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Love AA and I/R reading. Honestly just discovered alot of it about 6 years ago.

Love some of the authors and creators of this site from another site and would love to read new work from other authors as well.




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Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53350
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Ok, I love little Jaylen and she's doing a beautiful job with him.

Shady Ambrosia.

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Date: May 16 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Ok, now we are about to get down to some serious business!! Yes!

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Date: May 17 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

You know, I really like Aries. She has a good sense of herself and she's strong with a good mindset. She does what she has to for her and her son and its evident that he's always first priority. The fact that her son always walked into daycare clean, feed and presentable spoke volumes about her character. It didn't matter that she wore secondhand clothes as long as Jaylen was looking decent.

She also doesn't take any mess and she doesn't think these people are any better than her just because they have money. She never tried to game these people and she could have at any point in the last three years. She took what she had and made the best of it for her child.

Plus, as her very last resort, and only for her son, did she contact these folks. Initially, they said no and she went on about her business. No badgering, begging, constant calling, or theatrics from her to them. I hope Anthony and Chris are taking note of this because her actions are speaking louder than any words Ambrosia could ever say going forward. She appears even-tempered and has manners. And her sweet baby looks to be the same way. Its also tickles me pink that she and Jaylen are stuck like glue to each other :)) I like mother and son!!

Cameron...I can't decide what he's about yet. Is he so in love that he's blind to all else or just gullible? And this is because of what Aries said about him knowing how Ambrosia was treating her and yet he did nothing. Because it sounds like she was bullied by Ambrosia and her pack. No, we don't have the full story yet and maybe he's just a person who is indifferent to others in life, but that doesn't exactly endear me to him until I know more. It also says something about his character as well.

Cannot wait to learn more about these menfolk.

Good stuff!

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Date: May 18 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Yes, please Cameron, go to New York. I want to see this little meeting at last. Because all this sh*t still goes right back to his lady love, Ambrosia...ughh!

I'd like to see him try to come at Aries in some type of way! She is nobody's pushover. Life has been too hard for her to be. She's had to be tough, resourceful, and resilient out of necessity. Having not a living soul to depend on in the world does that to you. It can humble you in ways you never thought possible. So, no time for bullsh*t from folks.

Now, did he have a right to know about Jaylen, maybe; but all indications suggest that still might not have been the smartest thing. Honestly, they got drunk, had sex and she got pregnant. How the hell do you explain that to your son later on? Not exactly their finest hour and Ambrosia was between them. Her "friend" that suddenly became an enemy. I see her reasoning here. A big mess!

Love that baby!

 

Cant wait for this.....

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Date: May 19 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

OK, Antonio just endeared me to him for life! They are going to be pals from now on.

Cameron...meh, he's still on my list.

Jaylen, man I love that little guy!

Those brothers are a trip. I really like the smart assness? of Stephen...ha!

Who is left at home to greet Junior...lol?

Yes! Cant wair for the rest...

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Date: May 20 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

Good for Aries! Stand your ground! He can get some licks in about not knowing about Jaylen, but not too many. She's taking what he's serving like a woman; however, he doesn't have much room to judge, given his own behavior. That's probably why she made that comment to him. How secure can she feel that he would keep her and her baby safe with him and the rest of the Marino men drinking all the cool aid Ambrosia was serving them? So no, she really doesn't think much of him, right now.

And if he wants to be angry, then turn that on himself. Aries has had to go it alone, so she went in to protective mode for her and her baby. God knows he's only been whining, and crying being led around by the nose while Ambrosia's been making a plum fool out of him behind his back the whole relationship.  

Even after he finds out about the cheating he takes her back? Now he's learning how truly crazy this lunatic is! Bullying, pushing, spitting and orchestrating a rape??? Then he has the nerve to act all surprised when he finds out about the affair? But this was the love of his life, right?

Cameron needs to be a better judge of character period before he judges Aries on her character.

All respect goes to Christian. He took Aries and Jaylen under his wing and became protective of them before anyone right away, without question.

Nice!!

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Date: May 26 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

I hope Pops means what he says about Ambrosia, because if something happens to Aries, and especially Jaylen, I'm not gonna like that! One bit. Its all about protecting them. 

Cameron would do well to not be dismissive of Ambrosia and underestimate her. The chick is crazy. For real.

I didn't want Aries to show Cameron that he could affect Aries about Jaylen and taking him away, but I guess the reality is that he could if he really wanted to. 

Waiting for the meeting with Ambrosia....

