. She has to know that inside herself. And really, she has no business giving any other human being that kind of power over her. Zeke can't believe that for her, and its not his job to do so. That can get tiresome after a while. Dee needs to woman up already! Be as bold about herself as she is about wanting the sex.

Glad you're back!!

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Anika Williams is use to people she love being ripped from her life. Whether by death or choice. When she was sixteen years old she and her mother were kicked out the only family they ever known. Now twenty-one years old, pregnant, and alone, she doesn't have time for the same family trying to make amends.

Anika would love nothing more than to give them her back like they did her all those years ago. Well that was the plan until the man who's responsible  for the life growing inside of her thinks she was the reason he was sent to jail and tries to get revenge. Now she must put her faith in this family to not only save her life but the life of her unborn child.

Take a ride with Anika as she finds a family,  love, and a chance at true happiness.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 4902
Read Count: 6223
Published: November 17 2014
Updated: December 02 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Loving this story.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2014

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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10879
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, first, whats up with homegirl BFF Natasha? Even if they diasgreed, why would she react like that? Take a break? And then basically said you're on your own if trouble starts? Just becasue she's crushing on the school bad boy and Callie didn't like him? Something aint right with that picture. Throwing some shade her way for that move!

Now Callie, while Darren has done nothing but add to his rep, she should have kept it together in public better than that. Big ears were all around them. However, she gets props for standing by the sh*t she talked though! And to be fair to her, it was just to her girl. Its not like she was on blast throughout the school with it, or had ever been. But, let that be a lesson; don't ever write a check with your mouth your ass can't cash!

 

And Darren just basically said he was going to beat up a girl and knock her teeth out so I don't know what there is we are eventually going to like about him. Hmmm...

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Date: December 01 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The date

Ok....this is a development of a sort.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary: Ginger Ross is a woman with a plan and that plan doesn't include any room for romantic entanglements. However, her plan undergoes some unique alterations when a fender bender causes her to cross paths with Jerry Medina, a widower who is trying to piece together a future vastly different than the one he had planned.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1092
Read Count: 2108
Published: January 17 2015
Updated: January 23 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

I like it.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm determined to improve my writing skills.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Ebony 'Bunny' Banks is the type of girl Clark Davis never thought he'd be in love with. With her cloud of hair and perfect imperfections, she wasn't the girl his parents or society taught him to go for. Clark Davis is the type of guy Ebony Banks would never notice with his close tie to the cheering hags and his movie star appearance. They are on two completely opposite sides of the popularity scale. Him being a pretty popular guy and her a wallflower. Yet somehow these two seemed to have found each other and the odds of love seems to be in their favor.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3103
Read Count: 4846
Published: February 16 2015
Updated: February 28 2015


Title: the odds

OK, I'm not liking Allison already. What does she want? And what does she think he can do for her?

Bunny...I'll wait and see about her for now. She wants to remain invisible to the world.

Keep going. Sometimes it takes a bit for the story to get the attention you want :)

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Date: February 28 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A girl and a Homeless Man with Violet eyes find a common place in a cafe Called Melancholy.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2717
Read Count: 1859
Published: February 26 2015
Updated: March 01 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Hello for the first time.

This story seems familiar? Keep going, I'd like to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

It does? I just came up with recently after seeing a woman chat with a homeless Man. I thought how cute.. let me know if you know what the name of that story that seems familiar with mines. I don't want people thinking I ripped it off from another author.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2015

Rated: Members ONLY: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 321]
Summary:

 


When Caleb, heir of the four and alpha of his pack, attends a party celebrating his twin deltas’ birthday, he doesn't anticipate finding Luna’s greatest gift: his mate, Ava-Rain. Immediately consumed with curiosity and undeniable interest, he manages to make his presence known to her, but their introduction is kept brief. To reject one’s mate is to reject Luna herself, and that is exactly what Caleb intends to do. Not because he wants to but because he has to. But will he be able to stay away in order to ensure both her and his pack’s safety, or will their unbreakable connection lure him back and add even more trouble into the mix?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 165660
Read Count: 34486
Published: March 27 2015
Updated: October 30 2016


Title: Chapter 5: 4 (1) - 'Let the sky fall, when it crumbles. . .'

What the hell is wrong with that woman??? 

Ava-Rain and Caleb...lets get started!!



Author's Response:

Lol, maybe she's just misunderstood?

Thanks for reading & reviewing, flikchick! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2015

Title: Chapter 2: 1 - 'I don't care, party anywhere, I'm broke, man, possibly beyond repair.'

