Penname: HumorMe [Contact]

Real name: K Law

Member Since: December 19 2012

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am a lover of fiction, especially when it is written well and the characters behave badly.




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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Cliffhanger much...

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 30 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Me gusta!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 31 2014

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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56980
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Still with it, but ...

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed
Date: August 08 2013

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[Reviews - 353]
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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82571
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

This story is really good my goodness!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  More is coming!

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Date: August 01 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28574
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Bitter Cold...

Is he crazy? Post it woman!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 02 2013

Title: Chapter 11: A Series of Bad Choices...

Wow. Life dealt her an unfair hand. I think they are going to get divorced. First time Jay claimed it made him feel good getting that attention, now he purposefully went looking for it. He stoped talking to his girlfriend for almost a year for her unfaithfulness.  Tess should adopt and divorce him.  I don't know how I would get past the fact that my husband went after someone who wants to ruin my marriage and could have cost me my career from a physical altercation. 

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Date: January 08 2014

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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Man that's understandable but it still hurts. Looking forward to the sequel!!



Author's Response:

Thanks HumorMe!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww I loved this chapter, the way Eshan looks at things is quite beautiful. 

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Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am glad Pearl didn't hit her. The woman deserves the ultimate punishment, being disowned by Eshan. His poor father would be heart broken though. 

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Date: July 03 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40862
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I'm really sorry for your loss. Thank you for continuing to share your talent with the world. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 04 2016

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Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118381
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Wow, your descriptions are amazing. I can feel everything the character feels, it's startling and I wasn't prepared for that. I love the direction your story is heading, I don't feel lost in the plot but I'm unaware enough to still be surprised. Your gifted!!  

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I love this story, it's everything! Well written with humor, just the way I like it!



Author's Response:

Happy to hear it makes you laugh, thanks for your review

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Date: June 18 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Fat Chance

More please, your story is funny and addicting!

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Date: August 07 2014

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 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215324
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 37

Hiram's last line read really wrong, "ashamed of loving you anymore. " I never got the impression that he was ashamed of his love for Camille until that line. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed star
Date: June 25 2015

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Talia Simmons is an intelligent, bright American law student who travels to Cambridge University in order to attain her international law degree. Used to reading cases of others, she soon becomes her own attorney in a case that no one, not even her closest friends saw coming.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7349
Read Count: 4277
Published: October 21 2014
Updated: December 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Firenze

Interesting story

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2014

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Dominic is an asshole!!

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Date: July 03 2015

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Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Omg! You slay me!!!



Author's Response:

*Prances around the house triumphantly while listening to ‘Feeling Myself’ after reading your comment*

Thanks hon.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Poor Dean got the short end of the deal. I do understand why Elle couldn't stay, but she should have tried to contact him. That just leaves a lot of unfinished business between them. I understand his hesitance to continue any type of relationship, but his mind and heart are too caught up. She's interested but isn't quite sure how to act. smh isn't that mess how it always goes?!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Dean did get duped. The situation left a bad taste in their mouths (No pun intended). The next chapter will explore the immediate aftermath of the incident. Lastly, you’re right.  It’s always a merry-go-round of mixed signals and hurt feelings. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

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Date: November 16 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Those shoes are sinful and this story is magically delicious!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, those shoes are everything. So happy you're enjoying it thus far! Thanks for reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

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Date: November 05 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Not going to lie, but Elle deserved some tough love. If Dean didnt stand up to her foolishness from the past, what's to say she won't do it all over again. They are too old to be messing around like that and side stepping important conversations. I'm glad Dean acknowledged the big pink elephant in the room. My what a difference a day makes. You took it difficult moment for both characters and I like that. Sometimes writers keep things going along a plot for a while before they turn the tables, I didn't expect it but it was well planned. Me gusta!!!



Author's Response:

I agree. Stand for nothing, you’ll fall for anything. Right? Out of the two he is the most mature, so him bringing it up was pretty expected. Who knows if Elle ever would lol. Those 24 hours brought on a great deal of change. I’m glad you liked it. Writing about two hurt people is far from easy. Thanks for your encouraging words, reading, and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Not going to lie, but Elle deserved some tough love. If Dean didnt stand up to her foolishness from the past, what's to say she won't do it all over again. They are too old to be messing around like that and side stepping important conversations. I'm glad Dean acknowledged the big pink elephant in the room. My what a difference a day makes. You took it difficult moment for both characters and I like that. Sometimes writers keep things going along a plot for a while before they turn the tables, I didn't expect it but it was well planned. Me gusta!!!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Don't give up on love Dean! I loved it



Author's Response:

I’ll keep your words in mind for the next chapter and Elle’s sake. Thanks for the love, reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow, very unexpected. I identify with Elle and man do I feel sorry for her. 



Author's Response:

I always appreciate your ability to side with Elle. Thanks so much for reading and your refreshing reviews HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Elle is crazy! I loved it. Not sure where the story is going next, which is kind of a nice thing. More please 😃



Author's Response:

She’s a bit loco and I’m glad the unknown is keeping you along for the ride. More is coming soon and thanks for reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2014

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Hmmm, don't like what just happened. I understand it. I just don't like it. Please continue with your creative genius!!! Enjoyed reading it like always. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured reviewers wouldn't be thrilled about it, but I’m glad you get it. That means I wrote the chapter well enough lol. Thanks for supporting my creativity, reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.