Nice!

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Date: June 01 2015

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Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48970
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

What the hell is up with Sybil and her boyfriend!! Jen is too damn nosy and fully nuts! That dangerous deadly kind of nuts! Chance is not too far behind her! Why in hell would he expect Angie to open the door for him? Like she was his woman who better do what he said or something? And why should he be mad she didn't? And why would Angie relax and return his kiss like that? Dude totally went from jekyll to hype in a split second! WTF??

Angie's needs to listen to that inner voice about those two.

You always have a different and surprising spin to your stories, I tell ya!

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Date: May 28 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'll stand up and say it; yes Angie, you are the stupidest woman alive!!

What would possess her to not shut the door in his face after apologies were made? But see, she won't let it be right there, she's gonna mess around and get caught up in some crazy bullsh*t with him and his woman. Watch. She won't be able to say later on that she didn't know because she knows enough now to keep her distance. If she knew these people and had some type of emotional investment, then I could possibly see that. But she just met these people! They are basically strangers to her. Don't know them or their story. 

Chance, not digging him right now. He's too demanding and presumptuous where Angie is concerned. And way too damn possessive. I don't like how he gets all up in her face like he has some right to do that. Really, all he's showing is that he's horny as hell and needs to bust a nut! That seems to be the focus for him. Nothing more. Because he doesn't know her for anything more. But he'll keep pushing until sh*t gets started involving Angie and that dangerous lunatic he's living with.

This is gonna get crazy....

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Date: May 30 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Oh, Moppet!! That sucks! Its also sucks that Denise would just up and go like that.

Now the mother has some words of advice for Angie to stay away from her son now I guess. Because crazy Jen is the perfect woman for her son! Yikes!

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Date: September 20 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm sorry, I still can't get with this possessive nature Chance has concerning Angie. He gets too close, he's too touchy, and demands where he has no business at. Why would he even suggest that Angie would be playing "games" with him while he's the one with the pregnant girlfriend at home? He knows that's not true. And she doesn't need to greet him any type of way. They are not in a relationship. They barely know each other. She should have told him to kick rocks. Also, he's right, he needs to get his crap together. However, asking Angie to help with that is a no go. She doesn't need to involve herself in that business. They had problems way before she got there. That's all his to clean up. Keep the distance until he does. People like Jen could get folks hurt.

I love Moppet.

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Date: June 14 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

That wasn't smart of Angie...at all. I'm wondering about her at this point. First, she only gave him what he's been wanting all along. Second, he hasn't resolved a damn thing with Jen. The only thing she's done is get herself right in the middle of that mess. Jen is after the money and she's trying to make sure she gets it now. Whatever comes her way concerning Jen, Angie put herself in it. I can't even believe she did that.

And Angie has that Harris situation to work out. Actually, she can just dump him because all she's given him were afew dates. she owes him nothing.

Chance has always been kind of shady to me. He may get better, but actively persuing one woman while with another says it all. I don't care how crazy she is. Then settle the matter with one woman FIRST before going after the other. 

This was interesting....

 

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Date: June 19 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Guess we will see how all this plays out, however.....


While Angie owes Harris nothing, and its right for her to stop seeing him if she doesn't really want him, she should have handled that herself. Tell him herself to his face so he knows from her, not a third party. And certainly not from the man he's being replaced with. That wasn't Chance's place to do that and it has never been his business. She was the one seeing him for whatever it was worth to her. I have absolutely nothing for Harris, but that was still kinda f*cked up. Meanwhile, she's listening at the door like some scaredy cat. All that talk about being grown and taking it and calling it a day, and she couldn't do that? Ok.


That may be the end of it from Harris; some people can take a hint and go on about their business, feeling its not worth the trouble, but I wouldn't be surprised if he shows up again wanting to talk to her this time. 


Same with Chance. When Jen gets out of the hospital and eventually comes knocking, no one would expect Angie to handle that for Chance. And I don't think Angie herself would expect to handle that for him either. And Chance hasn't even done that; tell Jen to her face. She will come looking for him for an explanation of some kind. Does Chance really think she wont? He probably needs to tell her some things concerning his feelings about her killing his baby and their relationship in general for his own closure as well. If he didn't I'd be surprised. That's just human. She really hurt him with that. They were actually in a long-term relationship. Yes, she's crazy as hell, but he should tell her all this to her face. Again, so she hears it from him without any misunderstanding whatsoever. 


Kinda sloppy, Angie and Chance.


Good work!

