Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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On Hiatus: No

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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*

 

Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 28046
Read Count: 54399
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: December 24 2015


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like the story but find her childish why does she HAVE to tell Oliver everything. He is just someone she works with no real outside connection. Why the telling of every detail of what's going on with her. He I noticed doesn't do the same, I hope she works on that.

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Date: December 14 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I actually like him..

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Date: December 30 2014

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I like Rich, great story. Thank you

Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: September 19 2015

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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: A Place Called Home

That must have been hard for her.

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Date: January 05 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wonder why he didn't think the younger boy was Hudson son. I'm glad....

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Date: April 13 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Nice, thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: April 11 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Nice love the adjustments, welcome back.

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Date: April 09 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Who is the baby daddy. ....

Author's Response:

It's coming! :D

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Date: April 09 2016

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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34241
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I love your writing however her lying and avoiding her father...when is she going to address that. The morning of the wedding :-(

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I thought Griff was smarter and quicker then that last chapter. ..disappointed in him. :-(

Author's Response:

There's definitely some roadblocks along the way. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad to see you along again for ths one lilsunseeker :-)

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Date: December 18 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

You write them as such a great couple, I hope going through his first year as a pro doesn't break them apart.

Great update, thanks

Alison

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Date: December 20 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

A few things first of all I understand why she's upset about him not telling her about the prenup. However even before reading that part I'm disappointed in her she is sounding very needy I hoped she would have been stronger in some ways. She knew what she was getting into with a man with a job like that and looks like that. She has to TRY to get over this with her dad. She's not trying how is she going to move past it urghhhhhh. Love the update. Alison

Author's Response:

Thanks! And yes issues with papa need to be addressed for sure. We'll see what happens by the end! Thanks for stopping by Ms. Alison :D

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Date: January 20 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Wow, he believed that shit she said.

I don't know if that was impressive acting or he is just oblivious to everything going on around him. I gave him more credit for being aware of people and things.

It is sad that he doesn't know there is something wrong :-(

Alison

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Date: January 21 2015

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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83552
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

Well....she's kinda clueless.

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Six

Welcome back

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Date: September 08 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Seven

It was dumb of her but she had to try, I guess.

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Date: December 05 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Eight

I hope he turns around and leaves her right there.

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Date: December 06 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Nine

Wow, if she ever forgives that she's a MUCH better woman than I am.

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Date: December 07 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

I now like him :-)
Great update...

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Date: February 11 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen

Lol, yes you're making him more human and likable. Good job, thanks

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

I didn't like him after the basement event but I'm beginning to think he's not that bad.

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Date: July 09 2015

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Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26192
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Quen is an idiot she's going to get hurt, he's in love with Kerri but doesn't or can't handle her strong personality.

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Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hope she gives him a chance and forgets about Mark, but I'm sure he's going to cause problems. What a hater...urghhhhhh

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Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lol, Black Friday! That was funny

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Date: April 14 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Mark is an idiot

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Date: April 14 2014

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