OK, T, you know how much I love this story! My heart was broken when you took it down, so please don't toy with my emotions here...lol! We are going all the way to the finish line, right?



Author's Response:

LOL, you always know how to make me smile, flikchick! I promise, no toying with your emotions this time around! I know, I was horrible for taking Alpha down. . .*lowers head in shame*. . .but I'm determined to see this story to its end. You know I'll be busting out the Usain Bolt lightning pose when I finally cross the finish line! 

Thanks so much for reading & for reviewing! I'm so honoured to have your support once again! :) 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2015

Title: Chapter 6: 4 (2) - '. . .we will stand tall, face it all together.'

Hmmm.....I see Declan is getting the once over in a review! Nuh uh....that's my baby from way back...lol!



Author's Response:

LOL!!!! I see that the LOVE for Declan is still ALIVE & STRONG! Hahaha, looks like you ladies may have to share him. ;)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2015

Title: Chapter 3: 2 - 'Just close your eyes, the sun is going down. . .'

And here it goes with the Jennifer mess!

Was that our boy in the woods? And why would he drag and scare her like that.



Author's Response:

I guess this means that I've earned your forgiveness? Lol, thanks so much for reading & for taking the time to review, flikchick! Means a lot! :)

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 7: 5 - 'This fire rising through my being, burning, I'm not used to seeing you.'

I'm liking this version of Ava-Rain. I like the more decisive, less fearful person here. I also like that she knows what Jennifer is all about. She's less naive all the way around.

Nice!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your feedback, flikchick! Ava-Rain's character definitely needed a little fine-tuning, so I'm glad you've noticed the little differences. Wait, what am I saying, you've ALWAYS noticed the little things, lol. It's one of the many reasons why I totally appreciated having you as a reader! ;)

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 6: 4 (2) - '. . .we will stand tall, face it all together.'

I so love this chapter.

I'm glad Caleb is being clear in his position of being there for Ava-Rain. She needs that more than anything else right now.



Author's Response:

I love that you loved it!

Thanks so much for reading & for taking the time to review, flikchick! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2015

Title: Chapter 4: 3 - 'I'm waking up, I feel it in my bones. . .'

LOL....nothing to forgive, doll! Its your story and you do what you need to do with it. Period. But I am glad its back :)

I honestly couldn't really get into Moonrise because I wanted to see this story to completion first. Its irrational and crazy; and possibly a little immautre...lol...but that how it was with this one. You REALLY had me invested! 

Now I get back into Moorise, Alpha is back and all is right with the world!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so, SO much for saying that, flikchick! I think I'll always feel like I don't deserve a second chance with telling this story, but I've got to learn to stop doubting myself at some point, right?

As for Moonrise, I tooootally get where you're coming from! It's definitely not irrational or crazy or immature. I always promised you all an ending to Alpha and, instead, I started another story, lol. So I completely understand if it hasn't held your interest. :)

I probably sound like a broken record by now, but I really, really, REALLY do appreciate your continued support, flikchick! Thanks so much for still reading & for taking the time to review—even though I know that you already know how the next thirteen chapters are going to turn out, lol. It means a lot.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2015

Title: Chapter 8: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

Yes! Definitely liking this new version of Ava-Rain! No hysterics, but her reaction was measured, confident and reasonable.

Is it wrong that I really want them to tear up the sheets now...lol?!

Good stuff!!



Author's Response:

Glad you're still enjoying it, flikchick!

As for them tearing up the sheets, LOL, they've only known each for, like, four days!! Hahaha, but I'm sure Caleb and his wolf would love nothing more, though.

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2015

Title: Chapter 10: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

So, as per usual, my attention is on Declan. And his relationship with his brother. At the heart of it, what is that all about? Twins are arguably the two closest human beings on the plant. Why do these two act like they hate each other so much? And why does Rickon appear to get so much enjoyment out of Declan's discomfort?

Caleb needs to learn to say the words I'm sorry...lol! He has a wife now, there will be more opportunities that require it. However, his brand of apology was sweet....hehehe.

Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes, the twins. Rickon & Declan definitely have a sibling rivalry thing going on, which, unfortunately, results in them bringing out the worst in each other. And that totally sucks because, as twins, they share a special bond, but rather than accept, protect & nurture it they tend to fight it & reject it. *sighs*. . .boys. . .

As for Caleb, LOL, I know, right? He's so stubborn! But I'm glad you enjoyed his version of an apology, and, like you said, there will be more opportunities that will require it, so he will definitely have to learn to suck it up and utter those two words, lol.

As always, flikchick, thank you kindly for reading & for taking the time to review! It means so much to me! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2015

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