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Date: June 21 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Yay!! Lovely ending!!

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Date: January 19 2016

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Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13735
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 7: Clear choices

I second BellaChica on this. He just made things sooooooo much worse!

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Date: February 28 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

YES! YES! And YES! To it all!!

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Date: May 23 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Be on Time

I like so far. Keep it coming!

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Date: June 08 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Nights like this

The only thing I can say about that scene with Katrina and her sister and cousin; if she doesn't stick up for herself, no one else will feel the need to. At some point you have to stand up to the bullies yourself.

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Date: August 05 2015

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Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 37254
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Man, I LOVE this story!!! I just read it ALL, so here goes.....

Adele needs to stay frosty. Why she's allowing Gabriel any of these personal liberties is beyond me. Why? Because she's had the advanatge of seeing Gabriel for who he truly is. He was in an atmosphere to be comfortable enough to say exactly what he truly thought and felt.

This man marginalized Adele in the most fundamental way. As Adele said, it was apersonal attack. This fool basically said she was no more than an Affirmative Action charity case and she can be dismissed from anything that may be going that's meaningful and real happening at that company for her. Just sit her in a corner and give her bullsh*t clients that no one cares about to keep her busy like a little dog with a bone. Without ever having spoken to her or working with her. Purely based on appearance. Didn't know a damn thing about what he was talking about. And in a room of prospective employers who followed his disgusting lead. Then had the nerve to laugh about it!

Now, that she's glammed it up a bit, she's suddenly worth a look? Adele had to fight through the precedent he set forth just to get where she is now. Granted, he must have found like-minded people for that to happen to begin with, but still. That's the infuriating part. Nothing but Adele's appearenace has changed. He never gave her the chance. She's professional, efficient, capable and a team player. And that's what she had to offer all along.

So all this trying to get personal is just bullsh*t to me. I'd have to tell him to refrain from all the touching. He'd have to keep his greasy paws off. Like that whole wedding bit. Why didn't she set his mother and all those people straight? No need to keep asking him why he didn't do it. I would have been standing there mad as hell with him thinking how cute it all is having her there under false pretenses. Like he's dating her and introducing her to his parents and she's the last to know. That wasn't a damn date! She's not his girlfriend. She's not even his friend. Why would she want to be friends with someone who has such a low opinion of her?

Now, back in the car, this joker wants to know if he's offended her? He doesn't remember what he said about her at that meeting? Really? Because what he said was pretty decisive and foul.

So no accountability for what he said, and more importantly, the impact of it all. He tells her they fit? And how is that? He's gotten nothing but professionalism at work and indifference personally. Which is all he deserves, by the way. He's gone from zero to sixty in a month? And to use reverse psychology and basically say, well it must be true otherwise you wouldn't have made any changes at all, would you? His comments went so much further than that. 

Admittedly, I am giving Adele a bit of the side eye. What has he showed her to make her believe anything he has to say enough to be straddling him in a car? I mean, fresh off of an ambush at the office or some creepy relationship manufacturing on his part?

Side note: why is Max taking up for Gabriel? He heard what Adele heard.

Love! Love! Love it!!

Good stuff!! 

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Date: May 30 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What exactly is Gabriel surprised about in Humphrey's remark? That's the example he set to follow. And that's what irks the piss out of me; that he's suddenly got some weak ass memory loss with it all. 

Still waffling about Adele. Not sure what she would find so attractive about someone who would say and think something like that about her. And being dismsissive about her feelings and pride about it while saying "you're not the woman I thought you were"and basicaaly get over it already would get him kick to the nuts! To me that outweighs everything else and make hims very unattractive and ugly to me. He didn't offer an apology about it, really. And when are they going to have a REAL conversation about it? Surely that can't be it?

Waiting for the rest....

Wonderful!

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Date: June 04 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Lovely ceremony. 

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Date: June 06 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yes, he needs to think long and hard about it. Does he actually feel that way, or just conforming out of indifference to others and their lives. Its a fundamental question that he needs to resolve within himself first, and then tell it to Adele, second. Because despite what he says, its the physical that's got him going right now. 

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Date: June 07 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Just keep on thinking Gabriel. It'll come to you. He's looking at how ugly he was through his buddy there and its not comforting at all. I'm sure he's starting to wonder why Adele would even talk to him, much less be his friend or consider dating him like he wants.

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Date: June 08 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What a scumbag!

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Date: June 11 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Max needs a story! I love this guy!

 

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Date: June 14 2015

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