Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

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Member Since: October 22 2012

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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

A

 

Dynomite

 

Christmas

 

(Fan-fiction challenge)

(GOOD TIMES TV SITCOM FROM THE 1970's)

WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3715
Read Count: 6082
Published: December 22 2014
Updated: December 26 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Black Vinyl Records

This was a good continuation of this families love and holiday cheer. I just hope their holiday season stays festive.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you will enjoy the ending.  Happy New Years! 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 31 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40316
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

Nice start, can't wait to read what happens next.

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Date: July 02 2016

Featured
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 256]
Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53277
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

I'm hooked on this story.
I read every chapter today and can't wait to read how Aries will adapt to this new family.

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Date: May 21 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.

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Date: May 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

I hope Ambrosia doesn't take a trip to NYC because there will be some serious explaining to do.

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Date: May 26 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

I'm nominating you for a "featured" story to read.

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Date: May 26 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Ambrosia is playing with fire if she hurts that child. Because I think Aries will kill anyone who will hurt her child.

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Date: June 01 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13732
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Parks and Truths

Kat has heart but I have a feeling Clark will put her in the "friend" category because men are extremely visual.

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Date: November 03 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Parks and Truths

Kat has heart but I have a feeling Clark will put her in the "friend" category because men are extremely visual.

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Date: November 03 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Be on Time

What picture did she use to portray herself?

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Date: June 08 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Sound Familiar

Oh boy, Kat's going to be in some hot water.

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Date: July 16 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Parks and Truths

I feel sorry for both of them actually.

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Date: November 07 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 37226
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the beginning. Can't wait to read the rest today.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can tell that he is a enormous prick.
I hope this isn't her love interest.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Men hate being ignored or dismissed even though they have no problem dismissing women. Love it.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She should run, he is dangerous. Someone in his position makes a point to remember what he says. I don't believe that he can recall saying those hurtful words about her.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope Adele's control isn't faltering.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Go Adele!!

Make him work for it.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG! So now Gabriel is smitten with Adele to the point where he is annoyed and distracted.
I'm not sure of the time frame you have set for this story but I hope it takes years for her to fully forgive him.

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Date: June 05 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Gabriel seems to be confused not sincere.

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Date: June 07 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

 Her life was to be scarificed. She was sent to die in order to keep the treaty of her people, her family from her same fate but Kora's intuition was soon brought to light of her true calling ... that involved her complete submission over her body. What awaited her was neither man or beast but both and he wanted to consume her whole with a fire that burned deep.

Veles lived and breathed war.As a warrior of Drakon clan, battle was his only outlet, fighting with his brothers and taken the glory for all was the creed he lived by.When given the oppurtunity to take a slave for the sake of her village he agreed but what he didn't realize was the war it create to keep her.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Historical
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15915
Read Count: 17786
Published: July 28 2015
Updated: September 03 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I always appreciate a good dragon story.

Author's Response:

Sorry took me so long to respond!! Thank you for reading and giving it a chance!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301712
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

This is my first time reading this story. I am glad that you've te-posted and updated their story. I can't wait to read what happens next.

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Date: July 09 2017

Title: Chapter 22: Lost Children

Great story, I'm glad I apent the day reading from the beginning.

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Date: July 09 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

CARGO (White Chocolate Series Book 2) by [Griffin, E. F.]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6547
Read Count: 1448
Published: November 06 2015
Updated: November 06 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's a disturbing beginning.

I've heard stories about human trafficking but never thought about reading one.

Great concept for a difficult subject.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.