Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

Real name: nadali w

Member Since: October 22 2012

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[Reviews - 72]
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Lana and Lucas have an arrangement. Something that works for the both of them. At least Lana thought it did.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8868
Read Count: 11844
Published: March 12 2013
Updated: April 13 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Is that all it takes?

Cute story. 

I thought he would've made her wait a little longer. 

 

 

 

 

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Date: April 14 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172772
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016


Title: Chapter 15: Good Times

So I know that this is Aria's story but since all of the girls were in foster care don't they all have skeletons in their closet.



Author's Response:

A little thing about me? I try my damn hardest not to give away the "important' stuff. Yes, this is an Aria centric story, but Kay and Maya will also have their seperate storylines.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

-Amby 

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Date: July 13 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Car Rides and Motivations

Didn't you release this chapter two weeks ago.

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Date: April 26 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Hope

I like this story but I feel that It's missing something. 

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Date: June 28 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Yes or No

Good "sex" scene.  I guess you are channeling Arianna  because she has her own issues with sex.  If you do write another scene put some of Ari's own aprehension and insecurity in this and hopefully Colin will be patient and can begin Ari's healing process.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, Arianna and I share some similiarities, but as far as the sex thing.....you'll just have to continue reading to find out if Aria's issues are simply her issues. Not mine.

-Amby

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Date: June 29 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Confessions and Interruptions

So what was Aria's childhood trauma... please tell us soon.

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Date: June 25 2013

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Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Duplicity

Talk about plot twists and cliff hangers.

I would have never guessed any of the new events.

Wow! Keep it coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch! I always knew this was going to be a whopper of revelations towards the end of the story. I'll keep em coming alright, thank you so much for your comments!

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Date: October 26 2013

Title: Duplicity

FANTASTIC CLIFFHANGER!!!

 

All I can say is wow.  I know you have a few chapters left but I want to keep reading this story.

Maybe you'll write Sean's story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know I wanna keep writing this story too, but I feel like every story should have a point where it wraps up so it doesn't drag on and on. While I was writing this last chapter I suddenly got some ideas for some of the other characters in the family. Sooo there's gonna be more of Layla and Sean just like in this one there was more of Jason and Sienna. Stay tuned for the next chapter. :)

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Date: January 19 2014

Title: Duplicity

Wow I'm so glad Sean is on top of his game. 

Layla will come around eventually because she wants to be loves wholly. 

I just hope no one dies at this wedding. 



Author's Response:

Yup Sean is on top of his game.. or so he thinks. Hopefully Layla will come around but she can be stubborn. And I hope no one dies either. :/ You have some premonition thing going? 

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Date: November 26 2013

Title: Duplicity

Oh my, I can't believe their are so many double agents at this party and grandmom waiting for her lover to return.  I can tell the next chapter will have laughs and suspense.



Author's Response:

Lol everyone is a bit suspect at this point huh? Yep next chapter will quite interesting. Loads more to come! 

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Date: July 12 2013

Title: Duplicity

This was a very intense chapter and your descriptions of the foreign land and military are realistic.  I didn't know everyone was going to die.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I did do a bunch of research so I'm so glad you enjoyed. Unfortunarely there really wasn't anyway around what happened to everyone on the farm. Next chapter is a lot more lighthearted. :)

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Date: July 12 2013

Title: Duplicity

Wow!

Cousin Merle is mr smooth.



Author's Response:

Lol He sure is. Even though he probably would get annoyed if someone said that about him. Thanks for commenting and rating. :)

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Date: April 05 2013

Title: Duplicity

Cousin Merle... the hero.

He's finding a fast track to her panties but what about her heart. 



Author's Response:

I think he's in her heart for sure. Normally she wouldn't give guys a second glance. But there's just something about Merle that's gotten under her skin. Thanks for commenting and rating!

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Date: April 05 2013

Title: Duplicity

Simply.... amazing.

I'm glad that they came together and I hope Sean will tell her the truth soon.  The truth will put everyone in danger but I also hope she won't feel betrayed.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comment! Yes hopefully the truth will come out soon... although there's bound to be loads of drama in the meantime. :) Chapter 6 should be up today

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Date: April 11 2013

Title: Duplicity

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting!

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Date: April 16 2013

Title: Duplicity

They are suckers if they believe that scripted story. 

 

And these folks call themselves New Yorkers. 



Author's Response:

Lol I cracked up when I read this. Hey go easy on them. :) Sienna and Jason are desperate to get Sean help because they both feel he needs it. 

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Date: April 21 2013

Title: Duplicity

Well done.



Author's Response:

:) so grateful you guys are into this story.

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Date: February 02 2014

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Summary:

When it Hurts so Bad

 

 

When best childhood friends, Cassandra Bishops and Jae-Hoon Whitaker, share a night of passion, they find that making their new, intimate relationship prosper would prove to be more challenging than they realized. When heart breaking secrets come to light and obstacles arise, will they choose to fight for their love or will they go their separate ways?

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 30419
Read Count: 9388
Published: March 19 2013
Updated: August 11 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Act 1: Ch 13

I don't know how I missed this chapter but I'm glad that Cass is finally admitting that she wants to be with Jae.

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Date: July 11 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Episode 1: Ch 9

wow.. a cliffhanger

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Episode 1: Ch 9

wow.. a cliffhanger

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Episode 1: Ch 8

One man with two baby mamma's.

It can only have a rough ending.

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Episode 1: Ch 5

Ah.... the little siblings you just want to kill them sometimes.



Author's Response:

Ha ha. So true.

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1: Ch 1

good start.

 

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Episode 1: Ch 2

This seems like young complicated love.



Author's Response:

Yes, a little too complicated at times. :)

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Date: May 21 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Episode 1: Ch 3

Jae has some decepion.

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Date: May 21 2013

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