Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

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Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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[Reviews - 164]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54498
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

The wolf aspect was not we expected.

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Okay, so I re read this he's going to regret that...

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Date: August 10 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Feel sorry for Charlie hope Reese is strong enough for both of them.

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Date: August 10 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Excellent update, I'm proud of Charlie

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Date: September 16 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

I feel sorry for him:-(
However, I wouldn't give her an ENTIRE day to think about it...that's asking for trouble.

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Date: November 26 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

I like him...that was the right and sweet thing to do. It was also very mature of her to apologize and makeup with him. Great update. Thanks

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Date: November 29 2014

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Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118384
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Great chapter

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Date: July 28 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

At least he is willing to try and help her, I hope she want and accepts the help. She should consider what her parents would want.

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Date: July 28 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I think she should call Matt, if she really wants to have a relationship with him what EVERY YEAR she's going to hide out from him?! Come on give the man a chance and a little credit. Also I love how you make him able to read around her crap. Excellent!!!

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Date: July 20 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Yes, I like him....

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Date: June 30 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Lol, she's funny....

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Date: June 30 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh...I like him :)

Author's Response:

Me too ;)

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Date: June 30 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Okay, so I never leave feedback about how the author decides to write someones character I feel that's how you see that person. However this time I really felt the need to make a remark. I'm confused and disappointed that Matt became so WEAK at the first sign of no perfection from her. I gave him more credit for that especially with everything else that has happened. I still like her less Dante is a wimp in my opinion that poor excuse and lie to the aunt didn't do it for me. But truly I'm surprised and disappointed by how it sounds Matt is going to act. Can't anyone in any of these stories care and be there even in hard times??? Its not to much to ask for I know men in real life that do it. Okay, getting off my soapbox. :-)

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Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Good for him, hell every YEAR is he supposed to just let her do this crap?!?!

She's not very likable right now, you mean to tell me that her friends haven't helped her stop doing this because she blames herself for something that happened when she was SIX?

What kind of friends are those...Matt is doing the right thing some tough love.

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Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

So why did he have to apologize??? I still don't understand her. He treats her well he tries and she is acting like a brat. Sure he's bossy but not so bad where she can't work with him on that. I bet Donte now tries something with now that she has a man! Urghhhhhh. I still say that she needs to grow up and think about how her parents would want her to remember them, I'm sure not killing her liver.

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Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

She's an idiot, I agree with him real friends year after year would not agree to you doing that to yourself. What would her parents feel about her doing that

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Date: July 21 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I really hope she feels that she can take control of her life after this year. I'm sorry her parents aren't there but its not healthy to be drunk and stoned for an entire WEEK. seriously....
Excellent writing btw

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Date: July 21 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

She's an idiot, understand she's upset this time of year but come on. Would her parents want her to act like this year after year after year that's not healthy. Her friends aren't helping her by doing that either.
Don't know what he was thinking to bring his friends that wasn't quite the best idea I've heard from him. Still like him and think she should try to make it work more with him. Dante is starting to turn me off...

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Date: July 20 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I really hope that she tells what's going and she has more faith in him and her. She was so strong at first...

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Date: July 13 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

So glad she mentioned it...

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Date: July 13 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I'm so proud of him, he knows what he wants and isn't afraid to let others know it. Its refreshing to read a story where there are differences but the lead male is standing strong. I HOPE she doesn't follow other stories where she let's others tell her its wrong to be with him. As long as he treats her well why give him up, she should remember life is short and not guaranteed... Great job!

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Date: July 13 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Love the fact you didn't make Matt into someone that easily gives up. Also, liked the fact that Madi APPEARS ready to seek help. It was brilliant how he asked her to do it. She knew he doesn't ask for much and right now he's only asking that she try and that's not so bad. Love it.

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Date: July 29 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I understand her concerns she's right but so is he...hard call. Excellent chapter!
I keep forgetting this isn't real life.

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Date: August 04 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I am so proud of her, made me smile :-)

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Date: August 04 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Good for her, she is a strong woman why is she letting his family tell her what is good for their relationship

Author's Response:

Very good point!

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Date: June 30 2014

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