Penname: bebe2pink [Contact]

Real name: briona

Member Since: January 17 2013

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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113968
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Red Light

Wow I really do love this..I can't wait for a new up-date

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed
Date: March 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Bastien wasnt expecting her and Cameron never wanted him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5158
Read Count: 9420
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: April 14 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Beginning

I just hope that Cameron can really help Bastien and he can hlep her to...they  can become friends or something more...been waiting forever for you to update.

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Date: April 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Elise Jones was gonna end her life. She was gonna lie in the sand and wait for the tide to drown her. Or that was the plan until she was interrupted by a stranger and called on her BS. Why can't she be left alone in her dramatics?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2313
Read Count: 5285
Published: December 28 2012
Updated: October 12 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I see nothing wrong with her being 18 and him 25. When I was 18 I was talking to a guy who was 23,but I am happy that you did make it three years later.

Love the story.

 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7550
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 First Date

Omg the last line of chapter two had me rolling...I see you Marri!

Hey I'm 19 and my mom is 43, her and my dad are not married anymore and they both date...It's there life not mine. Still love them.

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40308
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Mini-Midgard

I love Loki much... so happy to see this story ..uhg I can't wait for a up :)

 



Author's Response:

Yay, thank you! Next chapter's up now. :D

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chocolate

God do I love this...Loki is just to funny and poor baby...he really needs some good loveing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he has the capability to be a sweetie. It's just hidden DEEP under a lot of pride and arrogance. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Snow

So happy your going to be up dating a-lot...can't wait for the next one. :)



Author's Response:

Me either! The feedback has been helpful. Thank you.

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Granny Smith Apples

LOL Loki getting things for free...He needs to come shopping with me then.

I love the update can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Loki: I do what I want!

Like a Boss. Lol.

More will be comin' your way soooon enough. :D

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Date: April 16 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Just a Taste...

I hope they kiss...let them kiss lol 

I can't wait for a new up date and don't worry I think you are doing really good with this story. :)



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you! 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53960
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

Wow...This was so good and did not see that comeing. I love this and hope you up date soon.

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Date: May 18 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Deception and Lies

And it just keeps getting better...I`m so in love with this story. Good up date now I hope they take that Dog of a man Down.

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Date: May 19 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A Method to the Madness

I don't know but I think Ophelia and Raymond are in love with each other....I feel really bad for Ophelia she really needs to get help....Raymond really has done a number on her. He in her head and I don't think he is going to every really leave her alone.

Bennie is the only grown up in this.....poor boy.



Author's Response:

Alas, you may be right.  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Method to the Madness II

I really don't like how people are talking about Ophelia on here...I don't know why but it's really getting to me (It's like they are judging her, when we don't even know what is going on in this woman's head) I can't .....But I still love your story and your doing a really good job. :)

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Date: June 05 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10984
Read Count: 6913
Published: June 04 2013
Updated: June 14 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I would ask him did he ever take care of that problem....then laugh in his face.

I love the story and I can't wait for the next up date.

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 146]
Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 20054
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Fireworks. Part I

What Monica did was just sad, she did not have to step to her like that I mean really...so uncalled for. I fell like Monica was looking for a fright , you got the man girl so move your ass on and stay out of Sierra face. Your not her friend, you don't like her, so why try and start shit.

 Can Sierra just be happy and have a better life and not have people like Monica and that V guy in it (hell keep Jake away to if that Mo girl going to be with him), I just don't want to see unnecessary people in this girl life. 

and she needs a job or something.

 

 



Author's Response:

Sierra most defintely does need a job, and hopefully that'll give her something in life to focus her energy on. I really do want Sierra happy but no one said it would be easy getting there. Thanks for reading bebe2pink!

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Press Delete.

I want Sierra to make it , I really don't want her to give up, b/c my heart really goes out to her.

I just hope she loves her self enough to do it.

Jake and Monica seem like cool people but I'm just really here for Sierra.

(I just want her to do good) No one deserves that life and I hate to see people talk or think bad about people who have to go through that.

I love your story and can't wait for a update.



