Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

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Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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[Reviews - 359]
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Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65031
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Sad...but good

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Date: May 18 2014

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"Sex isn't good unless it means something. It doesn't necessarily need to mean "love" and it doesn't necessarily need to happen in a relationship, but it does need to mean intimacy and connection...There exists a very fine line between being sexually liberated and being sexually used."

    ---Laura Sessions

       The Family is a close knit group...Some may even consider it a cult. Its members unsuspectingly dedicate their entire beings to being one. They live a life under constant surveillence to ensure that they follow procedure and never break away from the group. To do so is unheard of and the consequences that follow are never questioned.

     Blaise Kincaid is a man who has grown up seeing the same faces of The Family without knowing their true intent. The time has come for their major plan to be put into motion, and Blaise has finally entered the stage in his life where they can entrust it to him. Once he enters his father's business, he'll be thrown into the doings of the group. He'll start to see everyone he has known all his life in a dfferent life...Even hisself.

     A young woman will entice Blaise and bring a new element to his life. She has admired a figurehead of The Family for as long as she can remember. When she gets a call telling of her life's dream becoming reality to work side by side with him, her only thoughts are to fufill herself and give her family a stable life that is well deserved.

     When these two meet, they ask nothing more than the physical from each other. They hope to provide an aspect to life that neither Blaise or Niamh have ever felt. What it is, they don't know.

     Once they start to realize it, The Family will war with their feelings, determined to never let it rise to its full potential and interrupt their agenda.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79375
Read Count: 168292
Published: October 20 2011
Updated: August 17 2012


Title: Chapter 32: For Nikki

Excellent,

I feel sorry for Blaise...

 

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Date: February 24 2013

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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104078
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29

Poor Jason

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Date: December 22 2013

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

Excellent update,  I understand why he looked into her background.  At the time he didn't know her and was trying to find out what was going on.  Devyn at core has to understand that.  Why he didn't tell her well at what point does he when he was trying to get her to even date him. I feel sorry for Jason :-(

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Date: November 06 2013

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26

Please don't make Christopher forgive her.I think Jason is right, he checked on her before they were a couple you can't blame him look at what was going on.  She didn't really give him a chance.  Great update.

 

 

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Date: September 29 2013

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

Cute couple,  I like how she is strong but yet can compromise.  excellent job thank you

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Date: July 07 2013

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30

Love how you finished it, thanks

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Date: January 09 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25

damn...

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Date: September 03 2013

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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Taught to see the worst in people so he lived life semi- emotionless, that is until he met her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1643
Read Count: 10511
Published: December 26 2011
Updated: August 23 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed
Date: August 24 2015

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Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24538
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Three

Excellent

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Date: April 05 2016

Title: Chapter 1: One

I like him...

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Date: April 05 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Four

Excellent

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Date: May 06 2016

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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90701
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 13: Rule #10: No More Games

At first I liked her, I even understood why she was writing the story.  Then I became frustrated with her because she was listening to her stupid friend.  Now I think she wanted the story to be sent why else would you leave it there with the person that you know wants it sent.  I think I'm done with the story.  Thanks it was a well written story but come on no one can be that can't think of a word to describe her.

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Date: September 27 2013

Title: Chapter 9: “What are you trying to hide?”

I love this story... I am starting to feel that she's totally screwed and should come clean.

Forget the story it's not worth it, she will feel like crap and he seems to really care about her.

Excellent.

 

 

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Date: April 10 2013

Title: Chapter 10: “Did you just say pussy?”

I like this story however, I hope she stops listening to Cecila. When is she going to tell him..

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Date: May 12 2013

Title: Chapter 11: “I can’t play this game anymore.”

Thank you for the update.  But she needs to start thinking for herself and stop listening to her friend.  He is the only one that has supported her and believed in her. she can now make money modeling and also write. If she really cared about him she would woman up and tell him but not do it. He has been good to her he doesn't deserve to be embarrassed by the story in the magazine.  Or if she does write something change it to talk about what an idiot SHE was to date someone who she really didn't like at first. Please don't embarrass him with the public. She's better then that. Love the update made me sad for him though..He is not going to have faith in anyone if she writes it as they originally asked. She can write something just not that.

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Date: August 04 2013

Title: Chapter 12: “I knew there was something off about you."

she needs to come clean, acting dumb now.

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Date: September 11 2013

Title: Chapter 15: "Are hose and garter your normal Friday night get-up?”

That was sad....not that I blame him for being mad.

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Date: May 14 2014

Title: Chapter 17: “I just want you to be happy Adam.”

Cute, understand why he didn't immediately forgive her. Great story. Thank you

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Date: May 18 2014

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78021
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 10: {Ten}

I just loved the fight scene when he walked in the door, excellent. It was HOT..

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Date: October 25 2013

Title: Chapter 9: {Nine}

Loved the update, missed the story. Welcome back. :)

BTW - Loved how Greta handled the mom. lol

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Date: October 21 2013

Title: Chapter 12: {Twelve}

Thanks for the update

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Date: April 06 2014

Title: Chapter 11: {Eleven}

Loved it! Great chapter

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Date: April 02 2014

Title: Chapter 6: {Six}

Love it, you feel her pain and also know that he (Will) cares about her. Very good. Thanks for sharing.

 

Alison

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Date: January 30 2013

Title: Chapter 8: {Eight}

Great update, I missed this story. I hope he finds out about Nathan THAT makes me more mad then anything else.

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Date: August 08 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.