Penname: lilsunseeker [Contact]

Real name: Alison

Member Since: January 18 2013

Membership status: Member

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Single, Professional, Black woman, live in South Florida no children 34.



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[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118384
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

Loved that their talking out things. On a separate note, I like the fact that you don't make your story where one is holding out stuff on the other. If they have an issue they talk about it. I don't think in every story do you have to make them hide things, you just proved that. Excellent writing. Thanks

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Date: August 10 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

*sigh* poor Matt has never met a black american southern older woman. I hope for him she can be charmed or at least he should show her he's not going anywhere so she better accept it and move on.

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Date: August 10 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

You're an excellent writer, I love how you have her and his personality's. Just wonderful funny and entertaining. Thanks

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Date: August 15 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I hope she doesn't back down to her family...he is good for her and if her aunt is honest she will accept that. Hopefully Matt will not let her family scare him off. Great update, thanks

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Date: August 15 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I'm proud that she stood up for Matt but she should out on her big girl panties and tell her aunt why Matt isn't spending the night. Love this couple poor Matt really tries...

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Date: August 17 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

It was a nice thought, quick thinking for Madi :-)

I bet the other dragon that is due will attack Matt, I think it will be funny because aunt Cleo and Matt I believe will stick together against outsiders.

Love it

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Date: August 17 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Lovely, however the drama hasnt finished yet. Wait til they return to the UK. His family is going to have a fit, I can't wait...love it.

Alison

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Date: August 28 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Lol, love your writing style. I'm proud of Madi that she told him what was said. I don't know why some writers make extra drama between the leads with misunderstanding. Excellent update and communication.

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Date: September 08 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I hope Matt's mom gets caught trying something, I think it will be an important wakeup call to Matt. He will have to see and accept the fact that not everyone will accept their relationship. I just hope he catches her after she fake acts nice to Madi...

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Date: September 08 2014

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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43966
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I hate when I read stuff like what just happened at the end, he goes in and just gives up. Its so typical and disappointing can't anyone take a chance?

Author's Response:

It's all part of a bigger Plan that he has. So much has time has passed. I think he wants to get her to trust him again. At least that's what he's telling me right now. LOL!! But who knows what will be going through his head tomorrow.

Thanks for reading. I hope the next chapter is better for you. Keep me informed on your thoughts. I really appreciate them. They are helping me become a better writer.

Yevette

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Date: July 18 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow....love it

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Date: June 30 2014

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I didn't start this earlier but I'm glad I did now. Great...love it.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did too : )  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lilsunseeker!

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Date: January 21 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Excellent, love that Mia parents are using Larry's money to get back at Shauna. Priceless! !!

Author's Response:

Thanks Lilsunseeker!  Glad you liked it.

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Date: January 28 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really like Carter or whatever his name is :o

Author's Response:

Me too : )  Thanks Lilsunseeker!

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Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

(d) You should just go with what you feel, great update!

Author's Response:

Got it!  Thanks Lilsunseeker!

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Date: February 01 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 148]
Summary:

   In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.


   Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.

   Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.

   War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.


WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 49658
Read Count: 34601
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: October 15 2014


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, so Sap is going to get a beat down by Kira I can't wait!

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Excellent job

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Urghhhhhh, no more chapters!!!!

Author's Response:

Ill try!

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lol, love her!

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start don't know why I waited so long to begin!

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Two thumbs up

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 UPDATEEE

I hope they get a few weeks of peace in the palace before her people attack...I also hope she makes the right choice when it goes down.

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Date: September 12 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Excellent story, I just hope she doesn't disappoint him. He's tried so many ways with her she needs to show him something now.

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Date: October 20 2014

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Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57825
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

You are an excellent writer but he's a creep but each person likes different things. That crap I couldn't live with.

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Date: July 10 2014

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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111874
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 8: Compromise

My first comment, I don't like her remotely. ...

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Date: October 02 2014

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