Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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On Hiatus: No

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Wolf Highway by Acdromance
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14246
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it, he's cute and funny.

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Date: July 29 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lol,  funny and cute. Love it

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Date: July 29 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it, they are a cute couple and she doesn't take his crap.

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Date: July 30 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

lol

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Date: August 07 2013
What Meets the Eye by EveryBit12
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Roddrick Kennedy likes to think that a strong dose of worrying is good for her health, and keeps her in control of her life. When she finds herself taking on everyone and their problems, she sees that maybe she should turn her attention to herself every once in a while. When Milo Vitale comes along to teach her how life can be stress free, she discovers herself in for a whirlwind of change as he helps to flip everything upside down.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 58790
Read Count: 46659
Published: July 23 2013
Updated: February 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well his having sex with Alex is going to bite him in the ass in the future. Yeah, she's pregnant she didn't do the test correctly probably ran water under it. Also, I think it is best for her to move out. They will get along better. Her sister has a big mouth erghhhhh

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Date: October 10 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow,  that really sucked...Milo I don't know if he was just plain dumb to try and calm Alex down or just very young and needs to grow up or man up.  Either way how does Rod forgive something like what he said. My thought was sure he was trying to calm the situation but the words he said to her was making it hard for him to later get out of.  Don't really feel sorry for him. He had to know what was up by how she was all over him.  What is was amused by is how Alex considered her a non factor because of her race. lol Always happens

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Date: October 03 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

umm humm I think I like him :)

I hope she gives him a chance.

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Welcome back,  great update. Missed Milo in it though think I like him.

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Date: September 21 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This chapter= priceless.  She moves out and next door to him. lol, can't wait until she finds that out.

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Date: October 21 2013
Nikoli by Beastlover 18
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15551
Read Count: 72263
Published: August 04 2013
Updated: October 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Love the fact you showed how they originally meet,  can't wait to find out more.

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Date: August 06 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Maybe I missed something in all of the  flash backs but I hope she leaves him for a while he doesn't appreciate what he has with her..

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Date: August 21 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I like it but confused,  great start though.

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Date: August 05 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

cute,

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Date: August 10 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Excellent

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Date: August 08 2013
Adonis by Beastlover 18
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

He was exactly the way she designed him...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 4747
Read Count: 24142
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Cute, different.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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Date: September 03 2013
Retired
Betterment and Betrayal by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

okay,  so I'm happy that she is happy with her night talks but did she not listen when he said that he would do basically what his family wants.  This is heartache waiting to happen.  His family is never going to accept her :-(



Author's Response:

Eshan's confession about the importance of his family's approval was an addendum or an explanation to what Joss already knew rather than a revelation.  They entered into the relationship aware that it could only go so far.  Be it lack of experience with love or just being foolhardy, they thought it was worth exploring and something they were capable of later abandoning.  Poor babies.  They'll learn soon enough.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: October 10 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wow, well I am happy for her right now however,  I think the roommate is going to find out. I would have just shut up about Chris. she isn't listening so stop trying.



Author's Response:

I agree.  Hirah is a lost cause.  Joss seemed to think that by telling Hirah Chris basically assaulted her twice, with Eshan witnessing the last incident, she might finally get it.  But this is Hirah we're talking about. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: October 13 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think he might just surprise everyone and go against his family and be with her. I didn't think so at first but I think he is becoming more attached to her every day.  Emotional attachments are harder to get over then just a sexual relationship.  excellent update. Thanks Alison



Author's Response:

I agree.  Eshan is becoming more attached, and those emotional bonds will be a lot harder to break when the time comes.  Then again, you could be right and there is no break; he might surprise everyone and choose Joss.  We'll see soon enough.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Alison!

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Date: October 11 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

umm.. I don't know if that was smart to not tell him what his cousin did that might come back and bite her later.  Wonderful update.



Author's Response:

You might be right about Joss's decision to withhold info on Sahirah's betrayal coming back to bite her.  She did it because she knows that if Eshan finds out Hirah's been seeing Chris, Eshan will tell Hirah's parents and both of them will be forced to leave.  We'll soon see what that omission costs Joss.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: October 14 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Didn't expect that, LOVED IT! great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks Lil Sunseeker!

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Date: September 13 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like her but he's a turn off..



Author's Response:

Thanks Lil Sunseeker!

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Date: September 13 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That's a dumb plan..



Author's Response:

I don't know of which plan you speak.  But thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: September 13 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Kind of sad, I hope he isn't promised to marry someone else.



Author's Response:

We'll see soon enough.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: September 28 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I knew Chris was a creep,  I hope Eshan steps up.  I think it's great that she did not tell her roommate he understands English wonderful update.



Author's Response:

Thanks LilSunseeker!  The secret of Eshan's English-speaking abilities is safe for now.  We'll see how long that lasts.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: September 24 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great story, I'm glad she gave him up because if she didn't he wouldn't have been able to be sure as he is now about her.

Thanks

Alison

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Alison!

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Date: October 17 2013

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