Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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On Hiatus: No

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Betterment and Betrayal by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

where does one start..

On one hand I feel sorry for her because if he isn't strong enough to go against his family she is going to be so hurt and it will take a LONG time to get over him.

I am so glad that her mother made this happen for her I think that was so sweet of her mother.

I do agree with her mother though..if it isn't going to be long term get out now. It will be easier to get over later. Experience unfortunately has taught me that the longer you drag things out the longer and harder it is for you to get over him :(

On a another note, girl you almost gave me heart problems I saw the update and got so excited! lol, thanks again Alison

 



Author's Response:

I absolutely agree about how dragging a relationship out makes it harder to get over the person.  We both have experience that poor Joss lacks.  We'll see if she joins the club soon.  Update posted.  And don't go having no health problems on my account; at least not until the new insurance plan kicks in.  : )  So glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Alison!

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Date: October 15 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow, I'd kick that bitch out.. can I say that here??! Maybe that would be mean of me and I would regret it later but she would not spend more then 3 nights in my place. Enough time to find a hotel.



Author's Response:

Lol.  I think "bitch" is allowed.  If not, see you in the principal's office.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Alison!

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Date: October 17 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Something has to give...

I think she should leave the bed where he moved it because if she doesn't then Sahirah will know he moved it.

Maybe she should stay at her mothers house while Sahirah's family is in town that can't be comfortable to be there when they come.

About him... well she's going to have to decide what's best for her.  Living like this or trying to move on.

Don't know if I fully agree with her mothers statement though..she is right and kinda wrong.



Author's Response:

For the time being, the bed will stay where it is.  Sleeping arrangements willl be sorted out as the story progresses.  Joss unfortunately has bigger fish to fry.  The wisdom of her mother's words, or lack thereof, will be revealed later.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: October 02 2013
Alaia and Oliver by xbelivex
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Who knew the boy with the big dreams and kind smile would be her undoing. She may have fallen in love, but he fell along with her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4234
Read Count: 7642
Published: October 20 2013
Updated: December 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Getting to Know the Band

So is he a player? Great start I hope you continue.

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Date: October 27 2013
Gandy's Glory by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

He's the world's most famous supermodel.

She's the church singer whose hypocritical lifestyle has been unveiled by one simple picture with him.

 

A story of redemption, love and family.  

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 26153
Read Count: 31587
Published: October 22 2013
Updated: October 24 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Burning the Mask

I hope she meets him, why not dragon momma already made her feel like crap. Don't know if I like her mom....great story

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Date: October 23 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Cambridge

I'm so glad you didn't make so wait for that answer. To be honest I saw this story when you started I couldn't at first get into it. I liked the idea but just didn't feel the first few chapters I'm glad I gave it another shot. Great story, I personally like David and I think he's trying she should give him a chance also I hope he sees his brother for the jealous person he is.
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Date: October 25 2014
Tess and Jay by BCLover6
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Tess is a sucessful accountant on the fast track to being a firm partner. Unfortunately she is lacking in the love department, Jay is a co-worker and good friend who is ready and willing to help her with this deficiency. But is Tess really over her ex-boyfriend Eric? Unfortunately for Tess, realtionships can not fit neatly on a spreadsheet.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 49338
Read Count: 24739
Published: October 24 2013
Updated: November 27 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: We All Scream For Ice Cream...

I hope she doesn't make him feel uncomfortable. Great start.

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Date: October 26 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Bold decisions...

I think he is cute,  a little clueless but cute.

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Date: October 25 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Old Habits Die Hard in Glistening Darkness...

Eric is going to tell Jay so she needs to first, also I hope Jay is looking for another job. Long term that working situation is not going to work. by the way she just screwed up MAJOR. Why does she keep letting him in her house.  Jay can't fight all her battles for her, I thought she could do better :-(Thanks for the quick update.

 

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Date: October 27 2013
Title: Chapter 11: The Ups of Downs…

I'm glad Tess and Jay made up and she was just putting on an act in front of Jay since she couldn't really be mad with him, that was the only thing that made me surprised about the last chapter but you explained it well. Great story

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Date: November 15 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Girl Talk...

Eric is going to be a problem...

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Date: October 27 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Changes, Honesty, and Tears…

Nice story, she should have forgiven him he wasn't the one that cheated. ..who is to say how long if ever it takes someone to get over being lied to and cheated on. thank you great story

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Date: November 11 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Stopped in His Tracks...

 

wow a month has gone by and she STILL hasn't told him....she is just like Eric maybe she should stay with him. I actually agree with Eric he was 100% right about what he said to her.  How is she better or doing something different than what he did to her.

 

I don't

feel sorry for her during her yell at Eric. 

She should feel some of that outrage for what Jay is going to feel when he finds out.  I

  don't think she is really into Jay as much as he is into her, if she was she would tell him and be more hurt about what she is doing to him not what Eric is doing to her.    Jay does't deserve this....urghhhhhhh

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: October 30 2013
Title: Chapter 9: No More Mr. Nice Jay….

I agree and feel sorry for Jay there is nothing worse than a cheater that makes excuses. admit you messed up and take responsibility for it. put on your big girl panties.  I wanted to cry when he started crying.  Long term he will probably forgive her we all do, I just know experience wise that not always does the cheater stay away from the person if they have history and emotional baggage very hard. Jay is in a hard spot. I still don't feel sorry for her. glad you wrote it from his point of view. excellent job.  Thanks

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Date: November 04 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Comes to the light…Comes to the light…Everything...

What is sad to me is she had sex again with Jay without telling him. I think when he starts thinking about everything that is going to piss him off more.  Sorry I don't feel sorry for her she treated him just like she was treated by Eric.  Her friend was right it was nasty and wrong.  What shows me she doesn't understand what she did is she thought what Eric said was wrong but he was right. Jay shouldn't forgive her anytime soon if at all. How can he trust that she will not do it EVERY time Eric comes near her.

 

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Date: November 03 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Little Does He Know....

oh man... I would feel sorry for her if she didn't make that dumb move.

I agree with another reviewer a good man will not accept her having sex with her ex. I'm a woman and I wouldn't.

I think she should have told him when she had a chance to..Eric WILL tell him, it's just a matter of time. Eric is aggressive and doesn't have much respect for Jay so he will love to point out what he thinks and that is he has more money and he just had sex with her. 

It is an accident waiting to happen, she needs to woman up and tell him. Hopefully with time he will forgive her. momma mia..

Great story. :)

 

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Date: October 28 2013
A New Home by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72035
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015

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Title: Chapter 17: In Ten

Great update, thanks

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Date: August 31 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Routine

I normally don't read things unless they have regular postings I noticed you have several. I am glad I started great start, love it. Thanks

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Date: August 17 2014
Title: Chapter 18: E-mails

I'm confused didn't they both promise no secrets? Or something like that.

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Date: September 17 2014
The Undeniable Tiger by Beastlover 18
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Will she be able to accept his destiny? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 21775
Read Count: 15062
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: January 21 2014

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Lol/ loved that chapter.  excellent,  the father is actually cute.

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Date: January 22 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

She was rude but confused how he got to his statement.

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Date: January 05 2014
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I like him,  love when she changed what he said to she needs to lose weight. Classic woman thoughts

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Date: January 05 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Great chapter, I like him. 

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Date: January 05 2014
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Love this story. I like both of their personalities especially how they are honest with each other how they feel.

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Date: January 12 2014
Retired
Thawing His Heart (formerly titled The Assistant) by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*

 

Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 28046
Read Count: 54399
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: December 24 2015

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Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She worries too much about others opinions and tells her coworkers to many details.

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Date: December 24 2015

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