Author's Response:

Sierra stealing the show I see, lol! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2013

Title: Chapter 5: One Weary Rode.

I hope Sierra gets a friend, I think she  really is going to need someone when she gets out to be on her side and there for her, because I don't think Jake is really going to do it and I really don't want to see her back to her old ways, if and when she finds out about Jake being with that girl.

and Jake is right she needs to do it for herself. 

(I think she can do it)

good update can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

You're right, Sierra does need a friend. She really has no one to lean other than her aunt who she feels doesn't completely understand her. Thanks for reading bebe2pink! :)

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2013

Title: Chapter 5: One Weary Rode.

Oh yeah and when I say a friend I mean someone who is going to be real with her ( she don't need a man right now ) She got to get it together with herself before going down that road. 



Author's Response:

She most defintely doesn't need a man. But Sierra is just...mmm. [shakes head]

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed
Date: July 10 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Slow Fuse.

I like Deena she is cool, but I think Sierra needs to stay on trying to get her life back when she out. I hope she does the support group thing, she will need it.

 

Sierra does not need to worry about Jake if there meant to be, then it will happen just give it time, and worry about yourself.



Author's Response:

I agree. Sierra needs to be by herself for a minute. Hopefully she'll come to realize that. Thanks for reviewing bebe2pink! 

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Date: July 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

An 19th century medical doctor comes to grip with the love for his nurse.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2287
Read Count: 1945
Published: August 12 2013
Updated: August 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Peach Doctor

ugh how sweet, I love it so much...can't wait for a update :)

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

A race of aliens need females to survive.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8688
Read Count: 11236
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love sci-fy, and I'm so happy about this story....I can not wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the latest chapter. 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Resentment

I saw this and I was like Tom Hiddleston..."yes". It's a good story and can't wait for an update. 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143287
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Can't wait for an New update...Love the story ( I kind of just want her to be with Steve) but thats just me. LOL 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

 

 

This story takes place when Aaliyah Wyndham is a twenty-year-old intern, working in Los Angeles for the summer while staying with family friend, Lucas D'Alessandro. Lucas seems to have gone a little Hollywood since he left South Carolina. It's all about the girls, the cars and the money. How will Aaliyah enjoy living with L-Money?

There there is the mysterious guy she meets while waiting at the airport. She's surprised to find that he isn't some sarcastic jerk after all. He's Fuminori Kawaguchi, someone whose friendship she thought lost to her a long time ago. The two will renew their acquaintance as they bond over the summer, when they're not both working towards their futures.

Their summer romance is complicated by Lucas' overprotective nature, and by his rampant hypocrisy. I mean, how many women will Aaliyah have to watch him turn away at the door before he stops shadowing her on dates? Doesn't he understand that she's all grown up, now, and that she can handle herself?

How will she cope with the unwelcome fame that comes along with being The Next Big Thing's apparent love interest? Will Fumi continue modeling, or will he return to his studies, and pursue the future his family expects of him, the future he's always thought he wanted?

Most of all, what will happen in the future? Is this just a summer romance, or can their hearts stand the test of time and distance? Find out in A Summer Heart.

This story is a free prequel to Amended Hearts, but is a standalone. You do not have to read Amended Hearts to understand this story, but you may want to read it, anyway, to find out what ultimately happens to Aaliyah. It may be published, but will remain free to read in its entirety.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 3863
Read Count: 29193
Published: March 18 2014
Updated: April 12 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Surprises Are Not Always Pleasant

I love the story can't wait for an Update :)



Author's Response:

You'll get one, this weekend.

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

In 69 B.C  Gaius Julius Caesar, a loyal general of Rome and protector of his people, fell in love. It was not the love of his beautiful wife, Cornelia, nor was it the love of his promise to Rome, but of a simple slave girl who possessed his heart at the age of thirty-one, while she was seventeen. Her name was Nona, and this is their tale before her heart was captured by another and before the ides of March.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Historical
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29023
Read Count: 14136
Published: March 23 2014
Updated: March 25 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love this...I hope you keep going :-) 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.